I have chapters pre-written. But I don't have the complete story and this is also my first story so please bare w/me if it's horrible. :] And thanks in advance for those who choose to read my story. Enjoy. :]
oh, and sometimes i might need some help w/where i want the story to go, so, if i need help, i'll ask. Oh, and i want cmnts on how i'm doing, not just runs. thanks guys.
Chapter 1
I was walkin down the street and the last thing i remember was couple bullets bein shot here and there but i didn't care. I laughed a bit, thinkin about what had just happened, hell, i wasn never going to let no man run my life EVER again. After my father, i was done. Sorry, i'm goin a bit fast, let's rewind this, shall we?
Hey, I'm y/n Y/l/n. I currently reside in Chicago and i'm a junior at LTHS, or Lane Tech High School. (yeah, it's a real school, and i'm hopin to get accepted there. :]) I lived in a white neighborhood in the northwest side of Chicago far from my school, but i usually spent my time around downtown or cruisin around Logan Square in my white escalade w/my girls Mia, Kim, and Melody. I lived w/my parents, yes, but they didn't give a shi't whether i was still breathin or not, anyways. Or at least that's what that shi+ seemed like. I never really liked spendin time around my place, i would use every excuse from bad weather, to lyin about afterschool help to get away from home. My girls never understood why, but they had a family that actually loved them, they weren't beat as kids. They didn't have to come home everyday to a drunk dad and a mama that was too scared to do shi't but follow they daddy's orders. No, none of them grew up w/all the s*** talkin they got from their parents. They pops didn't nearly kill they sister while they had to sit there and watch, bawlin their eyes out. Yeah, i have a sister, a brother, too. I was the middle child. My sister currently a senior at northside, her smartass, and my brother a freshman, at my school. Things were so hard growing up. The people i believed loved me most, turned out to be mere strangers to me more and more as i grew older. They were just like people i grew up in the same household with. Nothing more than that. Both my parents beat me. They said it was outta love. What kinda s*** was that, right? They expected me to be happy about it. Whatever, i was fckin done w/that s***. I got fed up, and i didn't wanna take it anymore, so, i resolved it by never stayin around the house. I didn't feel bad for my siblings either, cause they did the same. I came out a new person though, after all the beating and screaming. I barely talk to my folks now, hell, i choose not to. OH, yeah, did i mention, my dad tried to kill me and then done go and apologize like he had no idea what he was doin? Yup, niggah grabbed me by the throat and just kept tightening his grip. I woulda died right there if my niggah Dre hadn't come runnin throughthe door. He knocked the hell outta my father that day and brought my back to my second house, his place. I spent more time at his house than my own, henceforth, my second house. He's my closest nig, i mean, the girls were great and everything but, the guys just don't have as much drama ya know? I was done bein the little priss of a girl gettin fcked over by guys five times a day. I stepped up, i learned how to play the fckin game right, now, i'm the most respected b**** in my school, literally. I could tell a niggah to get on his knees and praise and he would do just that. Dre always laughed at me for that. He got my back and i got his. He was younger than me though, but sho' ain't seem that way. He was like the big brothah i never had, and i loved him for that. I never trusted nobody, except for Dre, Mia, Kim, and Melody. But, shoot, i always had some little doubt in the back of my mind that i shouldn't always trust them, therefore, i had trusted nobody. I mean, I could turn my backs for a second and they could go stab me in my back while i wasn't lookin, i was better off by myself.
Yeah, i lived in a white neighborhood, so i had white friends. Mia and Melody was as white as you could get. Kim, she was somethin different. White girl in black chicks body, i would call her. She was black and philipino(sp?). But she sho' was whitewashed, haha. Her brother was mighty fine too, but that's a whole different story, ;]. Yeahp, and then it comes down to me, i was black nd asian. I wasn't so whitewashed as all my friends, though, but i did have my "preppy moods/days" as Mia would call them. One day, i would be wearin my abercrombie and fitch, ya know, n the next i'd be rockin jordans and a jersey w/a fitted cap. yeah, that's how i was. But, my life wasn't so normal as everyone thought.
run it? or dump it? I know that was really long, but it'll get better later.






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you guys, i overestimated this story and thought it was gonna be a bigger hit then this, so, i don't know if i wanna continue it. in order for me to continue this, i need runs, and two runs after a post just isn't gonna cut it.
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DAMNZ!!!
GETTIN FREAKY IN THE LAUNDRY ROOM!!
SHAME ON CHRIS!!
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Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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Don't leave there!!!
Oooh they bout to get freaky...
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Chapter 49
On our way back to Chris’s house, it had started a light drizzle which eventually led to a heavy thundering that kept coming on and off. By that time, we were a block away from his house and I was already starving. My stomach grumbled plenty enough times on the car ride and just wouldn’t shut up. I threw my hand up to my stomach as it grumbled again.
“I blame you for that!” I screamed at him.
He looked innocently at me, “I’m sorry, it’s not everyday that you can see a famous person.”
“You have that girl’s number, Chris. You’re just too much of a scaredy cat to call her!”
“Am not. I called her before.”
“Once!”
He pulled into the driveway and parked. I ripped off my seatbelt and grabbed the bag from Popeye’s. I swung open the door nearly breaking it off it’s hinges.
“Y/n! My car!” He leaned over to scream at me but I shut the door in his face.
“Hurry up! Where are your keys?!” I twisted the knob and surprisingly, it opened without the keys. I looked up at Chris and he seemed just as shocked.
“Maybe my Ma left it open?” I shrugged and walked in while he locked up. He looked in the rooms and called out,
“Ma, I’m home.”
“Alright, Chris!” a voice replied from somewhere I couldn’t recall.
“Hey Y/n, Let’s go to the kitchen.” Chris called after me. I followed behind him ‘til we reached the kitchen. He pulled out a chair and I sat beside him. His mom came down the stairs. She pulled her jacket off the hanger and pulled it on.
“Chris, I’m going to your Auntie’s place tonight to help her with some things. I’ll be back tomorrow around 4 o’clock or five.”
“Okay Ma, I’ll see you tomorrow. Love you.”
“I love you too baby.” She walked toward him and leaned over to give him a hug. She placed a kiss on his cheek and stood back up.
“Bye Y/n. It was nice to see you again.” She looked at me and gave me a friendly smile.
“You too, Joyce.” I kindly returned the smile and watched her turn to walk out the door. I grabbed for the bag and began taking out the food, handing what was Chris’s to him.
“Let’s eat.” I opened my meal and began downing the chicken strips whole and stuffing my face with the macaroni. I looked up and saw Chris staring at me. I started laughing with a mouth full of food.
“You can start any time.” I laughed and he smiled at me.
“Sure sure. You want anything to drink or will you be done by the time I get them?” He laughed at me and stood up taking steps toward the fridge.
“Do you have pepsi, maybe?”
“Yeah. Hold up.”
He reached into the refrigerator and took two pepsi’s out. He made his way back to the table and gave me mine and we continued to eat. We were silent for a little except for the sounds of us eating and drinking. I stood up to grab myself some napkins.
“Oh, fck.” I quietly said. Chris obviously heard me and turned around to see what had happened. His expression became hysterical when he saw me standing there with pepsi–soaked sweats on.
“Wha– what happened to you?!” He was laughing so much his creamy caramel complexion turned a bright red and I could barely understand him through his laughter. Not very amused, I replied,
“I tripped on your chair when I stood up.” I frowned and looked at my sweats.
“Wanna throw them in the laundry?”
“Please and thank you.” I smiled. He shifted out of his seat and headed to the laundry room to start the machine.
“Y/n,” I heard him say as he was turning the dial on the machine, “I’ll give you a pair of my p–“ I smiled when I saw his reaction as he turned toward the door to see me standing there, already stripped out of my sweats.
“It’s alright. I don’t need pants. I still have my bathing suit on under my clothes and it was getting hot anyways. You don’t mind…”
“Oh, uh, n– no.” Chris’ eyes looked me up and down and a smirk crept on his face.
“What’s wrong Chris? Cat gotcha tongue? Ha, you’ve seen me in my swimsuit before. Why so starstruck now?” I seductively asked him and started walking closer to him as I shut the door on my way in.
“Nah, it just, now, you’re…”
“I’m what, Chris baby?” I bit my lap and batted my eyelashed. I gazed into his deep brown eyes. I rested my hand on his chest while he backed up into the washing machine. He ran his hands down my hips and rested them on my ass.
“Now, you’re alone with me and you are so fcking sexy.” I turned around so my ass was now on his currently rising d***. I took his hand and duided it to my now wet pussy. He turned me around and picked me up by my legs. Chris sat me on top of the dryer as he rubbed my inner thighs and caressed my face. He grabbed my suit bottoms and peeled them off, revealing my very wet and shaven pussy. He pecked my lips and…
run it ya'll. :]
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typing it out now. <3
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
RUN IT!!!!!!!!!!!
the adds caught up to me. sorry i haven't added. i still need to finish writing the chapter.
i'll add as soon as possible.
until then, i'd appreciate more runs. :]
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*New Reader*
Oooowee
I would`ve kicc'd Chris in the ankle LoL
He know he wrong for dat .
Hurr rup & run thiss pleeeeease = )
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Filipino & Blacc
Long Hair dont care
Fresh to death .
Bang that Southside Compton Crip Gang
Ya dig ?
I WOULD'VE LEFT HIZ AZZ!!
RUN IT...
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Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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ME TO MAN SHE TO GOOD
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[i] make [his] body say wee o wee o wee
like a cop car...:]
Wow.
Y/n was ALOT more patient than I would have been.
I woulda straight bounced...
RUN IT!!!
I pushed play on his stereo and a cd he already had in played.
“THIS IS MY JAM, BOY!” I shouted when the first song started. I made Chris roll down all the windows and bump the music really loud. He looked at me like I was crazy, but when a girl hear her jam, she gotta get down. Whether it be in a car or not.
”Baby will you be my, corona and lime. And I will be your, main squeeze. And if your brother don’t like my style, we can take it to the streets, we can take it to the streets.”
I sang along and bounced in my seat like crazy. He looked at me and shook his head. Eventually, he gave in and moved back and forth rapping to Shwayze’s parts. It was my turn to shake my head and laugh. The cars beside us were benefiting from our act, also, but I didn’t really give a damn.
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Chris made a sharp turn into the parking lot of the mall and quickly found a parking spot. He undid his seatbelt and opened his car door in what seemed to be less than a milli-second. He didn’t care to wait for me or check whether I was following behind. He just ran and ran. I ran behind him, but he was too fast for me. As soon as he saw Rihanna, he caught his breath and straightened out his clothes and slowly started to approach her table.
I was a couple steps behind him when I grabbed his arm. “Wait, for, me.” I said, breathing heavily between each word. I bent over and put my hands on my knees to catch a breath.
“Damn. Sorry Y/n. I forgot you were with me.” He rubbed my back and I glared at him.
“Alright, let’s go.”
He immediately paced before me to get to her table.
“Rihanna.” She looked up from her table and smiled.
“Hello Chris.” She laced her fingers together and cracked her knuckles.
“So… You remember me?” His eyes got big and he started cheesin’. I stood beside Chris rolling my eyes.
“Yes. And is this the same girl that made you leave last time?” She pointed at me w/annoyance in her voice.
I looked her in her eyes. “Yeah, it’s me. I have a name, thanks.” I replied.
“Oh, pleasure to meet you.” Her voice drifting off.
“I’m sorry, I can’t say the same about you.” I chuckled a little and turned to Chris. “Alright, Chris. Five minutes is up. We gotta bounce.”
He didn’t take his eyes of five finger forehead. “Hold up, Y/n.” He laid one hand on the table, crossed his leg over the other and smiled down at her.
“It’s okay, Chris. You can go witcha girl. Just call me, okay? We need to hangout or something, very, very soon.”
“Fo’ sho’ ma.”
“Chris –“ He lifted his finger to my face. “Well, excuse me.” I said under my breath.
“I’ll see you later Chris.” She waved and winked at him.
“Bye Rihrih.” He winked back. I grabbed his wrist and dragged him away.
I stopped once we were out of range of the alien girl. “Rihrih?” I questioned with sarcasm in my voice.
He raised his eyebrows and lifted his hands so that his palms were facing upwards. “What?!”
“Nevermind.” I turned and continued walking towards the car.
“Alright.” He continued to walk, dragging his feet.
I pushed open the door and a gust of wind smacked my face. “I say back to your place.”
“So… you do wanna ride.” He showed a toothy smile and winked at me.
“Quiet you.”
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
Chapter 48
I studied the menu and decided on the three piece colonel chicken strips meal. As Chris told the lady working at the cashier counter – whose name seemed to be Lauren – both of our orders I looked down at the counter fiddling with my fingers.
“Side dish, please?” I looked up, distracted. “Pardon me?”
“Your side dishes, please.”
“Oh, sorry.” I took a glimpse at Chris and he seemed to be enjoying this.
“Macaroni & Cheese.” Chris and I said at the same time.
“Here or to go, please?”
“To go, thanks.”
“$10.57, please.”
Chris paid for this meal and we scooted over to wait for our orders. I snorted and pushed up my glasses mimicking ‘Lauren’.
“Side dish, pleaze.” Chris was taken aback because he wasn’t paying much attention to me and then he started laughing.
“$10.57, pleaze.” We quietly made fun of the cashier girl until our orders arrived. Chris looked troubled as we walked back to his car, as if he wanted to ask me something. I slowly trailed behind him while he led the way. I hesitated to open the car door, but slammed it a bit too hard when I sat down, causing Chris to jump.
“Y/n.”
“Yes, Christopher?” He smiled when I said his full name, but his face became serious again when he got back on topic.
“Do you mind if…”
I was getting impatient, “Just say it.”
“If we go to the mall?” He put on his seatbelt and then looked me in the face.
“Depends,” I said, putting on my own belt, “what for?”
His expression looked unsure and he began to talk, “You know a couple months before, when that famous girl came…”
“What famous girl?”
“The one ya’ll said had the alien forehead and the annoying accent that comes from Barbados.”
“ROBYN FENTY?” I said a bit too loud. He wrinkled his nose like he smelled something foul. “My bad.”
“Yes, more known as Rihanna. She’s making another appearance at the mall. And I wanna go see her. Can we go?”
“Abosolutely, n –“
“Just for five minutes, at least. Please, y/n.”
I looked out ahead of me, knowing that if I took one glance at his gorgeous face, I’d give in. “The food is going to get cold.” What a lame excuse, I thought.
“Come on. Please please please.” He begged me. And I knew that I was going to give in sometime.
“You’re starting to sound like that cashier girl.” He chuckled and I started to laugh. Forgetting not to look at him, I turned in his direction and the way he looked just made me want to melt.
“Bu – Fine. Hurry though.” I sighed.
“YES!” He exclaimed and a crooked smile appeared on his face.
I picked at the skin around my index finger. “With her got damn man lookin’ ass.” I said quietly.
He started the car and backed out of our parking spot. “What?”
“Nothing.” I said slowly so it sounded like I split the word into two and smiled at him.
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
KIM BE TRIPPIN!!!
CHRIS KNO HE WANT HER!!!
RUN IT...
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~!*Behind Every Beautiful
Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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RUN IT!!!
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can i have a little more?
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
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Wow, Kim is really insecure...
She needa stop it...
Chris and Y/n know they wanna be together...
Iono why they beatin around the bush...
Lol Chrissy Curfew...
RUN IT!!!
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Lol at chrissy curfew,,
they both know they feelin each other,,, n i hope chris kicks kim 2 the curb,,
RUN IT!!!!!
Chapter 47
“Hey Chris,” I said as I approached his car, “Wait a minute?” He turned his head and smirked when he saw me in my |swimsuit|.
“Wassup ma?”
“Wanna give me a ride?”
“Depends, which ride you talkin ‘bout?”
“Shut up Chris,” I caressed his face & took a glimpse toward Kim’s direction, she was still watching, all eyes on me, “You know which one.” I winked at him and smiled.
“Aight, hop on.” He winked back and opened the door and sat down. I put on my seatbelt but Chris wasn’t moving. I thought this was some joke so I stared out the window for about 5 minutes when we still weren’t moving. I fiddled with my fingers and turned over to Chris. He was staring at me with a smile on his face.
“Hey darling, you might wanna step on the gas.”
“I’m not moving until you tell me why you wanna ride. You got a car.” He smiled his million dollar smile.
“Cause I took the bus down here.”
“What? Why?”
“Cause there’s barely any parking during the summer.”
“Mhm hmm.”
“What? Just go, sweetie. No more questions.”
“Whatever.” Chris stepped on the pedal and we started off. Haha, I always get what I want with Chris. (:
“So what happened back there?”
“Whatta ya mean?”
“I saw the whole, I’m-not-in-love-with-y/n thing. Don’t act stupid Chris.” I laughed at him but he seemed to tense up a bit and he gripped the steering wheel tighter. He must’ve noticed me notice him so he loosened up a bit.
“Oh, that’s just Kim being Kim. Always worrying if she’s the only girl in my life.”
“Is she?”
“Yes. Do you think I’d cheat on her?”
“I mean, you know I’m not that kinda guy, but she is hella insecure. Idk if I can deal with that.”
“Oh, so what’re you gonna do?”
“I don’t know. I need space away from her for a while. Part, flirt around you know.
“Haha, yeah. How about, tomorrow night, let’s go clubbing!”
“Haha, ma you crazy. I didn’t know you knew a joint.”
“Yeah boy! Zero Gravity or Excalibur. Your pick, you up for it? Or is little Kim gonna hold you down.”
“Hell yeah I’m up for it. I’m feelin Zero Gravity.”
“Zero Gravity it is.”
“Aye ma, you hungry?”
“I didn’t bring money with me.”
“It’s on me.”
“Aight, whea you thinkin?”
“Popeyes, Gotta have that chicken.”
“Haha you a fool, Let’s go.”
“Aight, when you gotta be home?”
“No, the question is, when do you gotta be home? You know my mama stll ain’t home so it don’t matta to Mandy. She’s probably out with Dre anyways.”
“Ha, don’t be smart with me. My mama wants me home by 12.”
“See! You do have a curfew!”
“Shut up.”
“Chrissy’s got a curfew.” I began to sing.
“Y/n, quiet! Let’s just get to popeyes, order & go.”
“Whatever Chrissy Curfew.” He looked at me real quick but kept his eyes fixated on the road.
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
Chapter 46
Chris’s POV.
I walked back over to Kim & right away she started interrogating me.
“Why’d you go over there?”
“To tell her they let me out. Why are you always stressin her?”
“Cause, I told you.”
“Told me what?”
“You want her more than you want me!”
“Why am I with you then?!”
“Cause you don’t want to hurt me!” Wow, she really believes this enough to make up a whole story.
“Kim, how many times do I gotta tell you?”
“Obviously more than once. I want you to stop talking to her. And don’t hang out with her. She knows everything before I do. You tell her everything. And who got you that new million dollar lookin’ chain in your bag? Cause I sure as hell didn’t. You know Chris, sometimes I think you’re cheat –“
“You wanna know where I got that chain?” I said, cutting her off, “She got it for me as an early b-day present. Not cause she was awarding me to be her fck buddy. Got that? Now can we drop the subject? I hate talking to you when all you talk about is Y/n y/n y/n.” She looked me in the eye, more furious then sad. I didn’t even care that she was pissed off.
“NO WE CAN’T CHRIS!” She screamed so fcking loud that she got people to look at us. Make them think I was abusing her or some s***.
“Whatever, Can you chill down and be quiet? You’re making people stare.”
“Let them scare, you think I give a flying fck?!”
“Kim, you know what, you can stay here cause I don’t feel like swimming anymore.” I started gathering my stuff & put them in my bag. I pulled my wife beater over my head. I stood up & looked at her. “Either you come with me now, or you’re taking the subway home.”
“I wanna stay Chris. You are not leaving me. You won’t. You’re not gonna let me take the subway by myself.”
“So does that mean you’re not coming?”
“What?”
“You heard me.”
“Don’t talk to me like that.”
“I’ll talk to you however I intend to especially since you insit on telling me who I can and can’t hangout with. Damn ma, nothin is goin on with me and Y/n. We’re close friends. I know you don’t wanna believe that but you’re gonna have to!”
“Okay…”
“Well, are you coming or not?”
“No,” She mumbled, “Guess not.”
“Aight, find your way home latre cause I ain’t pickin up my phone.”
“Aight Chris.”
“Bye.” I said as I pulled my wife beater completely on and grabbed my towel to put into my bag. Just to get Kim pissed, I put on the chain that Y/n gave me & smirked as I turned away.
“Chris,” Kim called & I turned back startled, “I love you.”
“Yeah,” I replied. And continued walking toward my car. In all the months Kim and I went out, I never yelled at her like that, especially over Y/n’s defense. But she deserved it. I just want her to believe me when I say there is nothing going on with y/n and I. But somewhere inside me keeps saying that I want Y/n. And more than a friend. I just had to keep fighting that urge away cause I knew she didn’t want me the way I wanted her.
Y/n’s POV.
I was watching Chris and Kim and I saw their little ‘fight’. Kim’s quite the screamer. Ahaha, Chris walked off alone to his car. HOLD UP & REWIND. Car? Little Chris has got a car? Dang it’s nice as hell too. That blue lamborghini with the spider seats. That’s what I’m talkin ‘bout. I still love my baby though. ;) I stood up and gathered my things. I started toward Chris and made sure Kim saw me.
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http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
RUN IT!!!!
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♠WHEN YOU’RE GOOD AT SOMETHING……………
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RUN IT PLZ
RUN IT!!!
RUN IT!!!!!
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Go read this story!!!! It's hot!!
♠WHEN YOU’RE GOOD AT SOMETHING……………
Courtesy of my girl Kourtney :]