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"The One"

Eye's so Heaven-sent,lips so beautiful,
his scent so masklent,
his character is different from anyone else's,
Kisses,they take my breath away,
when he's there,I'm speechless;
I try to speak,but nothing,
my words tanged in thought.
It's as if he has control over me,
but he doesn't, the one I love.

So suave,so sexy,so manly.
Treat's me great, love's me past my pain,
love's so amazing, when he holds me
so gently, so freely.
He's there I feel free,
no worrys,no nothing, just peace.
When you find the one you'll know.
You're gonna feel it.
in your heart, mind, body, and Soul.
You'll know when he's the one.

LiL Angel...
(I got this poem published in a poem book)...

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did u add me 2 your friends?if u did write back please
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i don't have an picture yet but trust me chris brown i will and u will se how sexy i can be!!!! om god chris brown i love u soooooooooooo much oh and my little sister does toooo.

What do you guys think about my poem?

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LiL Angel...

First of all Chris i luv your new video wall to wall. Chris you are so talented and a great singer. I luv a boy who can sing but no one can sing the way you do. I your style because you have that talented voice , sexy body , you can dance very good , and you know how to treat a girl. I luv your eyes they sparkle like the stars in the sky. My cousin and I love you so much. If I was your girlfriend I wil always support your dreams because I know you would support mine. Chris you said your type was smart I got the brains and the beauty. Your sweet eighteen was off the chang! One more the thing Chris why did you celebrate your B-day in July when your B-day is in May. Bye the way can you add me to your friends list because I'm am a cool person to talk to.

Your true fan, Kayla