Lol i will....later

Thanks i do too

Ill write when i feel better but i have been feelin sick for a few weeks and it is startjng to get eorse. So wjen i feel better ill write

~!~Mystery Person~!~
They will never find out. Unless the two idiots saw me. But they didn’t. Ha-ha. I am good.

~!~Trey~!~
We got to the Ralosian Hospital and they took Bean and Chris straight to surgery.
“Who do you think would do this? It had to be someone who knew Illi well.” I said as I paced the floor.
“Hey guys have either of you heard from Harley? I can’t get a hold of her.”
“I couldn’t either when I tried.” Shad said.
“Yeah me neither. Wonder where she is.”

~!~Char~!~
Harlem. She should have been able to feel something wasn’t right. Like I did, I mean she had been friends with Illi a lot longer than I have. That is a bit suspicious….”

Just then the Doctor walked in.

“Doctor Dtuzi? Are they ok? Are they going to make it?” Illi’s mom was sobbing.
“They should make it but they will have to stay here for a while. Whatever was used to shoot them with was powerful stuff. Do either of you have maybe a piece of the bullet? Because we took one out of Chris, but only one was in Illi and she had two bullet holes.”
“Oh! Here! I grabbed it before we left.” I handed the doctor the bullet.
He seized it in his gloved hand, “Hmmm…I’ll get this to Research. Thank you and you may go and see them now.”
Illi’s parents sat back down and Shad turned to me, “Where’d you get that from?”
“I picked it up off the floor before we left. Remember she coughed one up.”
“Oh yeah, what was that stuff?” Shad asked.
“I don’t know, but I know one thing for sure, I’m gonna find who did this and make them pay. Slowly and painfully.” Trey was scary right now. He was calm with a blank expression but his eyes screamed Revenge.
“Trey, are you alright? You’re kind of scaring me.” I said as I took a step back.
“Yeah, I’m fine. I just hate seeing her hurt.” He turned away from us.
I looked at Shad, “He’s scaring me.”
“He’s scared. Nothing is supposed to hurt her and she was just shot down. He doesn’t know what to do.”

*sigh* Damn ILLIII you love getting people killed up in this story don't you! Girl!!!!

That dream was super crazy! Why is someone always after her?! That's crazy!

But you know what, I got work for you girl... you gotta start up with this story again, I did NOT spend three days catching up for you to NOT run it...

So... GET TO WRITING CHICA!!!

p.s did I say I love the story? :-)

alil feedback would be great....

OMG!? PHARRELL'S 1ST?! I THINK I MIGHT FAINT!!!!

omg! make up ur mind! what about pharrell?

hahahaha i didnt think you would remember that! hahaha or maybe it could be the T.I. thing ....hahahah!

becuz out of all the friends u werent there. everyone else but u were there. and u have reason to not like illi.

“I respect that baby.” He kissed me and got off the bed. “But I didn’t know you had that side of you. I liked it though.” He smirked and licked his lips.
“Oh you did, did you?” I smirked and sauntered into the bathroom.
He followed, “Yeah. How could I not? You, no offense, are usually up tight and not like that so that was a treat for me.”
“I’m not up tight!”
“And you’re stubborn.” He shook his head and smiled. “Wanna shower?”
“Hmmm,” I acted like I was thinking, “Nah, I can shower on my own. I ain’t married to you yet Mr. Slick!”
“Damn! I was so close!”

I turned and made my way to the bathroom. I showered and changed and got ready for bed. When I stepped out of the bathroom, Chris was whispering on the phone to someone but when he saw me he quickly ended the call.
“Who was that babe?”
“Trey, telling me about some girl he had met.”
“Oh that’s good. He needs to find him a new girl.”
“Yeah. So did you have fun tonight?”
“It was….eh.”
“Just eh?” His shoulders slumped just a bit.
“Yeah my favorite part was my surprise though.”
“On stage or when you got home?” He smirked.
“Both.” I smirked back.
“Who would have thought you to have a naughty side?! Mmm mmm mmm! I like it!” He rubbed his hands together and walked towards me and pinned me to the wall and started to kiss my neck.
“Baby….” I whispered but he didn’t hear me. “Chris….what’s that sound?”
His head popped up. I knew he could hear it. His heightened senses were to thank for that.
“Stay here.” He pulled something out of the top drawer of the dresser and walked down the stairs.

I heard a bit of a scuffle then what sounded like a muffled gunshot. I screamed as it felt like I had been the one shot. My abdomen was in excruciating pain but at the moment I didn’t care. I had to get to Chris.

“Chris!” I yelled as I ran down the stairs. When I got about halfway down I could see him on the ground in front of the fireplace. “Chris! Are you ok?!” I asked as I made my way over to him and turned him over.
“Illi….watch out….” He tried to move me out of the way but he wasn’t quick enough. The bullets buzzed through the air and caught me, each, between the shoulder blades. I gasped and fell to the ground beside Chris.

“You ruined me. Now I will ruin you.” I heard them c**k the gun but then I heard pounding on the door.

Our assailant fled out the back and just as they were gone Trey, Shad, and Charlie appeared in front of us.

“I told you something wasn’t right! Illi! We’re gonna get you some help, just don’t move.”
“Check,” I coughed up a bullet and damn it burned, “Chris I’m fine.” I tried to sit up but was held back by Shad.
“These aren’t regular bullets Bean. Just relax or you’ll make everything worse.”

Of course that made me panic. I tried to fight Shad, which usually wouldn’t have been hard but it felt as if all my energy and strength had been sucked out of me.
“Tell me Chris is ok. He has to be.” I was in hysterics by now.
“Bean we are taking you to the hospital. You and Chris both.”
“Daddy?”
“Yes honey. We are taking you to the Ralosian doctors to see what kind of bullet this is…now this may hurt a bit but we are right here.” Someone hoisted me in the air. I knew it wasn’t my dad by the smell.
“Trey?”
“Yes Bean, it’s me. Are you ok?”
“I’m….f--”
“Bean?! Bean!? Illiana!” Trey turned to face everyone else. “She’s out. And barely breathing! We have to hurry!”
“Same thing with Chris.”

~!~Charlie~!~
I picked up the bullet off the floor. I don’t know why I did it but I felt we might need it.
“C’mon baby. We gotta hurry.” Shad yelled to me. I wrapped the bullet up and stuffed it into my pocket.
“Coming!” I followed everyone outside and into the portal.

~!~Shad~!~
I hope Illi is ok. I know people don’t like her but I never thought it would get this bad. Not murder. But now I will find who did this. No matter what I have to do. Even it means I have to kill the person who did it. I’ve done it before for Bean and I’ll do it again. No second thoughts.

~!~Trey~!~
I’m going to kill whoever did this. No questions asked.

~!~Mystery Person~!~
They will never find out. Unless the two idiots saw me. But they didn’t. Ha-ha. I am good.

i cant....im stuck

how many ppl want me to finish this?

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