Hey ya'll!!! This is my first story on here, and I'm a new writer!!! So I'm going to give you an idea of what the story is that I'm going to write and I hope that you like what I give you.. So here we go...
Chantal(20 yrs. old) is going back to Virginia to visit after moving to Illinois 3 and a half years ago to live with her mother. Her and Chris were the best of friends until she moved, and they haven't heard anything from each other since. She sees him all the time in the magazines, on TV or hears him on the radio. She's happy that he's made it big in the industry and only wishes him the best. She's only going back because she has something to tell Chris that might change his life forever...
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Chantal sat back in the taxi with her boyfriend of two years Evan and her 2 and half year old dauaghter Tatiana. Evan grabbed her hand and squeezed it. She looked over at him and smiled.
"Are you nervous ma?"
"A little--I haven't seen my father or my friends for over 3 years. I feel a little guilty for not staying in touch with everyone."
"Don't worry baby, you got me."
"Thanks boo," she leaned over and pecked him on the lips. She looked down at her little girl who was sitting between them. "Are you ready to meet grandaddy?"
Tatiana nodded enthusiastically, and Chantal smiled. The taxi slowed down as they pulled up to her father's house. Evan looked at his girlfrined.
"Are you ready?"
"More than I'll ever be." Chantal looked at her old childhood home and took a deep breath. She opened the car door and got out.
(Run it or Dump it???)
Comments
at the moment...
I'm done with this story...
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New ♥
so your done with this storii???
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~Detroits Girly Chica~
Okay, fine with me.. lol
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New ♥
If you don't want to, you don't have to. I'd just go read "Never Again" instead. =D
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You need to get like me
Stunting is a habit
Just gotta have it
-Chris Brown, Get Like Me
I know..
I'll try and finish it... =)
Just 4 U...
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New ♥
=( I liked it.
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You need to get like me
Stunting is a habit
Just gotta have it
-Chris Brown, Get Like Me
Cause, I just lost interest with it.. =(
And this was my first story...
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New ♥
Why don't you run this story? Lol
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You need to get like me
Stunting is a habit
Just gotta have it
-Chris Brown, Get Like Me
She was crying from her dad or was he really goin' that hard!?!
Oh well... it was HOT!!
RUN ITT!!
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~Tell Me How I'm Supposed To Breath With No Air~
♥Your soldier♥Your friend♥Or Your Lover♥Girl,I wanna be♥
like i said wild sex run it
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I LOVE♥ ALL MY HATERZ DEY MAKE ME FEEL GREATER.CUZ I KNOW YOU GONE HATE AT SUM POINT OF TIME BUT IM HERE TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU(NO HOMO)CUZ U A HATA
MY NAME IS RAVEN AKA RAE RAE BKA MZ.RAE RAE HELLO~♥~
uh oh...
workin in the studio...its sounds like a good song...
uh oh!!!! sex scene...
and in the bathroom...gotta love it...
RUN IT!!!
i know it's not a lot but it's something...
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A month had past, and I’ve been in the studio working like crazy. It was hard month for me, my father passed away and had to deal with that. Since, I was his only child, he left everything to me. I listened to the play back of Livin’ a Lie. I sat back in the chair with Chris next to me and bobbed the head to the music.
Chris: “I wanna tell the world that your my girl
And that i'm your man, Aw baby”
Me: “And I wanna tell the world that you got me
Why can't we be, Aw baby”
Chris: “I can't put my name on your kiss”
Me: “And I can't speak your name from these lips”
Together: “We froze and nobody knows”
Me: “Have to walk out the room everytime you call”
Chris: “Tellin everybody I ain't seen you in so long”
Me: “It feels like I ain't breathing”
Chris: “This feels worser than cheating”
Together: “Cuz we out here livin' a lie,
Out here livin' a lie,
I'm out here livin' a lie”
Me: “Why what makes you smile seem to make you cry”
Together: “I'm out here livin' a lie,
We out here livin' a lie,”
Chris: “Behind these smiles I'm really hurting”
Together: “Inside-side-side, Inside-side-side,
Inside-side-side, Inside-side-side”
“That’s hot babe—,” he looked at me and smiled.
“Thank you.” I smiled and stopped it. I sat back in my chair, and he grabbed my hand.
“You wanna take a break. It’s been a long day, and you need to rest.”
I yawned and raised my hands above my head. “Yeah, I need a shower.”
“Yeah you do,” I pushed him.
“Shut up,” I leaned over and gave him a peck on the lips. We left the studio and headed back to the Marriott.
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{Chris POV}
I stuck my head into the bathroom, and the shower was running. I came in and closed the door. I stripped out of my clothes and opened the door to the shower. She felt the cool breeze from the door opening and looked back.
“Boy you scared me,” she chuckled softly.
“Sorry babe,” I closed the door and wrapped my arms around her. I kissed her neck, and she moaned softly. She rested her body against mine as I ran my hand between her thighs. She gasped as my fingers stroked between her lips. It’s been a while since we had any, and I knew it was killing us both—but mostly me. I slipped my index finger inside of her, and she moaned. I sucked on her neck as she pressed her body against mine. I pulled away from her and turned her around. She wrapped her arms around me as I kissed her lips. I grabbed her waist and pushed her against the wall. I picked her up, and she wrapped her legs around my waist. I pulled away from her lips, and she stared into my eyes. I looked right through her—she was still hurting after losing her father. The woman that I know is still there, but some of her is missing. I slipped myself inside of her, and she cried loudly. She gripped my back as I pumped in and out of her. I held onto her legs, and she threw her head back. I sucked on her neck and f***ed her against the wall.
“I love you baby,” she moaned.
“I love you too,” I pressed my lips against hers and rested my head against hers. She stared into my eyes and bit her bottom lip. I picked up the pace, and she closed her eyes.
“Oooh God!” She dug her nails into my shoulder blades, and I groaned. “Harder!” She cried as I pounded her walls. She held onto me and bucked her hips against mine. She began to bounce up and down on my d*** as she held onto me. She grinded her hips and gasped.
“f*** baby girl—,” I groaned. I wrapped my arms around her and turned the water off. I need to finish this. I opened the door to the shower and climbed out. I pulled out of her and sat her on the counter in the bathroom. I slammed back into her, and she screamed. She gripped the edge of the sink as I held onto her legs. She threw her head back and brought her body up. She winded her hips and her body was shaking.
“Chrisssss!” Tears were streaming down her cheeks as her orgasm shot through her body. She squeezed the hell out of my d***, and I came. She fell back against the mirror, and I rested my head in her shoulder. She was crying softly, and I looked at her. I wiped her tears away and kissed her gently. “I love you.”
“I love you.”
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
I FINAALY CAUGHT UP AND IM LOVIN IT AND DEY BE HAVIN SUM WILD SEX LOL RUN IT
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I LOVE♥ ALL MY HATERZ DEY MAKE ME FEEL GREATER.CUZ I KNOW YOU GONE HATE AT SUM POINT OF TIME BUT IM HERE TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU(NO HOMO)CUZ U A HATA
MY NAME IS RAVEN AKA RAE RAE BKA MZ.RAE RAE HELLO~♥~
Yay! Run it!
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I have the tendency of getting very physical
So watch your step cause if I do you'll need a miracle
okay.. i'll have a new post up soon..
{stay tuned}
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
its taken me a few days but im a new reader and lovin this storie i feel bad for her i hope she gets through it run it
aww...man run it plzzz
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~Detroits Girly Chica~
awww thats sad...
but they are such a cute family..
RUN IT!!
The last week was a blur for us—well mostly for Chantal. She lost her father to a car accident, and it was his fault. He was drunk, and he wrapped his car around a tree. A horrible way to go out. We were at the funeral in Virginia. Her mom was there, and her dad’s side of the family. She told me that she didn’t know her father’s side that well, and I could definitely tell at the funeral. I guess they didn’t like the idea of her dad getting with her mother, and they were—jealous of Chantal.
She hasn’t been herself lately, especially today. She sat there and stared straight ahead. She was really close to her dad til she moved away. Mom had Jr. in her arms, and Tatiana was sitting next to me. I held onto Chantal’s hand as we sat there at the church. As the pastor talked, the tears started to fall down her cheeks. She dropped her head and cried softly.
I wrapped my arm around her and held her close. Her cries became louder, and I picked her up. I carried her in my arms out of the row and walked down the aisle out of the church. She was an emotional wreck, and I hated seeing her like this. She was hurting, and I was hurting with her too. I walked over to the limo, and the driver opened it. I laid her down in the back, and she curled up in a little ball. I closed the door and ran my hand over my face. I leaned against the limo and shoved my hands in my suit pants pockets. I just want this day to be over.
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We were back at my house after the funeral, and everybody that was there for Chantal came back to the house. Mom and her mom had cooked, and everybody was just talking amongst each other. I had put Jr. in his crib and let him sleep. I kept the speaker on me so I could hear him. I felt a hand on my shoulder and turned around. I smiled softly when I saw her mom.
“Hey baby.” She smiled faintly.
“Hey,” I sighed.
“How is she?”
“Not good, she’s upstairs in our room. I’m gonna go check on her.” She patted my arm and walked away. I walked towards the steps and went up. I walked towards our bedroom and turned the knob. I walked into the bedroom and saw her on the bed. She was curled up with her back towards me. I walked over to the bed and sat down next to her. I looked at her, and she had a pillow close to her chest. I wiped the tears strolling down her cheek and grabbed her hand.
“I just want the pain to go away.” She whispered, and I entwined my fingers with hers. “I miss him so much. I feel like a piece of me is missing.” I didn’t know what to say. I was lost for words at this moment. I bit my bottom lip and looked down. I tried to figure out what to say in my head, and I heard the door open. I looked up and saw Tatiana walking into the room. I smiled softly when I saw our little girl.
“Hey baby.”
“Hi daddy,” she walked over to the bed and up to me. She looked at Chantal and frowned.
“Are you sad mommy?” She pushed a strand of hair out of her face.
Chantal smiled faintly. “Yeah baby, mommy’s sad.”
“I’m sad too, but it’s okay because you have me, daddy and Junior. We still love you mommy.” Chantal slowly sat up and smiled at Tatiana.
“C’mere boo,” she picked her up in her arms and kissed her forehead. “Mommy loves you too.” She held her close and sighed. She looked at me and smiled softly. “I love you.”
“I love you too,” I leaned forward and kissed her softly.
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
That's sad.
RUN ITT!!
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~Tell Me How I'm Supposed To Breath With No Air~
[[My Mind Is Blind At Times I Can't See Anyone But You]]
♥Your soldier♥Your friend♥Or Your Lover♥Girl,I wanna be♥
~~~New Reader~~~ I'm finally caught up with your story, and I LOVE IT, it's super good, run it!
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I have the tendency of getting very physical
So watch your step cause if I do you'll need a miracle
that is so sad!
you need to run this asap!!
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I G0T THEM C0MiN` FROM [WAll TO WAll] JUST TO [TAKE ME DOWN]
Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
damn...
thats sad...
RUN IT!!!
awww thats so sad i almost cried
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Chris Brown's Boo
hey!! here's a new part.. it's short, but it's something..i'll have a new and longer part later!!
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{Chris POV}
I was holding Jr. in my arms watching Chantal in the studio. Tatiana was sitting in Shawn’s lap as she was finishing up with her song. She’s been working for the last week on this album, and I could tell she was getting restless, BUT it didn’t stop her. She kept going to what she heard was perfection. The song ended, and she took off her headphones.
“Did that sound good?” She bit her bottom lip. Shawn hit the button on the panel and nodded.
“Yeah girl—you doin’ it.” She smiled. “C’mon out and take a break.” She walked out and stretched her arms above her head. She walked over to me and gave me a kiss. She looked at Jr. and picked him up.
“Hey boo boo.” She gave him a kiss on his forehead and held him close.
“You wanna hear it?” Shawn looked at her, and she nodded.
“Yeah,” he pushed the playback button.
“I’m a sucka over love, smooth slick talk. Anything he wants, I could provide it. I’m a rider, fulfill your desire. Tell you, baby, what you want? I could be there if you want it,” I looked at her, and she was singing to Jr. I smiled at her. “I could model that if you want, this ain’t for them scary chicks, I handle my business.” She looked down as her phone went off in her pocket. “Hello?” Her smile fell from her face, and I looked up at her. “Are you sure? He is all right?” She handed Jr. to me as she walked out of the studio. Shawn looked at me and shrugged my shoulders. I got up and walked after her. I walked out of the studio and looked to my right. She was crouched down crying. I walked over to her and kneeled in front of her. I touched her arm and frowned.
“Baby—what’s wrong?” She looked at me and sighed.
“My dad died.”
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
omg girl this story is the s***!!
you need to run this ASAP!!
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I G0T THEM C0MiN` FROM [WAll TO WAll] JUST TO [TAKE ME DOWN]
Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
omg girl this story is the s***!!
you need to run this ASAP!!
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I G0T THEM C0MiN` FROM [WAll TO WAll] JUST TO [TAKE ME DOWN]
Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
sorry again..
i'll have the part up later today..
PROMISE!!!
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
its cool
run it
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Chris Brown's Boo
i'll have a post after i get off of work cause i'm still working on it..sorry it's taken forever!!! LOL thanks 4 running my story ya'll!!! and as always, keep running it! : )
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy