~*~I Love Your Girl~*~ {Based off the song by The Dream}
M/v: *points* There he is.
Police Officer: Put your hands above your head where I can see them!
Chris POV
*puts hands above head*
Yea…I guess y’all might be wondering how I got myself into this mess. Well have you ever just gotten yourself in what seemed like a bad but not sooo bad situation and it just spiraled out of control? Well that’s what happened to me. I was just living my life the way I should until Chelsea came along. Then everything got tricky. Let’s go back to the beginning so I can tell you how this all started…
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(@ Chris’ house @ 6:00pm. Chris is layin in the bed half asleep).
*Cell phone rings*
“I aint dead
I aint done
I aint scared
I aint run”
Chris: *answers* (half sleep sounding) Hello?
M/v: Dude…tell me you aint sleep?
Chris: Man *sits up in the bed* You know I be tired after work Mike.
Mike: Don’t tell me you forgot about my party tonight?
Chris: That’s tonight man?
Mike: Chris, I told you I wanted you come meet my girl. Get yo butt out of bed before I have to come over and get you myself. Party starts in an hour. Get ready!
Chris: Aight man. I’ll get there as soon as I can.
Mike: Aight man. 1.
Chris: Deuces.*hangs up*
Chris POV
With that, I got myself up and took a shower. I got dressed in my red monkeys and this fresh button up I just got the other day. Threw on my kicks, brushed up the hair, and then walked out the door. I hopped in my all black Cadillac Escalade and zoomed over the Mike’s crib. All I got to say is his girl better be a dime since he interrupted my nap for this. I was having a good dream about Beyonce and Alicia Keys fighting over me.
(@ Mike’s crib. The door opens, and in walks Chris).
Chris: Yo Mike. *gives him dap*
Mike: Just the man I wanted to see. How r ya my nig?
Chris: I was good until you interrupted my sleep.
Mike: You must’ve been dreaming about Beyonce again.
Chris: AND Alicia Keys.
Mike: Oh dang, word?!?
Both: *laughing*
Mike: But hey man, I don’t know where she is right now but I’ll come find you after I find her.
Chris: Aight man.
(He walks into the living room and sits down on the couch. There are a bunch of people dancing in the middle of the room while “Sexy Can I” blared through the speakers. Then one of the chicks came and sat down on the couch next to Chris).
Girl: What…you don’t dance?
Chris: Uh, yea but I was just chillen.
Girl: Oh, you were just checking me out huh?
Chris POV
Who does she think she is?!?
Chris: Actually I wasn’t.
Girl: Yea, ok. Sure.
Chris: (kinda irritated) Whatever.
Girl: (sarcastically) Awww, did I hurt your feelings?
Chris: (irritated) Look, don’t you have some pole to be grinding on?
Girl: And how do you figure?
Chris: Well you were dancing like a stripper and all.
Girl: *smirks* Like I said…you were checking me out.
Chris: …
(Mike walks up).
Mike: Oh! I see you two have already met.
Chris: Huh?
Mike: Chris this is Chelsea.
(Chelsea gets up and stands next to Mike with his hand around her waist).
Chelsea: *flashes a fake smile*
Mike: She’s my girlfriend.
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GIMME RUNZ TO CONTINUE THE STORY. IM FINALLY BACK Y'ALL SHOW ME SOME LOVE. :)

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*APPLAUSE*...the ending was so beautiful....they gettin married....
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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea
AMEN lol I loved this story and danggg u put my last name on blast lol its good.
AWWW THANX Y'ALL. IM GLAD Y'ALL LIKED IT. I HAD FUN WRITING THIS ONE.
dat endin was so beautiful they gettin married and ish!!! aww yay!!!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
*CLAPS* BRAVA BRAVO!!
ENCORE ENCORE
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww they are too cute
That was good ass ending
great ass story
Your a great writer
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Dani:I'm just Dani ppl
Mijo:Naw your sexi
Dani: lol hush
Chris:Very sexy. Sexy Dani LMAO
Dani: lol Yall stupid
Mijo/Chris:We know
HERE IS THE ENDING:
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(2 months later)
Chris P.O.V.
2 months have passed. Mike and Butch went to jail for the murder of Jessica…25 to life. I’m about to move into my new house a few blocks down. I got a promotion at work to vice president. Things have been going pretty well for me. Everything is back to normal…well ALMOST everything. I haven’t spoken to Chelsea since that day we had an argument 2 months ago. I just can’t find the right words to say to her. We see each other all the time. Every morning when I’m walking to the bus stop I pass by her while she’s taking her morning walk. Our eyes meet for like 2 seconds and then we keep walking as if we’ve never met.
(It’s 7am. Chris just finished his cup of coffee just like he does every morning, put on his blazer and walked out the front door).
(Chelsea laced up her sneakers, grabbed her jacket, and stepped out the door).
Chelsea P.O.V.
I have to mentally prepare myself to see Chris every morning. But it’s not like I don’t want to see him. If that was the case, then I would take my walk a few minutes later so we wouldn’t pass each other, but I don’t. Every morning at exactly 7:03 Christopher Maurice Brown walks past my door and every morning at exactly 7:03 I make sure to be taking my walk. We walk past each other, lock eyes for a couple of seconds, and then continue in our own paths as if we were strangers. But today feels different. I feel it and I know Chris feels it. He’s going to talk to me today.
(With that they both are set in their paths. At exactly 7:03 Chris approaches Chelsea’s house and see’s her walking in his direction).
Chris P.O.V.
There she is. Still as beautiful as always.
Chelsea P.O.V.
Here he comes. Looking so darn sexy in that suit just like he looks every morning.
Chris P.O.V.
Today is the day.
Chelsea P.O.V.
*smiling* Today is the day.
(Chris and Chelsea lock eyes. Chelsea is smiling waiting for Chris to speak but…he walks right past her).
Chelsea P.O.V.
…he…he just looked right through me. It was like I wasn’t here. I was sure he was going to…maybe I should just let…*sigh* *eyes watering*
(Chelsea continues to take her walk. Chris turned around to check to see if she was looking. Then he quickly places a package on her front step then continues towards his bus stop).
(It’s now 8:08am. Chelsea approaches her door, unlocks it, and then notices her foot is touching a package).
Chelsea: Hmm *picks it up* I didn’t order anything. *walks inside and shuts the door* Maybe it’s from mom.
(She opens the package to reveal a few things a letter)
Chelsea reads out loud:
Dear Chelsea,
I kno what you’re thinking. You’re probably wondering why I walked right past you this morning. Well I had spent all week planning the perfect way to talk to you but I couldn’t quite get it right. So I decided to show you how I felt first. If you look in the package you will find a CD. On this CD is “Sexy Can I” because this is the song I heard the first time I saw you at Mike’s crib. You was over there dancing like a pro and I was drooling like a preschooler. *giggles* Then also you will find a wrench. Now I know you have a confused look on your face right now. *laughs* This wrench is the one I used to fix Mike’s sink that one time you pulled a sneak attack on me in the kitchen…which lead to you flipping out on me too. Then if you look one more time in the package you will find a little box. This gift is the most important one but WAIT! Don’t open it. Just pick up the box, put it in your hand, and then come open your door.
(With that, Chelsea does just as the letter says and then opens her door to see…).
Chelsea: …Chris
Chris: *smiling* Hey Chelsea. *sigh* It feels good to finally talk to you.
Chelsea: It feels good to talk to you too.
Chris: Can I see the box?
Chelsea: *hands him the box*
Chris: *walks inside* Chelsea. This has been a long crazy road I know you can agree…but I wouldn’t trade any of it. And honestly, from day one I had feelings for you. From the moment we locked eyes and from the second you spoke to me. I’ve never met anybody like you. And I’m darn sure that I never will. *gets down on one knee* *opens the box* I want you Chelsea Williams. I need you in my life. I love you more than I feel I can express in words. Marry me…
Chelsea P.O.V.
Omg! Is this happening? That diamond is huge! Ok focus.
Chris P.O.V.
Ok…this is usually the part when the woman says “YES!” and then we start making out…but I’m still posing here like Captain Morgan…
Chris: Uh…if you need to think about it I can leave and co- (g.c.o)
Chelsea: No!
Chris: No?
Chelsea: No, I mean yes.
Chris: No you mean yes?
Chelsea: Yes! I wanna marry you. Now kiss me dumb nut.
(Chris put the ring on Chelsea’s finger then they FINALLY kissed but this time it felt right. For one, it didn’t involve a prostitute).
Chris P.O.V.
Things aren’t always as they seem. Don’t judge a book by its cover. If I had done that with Chelsea, I don’t know where I would be now or who I would be with but now I can’t see myself anywhere else or with anybody else.
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THE END!!!!!! What did y'all think?
DANG I GOT SO FREAKIN BUSY Y'ALL. FINAL EXAMS R COMING UP BUT I SERIOUSLY NEED TO GET Y'ALL THE ENDING WIT THE QUICKNESS. IM THINKIN HOPEFULLY TUESDAY. I SHOULD HAVE A LIL FREE TIME TO WRITE THE ENDING AND GET THAT UP HERE. SORRY ABOUT THE WAIT. LIFE GETS CRAZY SOMETIMES.
*******N3W R3AD3R********
RUN iT!!!!!!
Run It!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
THATS OK EVERYBODY. I UNDERSTAND HOW U CAN GET BUSY AND FORGET. GLAD U ARE RUNNING IT NOW THOUGH. ITS TIME FOR ME TO BRING THIS STORY TO A CLOSE. BE LOOKIN OUT FOR THE CONCLUSION THIS WEEK :)
yo!
i forgot about this story!
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hope that covers for me!
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To Do List:
1. Chris Brown
2. Scooter Smiff
3. Bow Wow
4. Trigga Trey
Please don't hate me...it's just the way it is!!!
i am so sorry i havent been runnin it but i went away 4 a week 2 go 2 my ex college's homecomin and i had 2 go back 2 work as soon as i got back but im here now but damn they got Mike's ass and i am so f***in glad now he can be put in jail 4ever and then Chelsea and Chris can live happily ever after lol Run It girl!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
DANG NO LOVE??? COMMENTS...FEEDBACK...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT Y'ALL THINKIN BEFORE I FINISH THIS UP PLZ :)
Haha. Chel. Yea I kno. He a sweetie in real life. Lol. And thanx for the comments. I wanna get a couple more before I put up the ending. Thanx. Much luv.
LMAO.....tht sh!t bacc fired on Mike....thts wat his a$$ get....i said tht would happen...and it did....but i juss hope Mike don't come bacc for Chelsea....thts if he dont get somebody else to do it......but hopefully he go to jail for life....
└►RUN IT◄┘
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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea
COMMENTS :). SHOW SOME LUV PLZ. THE STORY IS ALMOST OVER.
RUN IT!! girl its pretty funny how we got Micheal all gangsta. In real life dat negro wudn't hurt a fly lol and u pulled out his government name!!
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CHEL CHEL! YOU BETTA GET ON HERE AND COMMENT. LOL. LOVE YA. AND KEEP COMMENTING EVERYONE AND RUN IT SO I CAN PUT UP THE ENDING.
HELL YES
MIKES CRAZI BASS IS GOIN TO JAIL
GREAT JOB CHELS
Runz It
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Its Me-
Im just now finding myself and you know what?
Im happy too.
US:10-11-08
::Love overpowers, but Faith is what makes Love do its job.
Always and forever it will::
OK. FINALLY. HERE IS THE NEXT POST. ITS A BIG ONE TO MAKE UP FOR LOST TIME. LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENED:
(An hour later. In Mike’s car. Mike is sitting in the driver’s seat with a huge grin plastered on his face when all of a sudden…)
Chelsea: *quiet chuckles*
Mike: *raised eyebrow* (serious) What’s so funny?
Chelsea: *laughing louder*
Mike: (getting angry) Hey! I said what’s so funny?!
Chelsea: (laughing) You are! That’s what so funny. You actually thought you would win? You actually thought your so called “brilliant plan” was fool proof? *busts out laughing*
Mike: I don’t kno what you’re laughing about. Your man Chris is probably in a jail cell right now soon to serve some hard time.
Chelsea: You just don’t get it do you. Well let me break it down for you. Let’s start back when you first picked me up after I left Chris’ house.
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(Flashback)
(Chelsea is crying hysterically. Chris just kicked her out of his house and now she is walking aimlessly down the sidewalk. She doesn’t even notice an SUV driving slowly behind her).
Mike: *chuckles* Look at her. Dumb trick. You kno the drill Butch.
(Butch jumps out and quickly grabs her and puts his hand over her mouth as he throws her into the vehicle).
Chelsea: *upset* What the heck Mike?!
Mike: What? You didn’t think you weren’t going to see me again did you?
Chelsea:…
Mike: (sarcastically) Awww, I think she’s upset Butch. *pouty face*
Butch: *thunderous chuckle*
Mike: (serious) Well you’re about to get even more upset baby girl.
Chelsea: What do you mean?
Mike: Don’t worry. We’re not going to hurt you…this time. See, Chris has been trying to make me look bad. He turned you against me and I’m not having that. I have a rep to maintain. So…Chris is about to get his. Lil innocent Christopher is about to be facing… murder charges.
Chelsea: What?! Chris would never kill anybody!
Mike: Yea you’re right about that, BUT he is pretty mad at you right now. And when people are mad, they do things they don’t mean like murder the person who hurt them…or they might even murder somebody who is close to that person. They say the way to get to someone is to attack their heart…hmm…I wonder how Jessica is doing? It wouldn’t look to good for Chris if something happened to her.
Chelsea: (tearing up) What do you mean Mike?
Mike: Maybe I should pay her a visit.
Chelsea: (low) Omg…
Chelsea P.O.V.
Cmon girl think! Ok…if I could sneak and text Will without Mike seeing me.
(She reaches in her pocket and discreetly texts Will a message saying, “Mike is on his way to Jessica’s plz…” but she had to send just that and delete it quick because Mike noticed she is doing something).
Mike: What are you doing? *snatches her phone*
Chelsea: I was just looking at the time.
Mike: Hmm…well I’m going to hold on to this for now. I think it will become useful.
(Soon Mike pulls up in front of Jessica’s house. He make’s Chelsea stay in the car while he and Butch go inside. Jessica, unsuspecting, lets them in. Within just a few minutes, they had killed her and placed her body in a bag and dragged her to the car. But what they didn’t notice was…)
Will P.O.V.
I couldn’t believe what I saw. I had gotten there too late though. When I arrived, Jessica was already dead. But that didn’t stop me from trying to do what’s right. I pulled out my cell phone and filmed everything from one of the side windows. I saw them talking while standing over the body and then I saw them stuff her in a bag and drag her to the vehicle. I don’t know what he’s planning but I’m going make sure the truth comes out.
(With that, Will starts to sneak back to his car but he spots Chelsea in the back seat of the SUV. Luckily, she looks up and notices him. Will puts the phone up so she realizes that he has evidence and then he leaves for the police station).
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(Back to present)
Chelsea: Then after that, you lured Chris to the dock, tried to make it look like he did it, and now we are sitting here and you are lookin like a dumb nut. So you see…you are BUSTED!
(Mike was speechless yet furious).
Mike: (furious) Trick, you just f**ked wit the wrong nigga!
(Mike was about to reach in the back and grab his gun when…)
M/v: Freeze! Put your hands where I can see them Michael Mabry.
(Mikes puts his hands up and slowly gets out of the car at the instructions of the officers).
Officer: We have a warrant for you arrest as a suspect of the murder of Jessica Wilson.
(With that Mike shot an icy glare at Chelsea as they put him in the police car).
Chelsea P.O.V.
*exhales* This is first time in my life that I can honestly say…I feel free. I feel like my own person. Chelsea ain’t nobody’s trick no more and that’s how I’m going to keep it. I’m gonna start my life over and do it right this time.
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OK...YOU KNO WHAT TO DO. COMMENT ABOUT THIS SECTION THEN I WILL GIVE Y'ALL THE ENDING.
OK. SORRY. THINGS WERE CRAZY. I THOUGHT I'D HAVE FREE TIME BUT I DIDN'T SO I GUESS IMMA HAVE TO TAKE SOME TIME N DO IT TOMORROW. MAYBE AT WORK I WILL HAVE TIME.
lucky you ... i wish i didnt have skool ... run it though!!!
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I am a prize ... and you are not a champion!
Caper Nate: CN on board ... WATCH OUT, her keyboard is deadly ...
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HEY. I KNOW Y'ALL ARE WAITING ON A RUN BUT I'M MAD BUSY AT THE MOMENT. I JUST WANTED TO TELL Y'ALL SO Y'ALL WOULDN'T BE WONDERING. I THINK I WILL PROBABLY BE ABLE TO POST AGAIN MAYBE ON TUESDAY. I DON'T HAVE SCHOOL THAT DAY SO I THINK I MIGHT HAVE A LIL FREE TIME. MUCH LUV. 1.
damn man i cant believe dis s*** is happenin and all started wit 1 chick Chelsea damn b!!! i hope Chris gets outta dis s***!!! he cant go down cause of dat snake Mike!!! Run It!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
RUN IT!!!
for one....Chris didnt even touch Jessica...right?....wouldnt Mike's fingerprints....as well as other stuff be on her....juss saying....
Mike is a sleezy coniving....a$$...i hope all this bacc fire.....
└►RUN IT◄┘
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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea
HOL THE FUCCK UP!!!!!!!!!!
WTH JUS HAPPENED!!
No dis nigga didnt jus set Chris up!!!!!!
Damn Chelsea go save ya man..
Mike ya lil thang thang gettin choped.
smh im pissed now
Girl you betta runz this like rite NOW!!!!
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Its Me-
Im just now finding myself and you know what?
Im happy too.
US:10-11-08
::Love overpowers, but Faith is what makes Love do its job.
Always and forever it will::
*COUGH* I NEED RUNZ PLZ. LOL. HEHE.
Ahhh Snap That Was Dirty!!
Mike Need A Beat Down...
RuN iT!!
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~!*Behind Every Beautiful
Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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OK. HERE IS THE POST. ITS ABOUT TO CATCH UP WITH THE PRESENT. REFRESH YOU MEMORY BY READING THE FIRST COUPLE OF LINES IN THE INTRO OF THIS STORY. REMEMBER THAT THIS STORY WAS A FLASHBACK LEADING UP TO THE PRESENT SITUATION. HERE WE GO:
(Chris sits on the couch for a good 10 minutes before he realizes what had just happened).
Chris P.O.V.
Dang! I kno she lied and everything but I think I went a lil over board. Dominoes? She must really hate me now. I guess I need to think about this…would I be able to live my life without her? *quickly dials Chelsea’s number*
“This is Chelsea’s voicemail. You know what it is. State ya business and I’ll holla back. 1.”
Chris: Chelsea…*tearing up* Im sorry ok. I didn’t mean to be like that. I was just hurt that you didn’t tell me the truth straight up. But I guess you might’ve been scared or confused or I don’t know. But what I do know is…I just spent the last 10 minutes trying to figure out if I could live without you and it was the hardest 10 minutes of my life. Living my life without you is out of the question. I need you. I love you Chelsea…I just hope you still love me. (low) Call me back. *hangs up*
(With that, Chris decides he can’t wait for a call back. He jumps up, puts on his jacket, and races out the door. As soon as he gets in his car, he receives a text message).
Chris: Oh it’s from Chelsea. “Meet me at the dock. We need to talk.” What’s she doing there?
(Chris decides not to wait around and try and figure it out. He speeds off towards the dock).
***
(Inside of Mike’s car).
Mike: Phase II complete. Now it’s time for the grand finally. Isn’t that right sweetheart? *presses the barrel of the gun against her face*
Chelsea: (crying) You sicken me.
Mike: Hey…that’s my line. Remember? *laughs*
Chelsea: *crying harder*
Mike: Shut up! Or I will give you something to cry about. Trust me. I’m not afraid to kill you just like…Jessica.
Chelsea: *eyes widen* J-jessica?
(Nararator: For those who don’t remember, Jessica is the girl who was at dinner that one night, with Will and John from high school, who was best friends with Chelsea).
Mike: Yea. Keep on working my nerve and see if you don’t get silenced.
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(Chris reaches the dock. He pulls into a parking spot and gets out of the car)
Chris: *looks around* Where is she?
*Beep*
Chris: Another text message from Chelsea. “Look in your trunk”
Chris P.O.V.
Ok…why do I feel like I’m the black guy who dies first in the horror movie right now?
(Chris slowly walks to the back and opens the truck of the Escalade to reveal…)
Chris: *eyes widen* Omg! It’s Jessica.
(Just then, four vehicles roll up, three of which were cop cars).
Mike: *jumps out* *points* There he is.
Police Officer: *pointing gun at Chris* Put your hands above your head where I can see them!
Chris: *puts hands above head*
Chris P.O.V. (to the readers)
And that’s how I got into this situation. My used to be best friend Mike framed me for murder. How am I gonna get myself out of this mess you might be thinking?...I don’t know.
(The cops hand cuff Chris, slam him into the back seat of one of the cars, and speed off).
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LOOKS LIKE CHRIS IS IN DEEP. WHATS HE GONNA DO NOW???
post ... now!!! ... plez?!?!
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I am a prize ... and you are not a champion!
Caper Nate: CN on board ... WATCH OUT, her keyboard is deadly ...
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OK. I JUST GOT THROUGH WRITING A LITTLE BIT BUT ITS 1:30AM SO I DOUBT MOST OF YOU ARE ON HERE RIGHT NOW. SO WHAT IMMA DO IT ADD IT TOMORROW. LOOK OUT FOR IT.
wow........
she should have told him the truth
but um as for the comment about dominoes....thats was wrong...
and Mike need need chill out...
└►RUN IT◄┘
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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea
Damn!!
RuN iT!?!
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~!*Behind Every Beautiful
Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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Run It!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
Now why i gotta get a job at Dominoes? Thats messed up lol But please RUN IT!!!! and don't let that Mike lookin boy hurt Chris!
i like this story...
i agree...Chris was a lil` harsh when
he told her to work at dominoes...
can`t wait to read what happens next .
---run it !
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...I don't want reality
Actually,reality stinks
How about we just pretend
That your cellphone didn't even ring
And that I wasn't on the other side of the door
Listening to everything,tell me another lie.
Ne-Yo.
damn he was kinda harsh she might have deserved it but not 2 dat extent damn man dat dominoes s*** was REALLY harsh poor Chelsea man Run It!!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
wow ... chris was sorta bold for him to be so heartbroken ... that shyt sorta hurt my feelings. the whole dominos hiring part was the icing on the cake.
i hope mike don't do no wild-out shyt ... i'm scared for chris
run it though!!!
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|_Expect the Unexpected_| ... sequel to |_Partners In Crime_| ... check it out!!!
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I am a prize ... and you are not a champion!
Caper Nate: CN on board ... WATCH OUT, her keyboard is deadly ...
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Mmmmmm...Chris needs to calm down!
RUN!
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If you don't know by now...you should get familiar!
ok im back and commenting for you....
OK Chris has a point but damn holms he aint have to do alla dat to her. and Coca I dont trust the biitch at all. and Mike nigga do something to Chris and watch ya lil thang thang get cut off and last but not least Chelsea you should have told him but naw yo ass wana be hard headed and look where it gotchu.
-sighs- all done now lol
Runza cus this is sooooooo damn good.
-Dani
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Im still Dani yall, and im tha same person,
I jus got a Good and Bad side to me thats all
;]
::Love overpowers, but Faith is what makes Love do its job.
Always and forever it will::
U welcome!
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~~You look at me and say u know me,
when you don't even know my name.
I let my haters hate,and whether u luv me
or hate me,u still thinking about a nigga.
So keep on hatin~~
Bubbl3 Gum Barbi3z:Bubblicious-BriBri
One Love-Bob Marley:REAL Rasta
HEY One-Love_BriBri! THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK ON THE STORY. IM GLAD YOU LIKE IT. ONE REASON I KINDA LIKE WRITING THIS STORY IS BECAUSE ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE PPL I KNO IN REAL LIFE (EXCEPT CHRIS. LOL). MY BEST FRIEND IS THE MAIN CHARACTER. HER COUSIN IS COCOA. AND MIKE IS THIS SEXY DUDE ONE OF MY FRIENDS USED TO DATE. ITS PRETTY NEAT TO COMBINE THEM INTO THIS STORY. OH AND FEEL FREE TO GIVE ADVICE ON WHAT YOU THINK I SHOULD DO NEXT TOO. I CAN ALWAYS TRY AND TIE IT INTO THE STORY.
EVERYONE ELSE, STAY WIT ME. ITS BOUT TO POP OFF.
Hey,I'm kind of a new reader..but I just aint been running it.hehe but Im gonna say somethin now.first of all,I CANNOT believe that Chelsea sai she loved Mike after all that he put her through,and now she loves Chris,an he just pushed her away,But thats what she gets.I really like this story its awesome! And I wonder what Mike gonna do to Chris... RUN IT!
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~~You look at me and say u know me,
when you don't even know my name.
I let my haters hate,and whether u luv me
or hate me,u still thinking about a nigga.
So keep on hatin~~
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CMON, I NEED RUNS PLZ. GIMME FEEDBACK :)
FINALLY!!!! I HAVE MORE STORY TO ADD. HERE WE GO:
(At Mike’s Crib).
*Cell Rings*
And I'm grindin' until I'm tired
And you ain't grindin' until you die
So I'm grinding with my eyes wide
Looking to find,
A way through the day
The life of the night
Dear lord you've taken so many of my people
I'm just wondering why you haven't taken my life
Like what the hell am I doing right?
(Mike answers)
Mike: Talk to me.
F/v: Good news baby.
Mike: I was hoping you’d say that. How’d it go?
F/v: What you think? He just fell to pieces when he found out his precious Chelsea lied to him. Cocoa never fails.
Mike: *chuckles* Yes. I see that. If you keep doing so well…then you’re definitely going to be the new top girl.
Cocoa: I knew you’d realize that I’m way better than Chelsea. I’m loyal and I always get the job done right.
Mike: Well we’ll see about that later on tonight. *licks his lips*
Cocoa: *giggles* Kay. See you later Mikey. *cheesing mad hard*
Mike: Deuces. *hangs up*
Mike P.O.V.
Phase one complete. Now it’s time for me to teach Chris a lesson he’ll never forget. *chuckles*
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(At Chris’ house. He is sitting on the couch in silence, deep in thought when…)
*Door Bell Rings*
(Chris gets up and walks over to the door. He looks thru the peep hole and it’s Chelsea).
Chris: *sigh* *opens the door* (low) Yea…
Chelsea: Chris…we need to talk. *walks inside*
Chris: (under breath) Naw duh.
Chelsea: *raise eyebrow* What was that?
Chris: *sigh* Have a seat.
Chelsea: *sits down* Well…I don’t really know where to start.
Chris: *sits down* How about starting with the truth?
Chelsea: (shocked) What do you mean?
Chris: Oh, so now you trynna play dumb? Well you can stop. I know that you lied to me.
Chelsea: Chris…I didn’t mean for (g.c.o.)
Chris: (getting upset) What…you didn’t mean for me to find out? You wanted to have your cake and eat it too Chelsea but it don’t work that way! How could you do this when you knew how much I… (lowers voice) just forget it.
Chelsea: (leans closer) How much you what Chris?
Chris: *stares into her eyes* (low) How much I loved you Chelsea.
Chelsea: (eyes watering) Chris… *grabs his hand* I love you too.
Chris: *pulls his hand away* But you love Mike more.
Chelsea: (defensively) What? Now Chris wait a minute I (g.c.o.)
Chris: *throws up hands* (aggrevated) And here come the lies. Don’t you ever get tired of it? Just admit it. Why else would you lie about still being a prostitute? Sure, he wouldn’t let you quit BUT you also didn’t tell me that was the case. And you wanna know why? Because you were trying to protect him. Admit it. You love Mike.
Chelsea: (crying) No…I don’t love Mike anymore. I love you.
Chris: Keyword…anymore. It’s a little too late now Chelsea. You lied to me. I had to find all this out from a hooker who beamed me in the head with a Frisbee in the park instead of hearing it from you. I can’t trust you anymore. *walks over to door and opens it* I’m gonna have to ask you to leave.
Chelsea: (voice cracking) But Chris I quit now. I left. I’m not prostituting anymore. That’s what I came here to tell you.
Chris: *smirks* Good for you. Hey, I hear Dominoes is hiring. Now *pushes her out the door* get to stepping! *slams the door behind her*
(Chelsea stumbles down the street with tears in her eyes).
(Chris sat back on his couch, put his face in his hands, and fought back tears).
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I NEED FEEDBACK AND RUN IT PLZ :)
OH COOLIE. THAT'S GOOD TO KNO. I UNDERSTAND HOW THAT CAN BE. ITS A LIL RUFF ON MY END TOO. IMMA TRY AND ADD SOON THOUGH BECAUSE I HAVE SOME IDEAS SWIRLING AROUND IN MY HEAD AND I CAN'T WAIT TO MAKE THEM HAPPEN.
Pop Off! Pop Off!
RUN THIS!
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Done had an epiphany
Done had my arguments
Done gave up all my love for my haters
Done changed my style
Done with impressing these stupid boys
Done with it all
What else you want?
Cause I'm DONE!
And I'm living my life..gracefully
we not bailin on u girl its jus work be kickin my ass so Run It!!!!
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PrinC3sz Re3c3 l0v3s C. Br3ez3 even if he is wit big 4head Rihanna lol...Chris told me i could have watever i like i told him 2 drop Rihanna and he said ok babii lol =]
yyyyy .... we didnt bail .... skool just kickin my ass thats all ... run it!!!
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