i wanted to try to do sometin kinda diffrent so here it is
Doc: im glad u came today
chris: umm me to so whats the results
doc: well i have good news and bad news
chris: give me the bad news first
( i always told peple to give me the bad news first so i could get it ova wit)
doc: well unfortunatley you have HIV
chris: huh wat u say i think i miss heard u
doc: well i said the bad news is you have HIV but there is some good news plenty of people are living with it today and leading normal lives
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after he said those words i practically went bullistic i started to punch the walls and i started crying which i bareley did. This couldnt be happening to me im still in high school,and im pretty sure who i got it from
IMA KILL DAT b****
run it!! yall its so much more to come
ima need three or four girls
roles
chris sis
chris gf
anotha girl thats go come later on in the stori
anotha friend




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RUN!!!!!!!!
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
run it
run it, run it, run it, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
Name: Tasha
Age: W/e Fits
Role: Chris' girl
Personality: loving to chris and friends hated by many lol
yea girl you could be in it you will come in later on in the story just give me your info
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Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
Run it gurl and if you don't have a girlfriend 4 him can I be it
chris p.o.v
so a couple days past but and the doctor called me back and asked that i come in so he could tell me my test results to tell you the truth ive never been this nervous in my life but im trying to look on the positive side i probley dont even have it in the first place im to young
right????
Doc: im glad u came today
chris: umm me to so whats the results
doc: well i have good news and bad news
chris: give me the bad news first
( i always told peple to give me the bad news first so i could get it ova wit)
doc: well unfortunatley you have HIV
chris: huh wat u say i think i miss heard u
doc: well i said the bad news is you have HIV but there is some good news plenty of people are living with it today and leading normal lives
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after he said those words i practically went bullistic i started to punch the walls and i started crying which i bareley did. This couldnt be happening to me im still in high school,and im pretty sure who i got it from
IMA KILL DAT b****
i know its short but im adding more
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
He think he tough and stuff and he being ignorant...tryna avoid gettin tested, wats wrong wit him??? Run It!!!
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run it, run it, run it, run it, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it run it
run!!!!
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
ill add afta i get 4 more run it's
run it
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
R.U.N. This
y/n: baby iono know wat to do
fizz: well wit dat bein ur best friend and all just try to talk to him
y/n: ya i guess u right but wat am i suppose to say oh soory the girl u slept wit had h.i.v
fizz: (lol) noo just tell him that doesnt necessarley mean that he has it and to get tested just in case he does better be safe than sorry
y/n: c dats y i love u u always no the right thing to say dr.phil
fizz: no correction im better than doctor phil and sexier
y/n: actually u sexi but ur not sexier than doctor phil thats one sexi white man right there woo
fizz; ( lolz) im not gon even say notin, but yea go over there after schol and try to talk to him
( skip to after schol)
so after the bell rang i went straight to my car and start driving to chris house he only lived 15 minutes away from the school. When i got there i saw his car outside so he was there
knock knock knock
ms.Joyce: Hey danielle!!
ms.joyce was like a second mom to me things i couldnt talk about with my mom i could talk about with her
y/n: hey ms.Joyce how u been
ms.j: good and u
y/n: im pretty well just coming by to talk to chris
ms.j: yea i was wonderin what waz the matter wit him he came in and went straight to his room and hasent come out since
y/n: ok maybe i could get him out
(So i walked upstairs to chris room and start banging on the door)
Chris: WHO IZ IT!!
y/n: ITS DANIELLE!!
chris: I DONT FEEL LIKE TALKING TO ANYONE
y/n: I DONT CARE WAT U FEEL LIKE DOIN OPEN UP THE DOOR BEFORE I KNOCK IT DOWN
( then he finally opened up the door and i steeped inside his rom he was sitting on his bed plsaying with a minature basketball)
y/n: chri s
chris:................
y/n: u cnat ignore me or this for to long
chris: ................................
y/n: fine u dont want to talk to me maybe u will wanna talk to ur mama
chris: fine den damn what u want
y/n: chris u need to get tested
chris: y im fine i dont have anything
y/n: well did u use a condom
chris: well no
y/n: THEN HOW U KNOW U AINT GOT NOTIN!
chris: i dont ok, well wat do u want me to do
y/n: im taking u to get tested my doctor gives out free H.I.V tests or any sexually transmitted disease
chris: im ok ill stay here
y/n: oh no ur not
(then i stood up and grabbed him by his ear and dragged him out his room downstairs)
y/n; now put on ur shoes
chris: fine if this wiill make u feel any beter ill go
y/n: good!
so we drove to my doctors office and i signed chris up for the free H.I.V test. After he was done the doctor told him it was going to take a few days for the results to come back in
run it yall!!
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
Run it run it ruuuun it!
its getting good
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
run it, run it, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
run!!!!!!!!!!!
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
Chris P.O.V chap 3
It was finally lunch time and my one time to get Ella back and as soon as I went to the table I saw Danielle, Fizz, trey, nadia, Kayla, omari, and lastley Ella when they saw me everybody looked up at me and then looked at me all weird
Chris: hey everybody
e/b(except essence): hey
trey: hey chris can I talk 2 u real quick
chris: ya man right after I walk to ella ……… baby can we talk plz
ella: chris I have nothing to say to u
trey: man we need to talk right now
chris: man cant u see im tryna get my girl back right now
ella: LOOK CHRIS I DON’T WANT U BACK especially not afta wat I heard (under her breath)
chris: I don’t c wat the hell u makin dis a big deal for its not like I actually cared about her like I do u it waz juss a one night stand Y CANT U C DAT!!
Ella: I advise u stop raising ur voice at me
Chris: ILL RAISE MY VOICE WEN I WANNA RAISE MY VOICE ( getting close to her)
Ella: U KNOW WAT, FINE! The first thing u need to do before u get back wit me is get ya ass tested, cuzz its going around dat yo lil hoe got H.I.V and yo dumb ass probley aint use a condom did u !!!
Dani: ( trying to stop the commotion) lets calm down everybody and talk this through
Chris: man f*** that im out
Dani P.O.V
Man I can’t believe this is happening to my bestie ill stop by his house afta school to talk this thorugh
y/n: well that went well
Nadia : yupp uh huh
Kayla: my poor brother
Fizz: man that waz sometin
y/n: yea fizz can I talk to u
Fizz: yea comin
So me and fizz went outside the door and sat on the bench
y/n: baby iono know wat to do
fizz: well wit dat bein ur best friend and all just try to talk to him
sorry yall i gotta get of real quick
run it!!!!
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
run it, run it, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
she caught it??????? oh s***! run!!!
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
This is real good so run it
OMFG...............RUN IT♥♥**``~
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!~♥I want 2 Love him........
But he's caused so much DAMAGE in my life♥~!
Chap 2. (still a flashback)
Chris P.O.V
kayla: chris wake ya ass up
chris: I am up get out my room!!
after last night when I got home I kept on trying to call ella but she turned her phone off and didnt want to listen to anything I had to say to her. Danielle called me but I sholl aint want to hear ha mouth either. So I got up and went to the bathroom and got ready for school then went outside to my car blasted The carter lll. I soon arrived at school but on my way to my locker I noticed that shanae was going in the girls bathroom crying up a storm I wanted to ask ha wats wrong but that wasn’t my main concern at the time my main concern waz trying to get Ella back.
Ella P.O.V
I still can’t believe wat chris ass did to me. I seen that trick shanae earlier looking all sad and lonely but I really aint give a care she deserve to be miserable 4 wateva reason it is. But I couldn’t think about that right now I had P.E first Danielle& kaylynn waz in there wit me so maybe they cheer me up.
Dani: hey girl!
Kaylynn: hey chick
Y/n: hey yall
Kaylynn: how u been I heard bout wat happen at the party trey told me
y/n: yea im better hey its hiss loss
kaylynn: yup sure Is I saw shanae lookin all depressed and crying to this morning wonder wats ha problem
then trey nosey self came ova there
trey: ooh ooh I know wats the matter wit ha
Dani: not surprised u know wat people had for breakfast lunch & dinner
y/n: wat trey wats they matter with ha
trey: well see tyrone told me that amy told him that shanae just found out that she had H.I.V
e/b: R u serious
y/n: AND CHRIS DUMB ASS SLEPT WIT HA
dani: well I hope he strapped up but just incase has anyone told chris yet
trey: yea I waz but I haven’t seen him all day
kaylynn: I think u should wait till lunch where will all seem him plus I wana be there when yall tell him this
Skip to lunch
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
im soo sorry i havent added yall i been real busy and my computer at home waz actin RETARDED but i havent forgot. Im trying to add now
run it
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
run it now!
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
That's a damn shame on Chris...........so dumb ugh....RUN IT♥♥**``~
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!~♥I want 2 Love him........
But he's caused so much DAMAGE in my life♥~!
That's a damn shame on Chris...........so dumb ugh....RUN IT♥♥**``~
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!~♥I want 2 Love him........
But he's caused so much DAMAGE in my life♥~!
run it
adding later on
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
runnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
bada bah bah bah! im lovin! it
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♥ Mz. Ella Got It All! ♥
tHANXz fOR PUttiN ME iiN YA StORii :)
ii tHiNk tHAt HoE GaVE iiT tO HiM
RUN iiT!
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"Because you have seen me, you have believed. But blessed are the ones who have not seen, and yet they believe."
-John 20:29
run it, run it, run it, run it, run it, thanks for making me part of ur cast, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
Run it cause its starting to get real good :]
this is my first sex scene to so yeah iono if its that good lolz
Dani P.OV
me nadia and kayla waz standin at the party talkin
nadia: uh uh look at chris starin at shanhae like that
y/n: i know right he look like he wanna go ova there and juss rape ha
kayla: i know right well he betta juss look and not touch cuz if essence find out she gon beat both they asses
nadia: well if he do i hope he rap it up girls a hoe
y/n: wait where is essence in the first place
kayla: i talked to ha she on ha way
y/n: oh ok and kaylynn
nadia: oh her and trey said they aint feel like coming they chillin at the crib
chris p.o.v
i waz posted up agaisnt the wall wit fizz and omari
chris: man im horny
omari: man that is to much infomation lolz
fizz: EXACTLEY aint dat wat u got ur girl for
chris: yeah but she aint here and shanae ova there dancin aint makin it noo betta
omari: do wat u man but dont do notin stupid
chris: yea wateva what she dont know wont hurt
So i walked ova there to where shanae was i heard she gave it up easily so dis shouldnt be that hard
chris: u lookin good ova there dancin
shanae: thnx u look good to, where ur girl at
chris: (lickin his lips and an evil smile) she aint here
shanae: oooooooooooh
chris : so u wanna go upstaires
shana: (smiling) yeah come on
Dani P.O. V
y/n: what the hell!! is dat chris goin up the stairs
nadia: wait i think it is
dani: uh uh im bout 2 go follow his azz
kayla: wait there go ELLA (Essence)
and she comimng our way to
ella: hey girlies
e/b: (nervousley) hey
ella: y yall lookin like dat where my man at
kayla: iono i aint gettin in this peace yall
ella: wat she talkin bout
nadia: c uhh
y/.n: look ima come straight out wit it i juss saw him go upstairs not to long ago
ella: ok wats so bad bout that
nadia: he was following shanae
ella: WHAT! OH HELL NAW
Chris P.O.V
so we went upstairs and as soon as we got in the room she startin kissing on my neck we fell on the bed while i waz tongue kissing her she started to undo my panta and i took of her shirt and un hooked ha bra she had some ok breast but they waznt like ella's then she went down and started sucking my d*** i waz holdin on to hair,right before i waz bout to come i flipped her ova i aint really have time 4 forplay thats when i remembered i aint have a condom on me "damn" i said " what baby whats the matter" she whinned " i aint got no condom" i said " its ok im on birth control " then i went back to doin wat i was doin i slowly enetered her and started goin in and out then we both climaxed......................................... next thing u know i hear somebody banging on the door
ella: open up the Damn door chris!!!!!
kayla: yup i advise u to open up the door!!
dang that sounded like ella i need to do somthing quick she starting to pick on the lock
chris : shanae go hide in the closet
shanae: no i aint scared of that b****
chris: YOU BETTA BE SCARED ( then i threw her in the closet right in time cuz ella came through that door quick
Ella: chris i cant believe u!!
chris: baby what u talkin bout do u see n~e body else in here wit me
kayla : dont try to play my friend yes it is
chris: shut the hell up kayla this aint got notin to do wit u always in somebody else buisness
kayla: AIGHT ima leave now but u still gotta deal wit me wen u get home
Ella: (crying) what am i talking bout........ u sittin here wit notin on but boxers!!!!!
shanae: look im tired of hiding in that closet she knew n~e ways
then Ella looked at both of them and streted crying even harder and ran out the room
chris: WAIT!!!
shanae: u dont need ha u got me now
chris : what! dont u unda stand i only used u for one thing!!
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
this is my first sex scene to so yeah iono if its that good lolz
Dani P.OV
me nadia and kayla waz standin at the party talkin
nadia: uh uh look at chris starin at shanhae like that
y/n: i know right he look like he wanna go ova there and juss rape ha
kayla: i know right well he betta juss look and not touch cuz if essence find out she gon beat both they asses
nadia: well if he do i hope he rap it up girls a hoe
y/n: wait where is essence in the first place
kayla: i talked to ha she on ha way
y/n: oh ok and kaylynn
nadia: oh her and trey said they aint feel like coming they chillin at the crib
chris p.o.v
i waz posted up agaisnt the wall wit fizz and omari
chris: man im horny
omari: man that is to much infomation lolz
fizz: EXACTLEY aint dat wat u got ur girl for
chris: yeah but she aint here and shanae ova there dancin aint makin it noo betta
omari: do wat u man but dont do notin stupid
chris: yea wateva what she dont know wont hurt
So i walked ova there to where shanae was i heard she gave it up easily so dis shouldnt be that hard
chris: u lookin good ova there dancin
shanae: thnx u look good to, where ur girl at
chris: (lickin his lips and an evil smile) she aint here
shanae: oooooooooooh
chris : so u wanna go upstaires
shana: (smiling) yeah come on
Dani P.O. V
y/n: what the hell!! is dat chris goin up the stairs
nadia: wait i think it is
dani: uh uh im bout 2 go follow his azz
kayla: wait there go ELLA (Essence)
and she comimng our way to
ella: hey girlies
e/b: (nervousley) hey
ella: y yall lookin like dat where my man at
kayla: iono i aint gettin in this peace yall
ella: wat she talkin bout
nadia: c uhh
y/.n: look ima come straight out wit it i juss saw him go upstairs not to long ago
ella: ok wats so bad bout that
nadia: he was following shanae
ella: WHAT! OH HELL NAW
Chris P.O.V
so we went upstairs and as soon as we got in the room she startin kissing on my neck we fell on the bed while i waz tongue kissing her she started to undo my panta and i took of her shirt and un hooked ha bra she had some ok breast but they waznt like ella's then she went down and started sucking my d*** i waz holdin on to hair,right before i waz bout to come i flipped her ova i aint really have time 4 forplay thats when i remembered i aint have a condom on me "damn" i said " what baby whats the matter" she whinned " i aint got no condom" i said " its ok im on birth control " then i went back to doin wat i was doin i slowly enetered her and started goin in and out then we both climaxed......................................... next thing u know i hear somebody banging on the door
ella: open up the Damn door chris!!!!!
kayla: yup i advise u to open up the door!!
dang that sounded like ella i need to do somthing quick she starting to pick on the lock
chris : shanae go hide in the closet
shanae: no i aint scared of that b****
chris: YOU BETTA BE SCARED ( then i threw her in the closet right in time cuz ella came through that door quick
Ella: chris i cant believe u!!
chris: baby what u talkin bout do u see n~e body else in here wit me
kayla : dont try to play my friend yes it is
chris: shut the hell up kayla this aint got notin to do wit u always in somebody else buisness
kayla: AIGHT ima leave now but u still gotta deal wit me wen u get home
Ella: (crying) what am i talking bout........ u sittin here wit notin on but boxers!!!!!
shanae: look im tired of hiding in that closet she knew n~e ways
then Ella looked at both of them and streted crying even harder and ran out the room
chris: WAIT!!!
shanae: u dont need ha u got me now
chris : what! dont u unda stand i only used u for one thing!!
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
Name: Kaylyn
Age: w/e fits
Pic: Aaliyah or Lauren London
Man: Trey Songz or Tristan Wilds(Michael Lee 4rm "The Wire")
Personality: shy at times, laid back, smart, nice, there 4 fam n friendz, sarcastic at times, tomboyish, don`t like drama, BUT will beat a nigga if needed
Role: Friend
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"Because you have seen me, you have believed. But blessed are the ones who have not seen, and yet they believe."
-John 20:29
name:kayla
age:w/e fits
role: chris's sister
man:w/e
run it, run it, run it, run it
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Always remember dont sweat the small stuff cause everything in life is small stuff.
3 mo?
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`
I'll be a friend.
My names Nadia.
run it
will add wen i get sum cast i need chris sis and 2 friends and lastly someone that comes later on in the stori i already got chris gf
CPME ON YALL!!!!
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Song on repeat
Mr.carter
lil wayne
`~Danielle~`