~ UnderAge ~ { 02-08-09}

~ UnderAge ~ { 02-08-09}
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From the author that brought you "Young Naive and Inexperienced", "The Grown and Sexy Tour
and " Mixed Feelings, brings you this hot new storie filled with more drama than you can imagaine
and will have you on the edge of you chair and asking for more. Wordup and Glamor along with Time, give this storie 5 stars for it's originality and well wrote storie. The Storie is Rated R for strong language and Strong Sexual Scenes
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"See ya momma" i said heading down the stairs, and grabbing my black and red light weight deron coat. "Wait, did you clean up your room, the basement and wash the dishes" she asked looking at obama on the tv. "Yes and i took the trash out and mopped the floors, so i'll see you when i get home"..."be home by twelve"..."alright momma" I walked out the house and hoped into Maria's 2004 honda accord.

"Hey chica, that's cute what you got on" she said admring my oufit. I was dressed in an yellow, thermal applebottom shirt with gray applebottom pants and my green and yellow plaided dereon shoes with some grey leg warmers. My short neck lenght short , bouncy and shiny and fit my face just well. I had my bang pinned up giving you a better image of my round face, dark brown eyes and
full plump lips . About 10 minutes later will pulled up to Charlies a skating rink that i and my friends attended every weekend. We got out the car, payed our money and walked in the rink to see people fussing, dancing and just having fun.

"I see my brother, i'll be back" maria said walking in the other direction. I felt a pair of arms around my waist. "Hey baby" i said putting my arms arounf his neck. He pecked my lips and said.."hey baby".."where you going" i asked notcing his boys leaving.
"We going to pick up some food, want anything" he asked, i knodded my head "i want some pizza".."aiight" he said pecking my lips and about to head out.."Wait and breadsticks" he smiled and headed out with his boys. "Come on girl, get your skates so we can hit the floor" maria said going in circles around her brothers.

I slid on my pastry skates and hit the floor. " Turning Me off" by keri hilson was playing which made me go into the middle of the floor and imitate every move she did
in the video. It was me , maria and the normal girls we hung out with just having fun.
"i'll be right back..i'm tired"maria said heading towards her brother. I just kept skating and enjoying myself. "Hey lil mama" i heard a voice say, i looked up to see this lightskinn dude who was about 6'1, plump lips, nice brown eyes and a pretty smile.

"Hey" i said steading skating.."whats your name" he asked me, i stopped and faced him.."Dior, Dior Bradfort" i said.."I'm chris, can i get your number lil mama" he asked pulling out his sidekick.."how old are you chris" i asked folding my arms..."21, you", I laughed and said.."JAILBAIT"and skated over to the other group of friends

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*NEW READER*
OH WOW.... DATZ KRAZY... BUT DEPENDING ON HOW MANY MONTHS & HOW LONG MARIA & MIJO BEEN 2GETHER IDK IF CHELLEY IZ TELLIN DA TRUTH ABOUT NOT KNOWIN ABOUT MARIA & MIJO.... BUT I DO KNO MARIA IS SCANDLOUS 4 SLEEPIN WIT CHELLEYS MAN WHEN SHE KNEW DEY WENT 2GETHER DATZ FKD UP.... RUN IT

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Sadiiddy™

run it!!

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--TASHA

wwwooooooooowwwwwwwwww that was a crazi ass add
i mad they slept wit each othas man
but maria did it the slick way
she waited till trey was drunk 2 do it lol
run it

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ya gurl bri

THAT WAS A CRAZY ADD BUT IT WAS GOOD
AND SORRY FOR NOT RUNNIN IT EARLIER
RUUUUUUUUUUUN ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

oh s***
das messed up boi
trey iz gonna die
and can sum1 plz catch fizz cheatin he annoyin tha shyt outa me now

New Chapter :

" You expect me to fall for that..trey your mother you ass" chelley said.."No he isnt you ass, how stupid can you be..i'm adopted." she said screaming, she raised her eyebrow and crossed her ams " you should've been their..he felt so good inside of me" she said touching her body. "You'ew lying" chelley screamed with tears running down her face. "Ok dont belive me, but believe trey" she said walking out the house. "She's lying right" chelley said looking at me. " i dont know" i said shrugging my shoulders. "I'll be in the car" she said grabbing my keys and heading out to the hummer. I sighed grabbed my keys and all i thought was DRAMA..DRAMA..DRAMA.

I slipped on my shoes grabbed my phone and called chris. "Whats up" he said answering.." please, meet me at treys house, somethig fitting to go down" i said hanging up and hurry out. I hoped in my car and drove off the whole time chelley cried about how she know she made a mistake but her and trey were apart then. When pulled up and chelley hoped out the car and ran in the house. Without even knocking she went in the house and looked for trey. I was right behind her. She swang open his room door and their he was layed out on the bed. "Man, what the f***"trey said as he notice she was their. She went over to him and slapped the s*** out of him. He hoped up and they were face to face. I knew he was ready to hit her. "Did you f*** maria" she screamed..."what are you talking about" he asked.."answer my question trey....did you" she asked. "No, but what does it matter to you, we're over" he said.

" no, we're not over until i say so" she screamed..."you f***ed her didnt you" chelley said ..."What ..no" he said, i could tell he was getting confused. "Then why did she say she did" Chelley asked. Maria walked in and sat on treys bed. "Oh, tell stop lying to her...you know i let you pop my cherry" she said feeling on her breast. "Maria shut up and get out"trey screamed. "No, not until you tell her what happen"maria said.."tell her what"trey said. "You remeber, the day you came home whining about how chelley want loving you right..we were talking and than you kissed me and i kissed you back and you- trey cut her off..."Why are you lying"...."i'm not lying" she said.

" You had just got back from vegas, cause you're were wasted" she said. Trey stood their for a minute and i guess he did remeber cause he eyes had widen. "You did , didnt you"chelley said hitting on him causing him to fall to the floor. I tired to get her off of him but she wouldnt budge. But than chris came in and held her back. "Let me go" she said kicking and looking at maria. "I got something for your ass, best believe" she said as chris pulled her out the room and put her in the car. "What happen" chris asked slamming the door, i sighed and said.."long storie but i'll call you and tell you about it" i said getting in the car and rolling my window down. "I dont get a kiss for saving the say " he asked, i laughed and said.."nope", i grinned.."aiight , but you chilling with me tomorrow" he asked.."nope, chilling with fizz" i said.."oh" he said sounding disappointed. "Lets go" chelley screamed.."i gotta go..help a friend but i'll call you" i said driving off.

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

thanks for the reviews

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

!!!1NEW READER!!!
THS STORRY IS THE s***!
AREN'T TREY AND MARIA BRO AND SIS...THATS INCEST DUDE!!
THATS GROSS!

DAMN, I SWEAR MARIA AND TREY WAS BROTHER AND SISTER.
I THINK CHRIS AND DIOR ARE CUTE TOGETHER.
FIZZ IS OBVIOUSLY CHEATING, SHE NEED TUH LEAVE HIM.
CHELLEY PREGNANT FOR MIJO DAMN. THIS GONE BE INTERESTING.

LOVE DA STORY. RUNNN ITTT
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cant wait for that next add...

woah im confuzed mariah fuked trey? aint they related
like reali related
like brother n sister related?
boi bare tingz gain down in dis

*new reader* run it!!!!

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u can hate if u want to but ur wastin ur time

ok ain maria n trey brother n siser??
n i dont like chellz...(in this story..u kno i luv u)n-e way i dont like her...stupid b**** she scandelous
n dior stupid. fizz is cheating u ass wipe
chris sprung...get some balls chris she is 2 young for u
get a real woman
RUN IT DIMPERZ

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~AMANI~
"Life is a d*** when it get hard f*** it"

I wumbo, you wumbo, he she we wumbo, wumboing, wumbology, they study of wumbo...come on Spongebob, this is first grade!"

omg im kill her even if I am pregnant by mijo im beat her azz she had sex with my botfriend imma mess her up.
Dimz you always have your way of making a goodstory and you inspire me with you fantastic writing
Runzie It

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THAT CHICA CHELLZ

WHEN YOUR LIFE CAN BE CUT SHORT BY SOMETHING YOU CAN'T CONTROL ALL YOU CAN DO IS PRAY AND FIGHTTO THE END!!!! YOUR NOT DONE WHEN YOU LOSE,YOUR DONE WHEN YOU QUIT

MICHELLE RAMSEY HARD FIGHTER OF CHRONIC KIDNEY DIEASE

Uh ooooh. Its about 2 b some drama. Well its all ready drama.

Oop de it is

Run it

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"A good girl is a bad girl that don't get caught"

That describes me perfectly.

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Oooh boi I think of u.
On 2 occassions.
That's when I want.
That's when I need it.
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LOL, IT SOUNDS CONFUSING NOW BUT YOU'RE UNDERSTAND IN THE NEXT ADD
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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

im soooooooo confuseddd
i thought trey was marias brother?!?!?!
run ittt cux i need to knoww

OOO HOTT DAMN!!! WORD! U f***ED TREY! LOL

DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA...RUN IT!

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When i got in the house, i changed into some shorts and this huge t-shirt i had and just sat on the couch texting chris.

BrezzyBabi757- so what you doing

JadoreDior- Dont worry about, i'm minding mines

BrezzyBabi- lol..so its like that now

JadoreDior- always been like that

I heard a knock on the door so i threw my phone down and anwered it. "Hey baby" i said as i opened the door to fizz. He was dressed in rocawear , he pecked my lips and sat on the couch. "What are you doing here" i asked.."at this time of time" looking at the time. "What cant spend time with my baby" he asked.."No, its not that but..you know i cant have anyone here pass 10" i said. " aiight, aiight i'm leaving but i got something for you" he said reaching in his pocket and pulling out a box tied with red ribbon. I ripped it open and inside of it was a ring with fizz and dior 4ever on it. "Baby" i said putting it on my finger. "You like it" he asked.."i love it" i said giving him a hug. "it's a promise ring" he said.."ok" i said.

"Promise not to hurt you, promise not to lie" i sang, he laughed pecked my lips and headed towards the door. "So, i'll call you tonight" he said, i knodded my head and closed the door behind him. And plopped back down on the couch and texted chris. All i could do was laugh cause he aint have no dam since.

"Dior" i heard somebody scream, i hoped up from the chair and looked out the window to see chelley in tears. "What's wrong baby" i said leading her in the house. "I told him,i told him dior" she said crying on my shoulder. "told him what" i asked.."i didnt really tell him, he found the pregnacy test and he was like we're having a baby but that i said-she got quiet.."said what chelley"..."i told him he wasnt the daddy" she said crying again. "Than who is" i asked. She looked into my eyes and wiped the tears away.."Mijo"

My eyes widen.."what" i said..:i'm sorry, i didnt know him and maria were talking..this was way before they met" she said crying on the floor. I got beside her rubbed her back and comforted her. After about 30 minutes of crying shs stopped. We sat in the chair and she just sat their quiet. " He said we were over" he said looking at the wall. "look chelley, i'm sure if he explains , he'll understand" she shook her hand.."he wont, you dont know trey like i do" she said. I sighed and rubbed my neck and said.."What about maria".."i cant tell her, she'll kill me"chelley said.."but you were with him way before maria..yep, but i was with him when i was f***ing trey" she said.

"You f***ed my boyfriend" maria said walking in the house, charging towards chelley but i held her back. "how could you do that chelley" she screamed with tears falling down her face. " I didnt know, and it was long before yall met" chelley screamed. I had no idea why i was holding maria back, me and maria both know chelley would whoop her ass. "Way before you met you stupid slut"maria screamed.."i'm sorry" chelley cried..."I accept, but i gotta tell you something...I f***ED TREY.

To be Continued........................

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

alright as soon, as i get finish cleaning up

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

he is gonna kill me
D if he do take care of mi baby.....lol but I cant wait
runzie again and again

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THAT CHICA CHELLZ

WHEN YOUR LIFE CAN BE CUT SHORT BY SOMETHING YOU CAN'T CONTROL ALL YOU CAN DO IS PRAY AND FIGHTTO THE END!!!! YOUR NOT DONE WHEN YOU LOSE,YOUR DONE WHEN YOU QUIT

MICHELLE RAMSEY HARD FIGHTER OF CHRONIC KIDNEY DIEASE

awww
she should have stayedddd
run ittt

aaaawwwww that was so cute she need 2 drop fizz n get wit chris
n who is chelly preggy by??
ooooooooo trey gon b mad!
run it

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ya gurl bri

yall will find out in the next chapter mina and chelley

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

who am i preggie by i hve to kno????? awwwww datz sooo cute D tha the perfect couple
run it

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THE ONE AND ONLY MICHELLE AKA CHELLEY.....YA DIGG

Chris:I need you
Dani:he a lying ass
Chelley:I don't know chris
Dani:girl leave him like a hooker on a street corner
Morgan:naw girl grabbed that
Chris:Ya'll but out
Dani:naw hoe imma beat your as

omg who chellz babydaddy.....oh i wanna kno???????
they need to get5 togeather

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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

lol awww they are 2 crazy azz folx
i luv em both
run it chica

if they hook up ican already tell they gon b sooo sooo in luv!

lol run it!
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Brand New Chapter : { February 6, 2009 Add }

The next day one i got home from school, i went upstairs showered and called up chris letting him know i was on my way over. I was dressed in some gray skinny legged jeans with a red short sleeve v-neck shirts with my red flats.My hair was in curls and had grew alot, it hung pass my shoulders but i threw it up in a ponytail with my bang hanging in front of my left eyes as usaul. I sprayed on some sweet pea body spray, grabbed my keys and drove off in my hummer. As i drove down the road blasting " it not my name" my the ting tings. As i pulled up into the drive way i parked the car threw my phone in the bag and applied some cherry lipgloss before getting out the car. "What's good" chris said meeting me at my car."Nothing" i said with a smile, he grabbed my by my waist and pulled me into a hug. I could tell he wanted to tongue me down but i walked ahead of him and walked in the house.

"You cant be just walking in my house" he said.."yeah, yeah whateva" i said slipping off my sandals and plopping down on the couch. I was just about to pick up the remote control with chris took it. "Hey" i said.." hey nothing" he said smiling. " Anways chris what we gonna do....what are we gonna it" i asked.."Well i ordered some pizza" he said.."wait did you order breadsticks".."yeah" he said.."what about chicken wings, and cinnamon sticks" i said.."yes" he said grabbing my cheeks and smiling. I pushed him away and stood up. "Show me the house" i said.."come on" he said grabbing my hand and leading me to the kitchen. It was nice as f***, it was decorated in black and red and it looked like it had a womens touch. "Ohh doritos" i said going in the pantry opening up the bag and eating a mouth fool. Chris laughed and said.."come on" i followed behind him and our next stop was his room.

It was really pretty, it was all grown and sexy. It was black and the bed was so pretty. I hoped on it and kicked my feet up. "You like it" he asked, i could tell he was alittle afraid of what i might think. "I love it, this place is mad hot" i said.."so where my room" i asked. He sat down and said.."if you stay over, yo sleeping right here" he said whispering my my ear sending chills up my body. I bit down on my bottom lip to contol my hormones. "Anways" i said changing the subject. "Show me everything else", he got up and showed me the guess room. "This is where i will be staying" i said going in the closet. "I'll be right here with you" he said.."stop hitting on me" i joked.

"You know you like it" he said picking me up and leading me to the bed. He layed me back and centered himself in between my legs. "Chris i cant- i said but was cut off by him sucking on my neck. "s***" i moaned as i just layed back and enjoyed it. He went from my neck and than lifted up my shirt and started sucking on my belly button. "Chris..we're just friends" i said lifing my head up. He looked up at me and met his lips with mine. "Aiight, i'll stop" he said sitting up and looking at me. I lauged for some strange reason.."whats so funny".."nothing" i said walking out the room with him behind me. "Come on tell me".."nothing" ..."i know what it is, like the way i was sucking on that belly button, huh" he said, i turned around and faced him and said.."it was aiight..nothing special" i said grinning. "Really" he said.."really" i said running in the living room with him behind me.

The pizza had finally came and we were sitting on the couch eating pizza and watched " the univited". " i want more" i said grabbing another piece of pizza "What" chris said sitting back, i could tell me was full. "You heard me" i said.."how can a person so little put down so much food" he said.."i can show you, better than i can tell you" i said. He looked at me for about 30 seonds and i just starred back. "What time is it" i asked.."9:25".."No" i whinned.."what's wrong" he asked.."i dont wanna go home". He smiled and said.."you can stay with me tonight"...."no" i said going by the door and slipping on my shoes. I grabbed my bag and grabbed 2 slices pf pizza. "So you leaving me" he said coming to the door looking sad. "Yey, sorry babe" i said. He pecked my lips but i added a little tongue, i smiled and walked out the door. "I'll call you tonight aiight" he said.."ok" i said knodding hoping in my car and driving away.

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--
he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

thanks for the reviews yall
--
he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

oh em gee
he is too sweet
i love him
they should really get togather already

chris is dumb
i swear
he startz givin out info den sayz he knt b givin out info he iz mad
but run it

OMG D WHO AM I PREGGIE BY???????:?????? HEY I DONT WANNA ABORTION I WANT THE BABY NO KILLINGANOTHER HUMAN BING lol

awwww i think imma cry lol this is the best story I have evr read in my intire lifeadn im not sayin that cuz im in it but thiz is gud
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THE ONE AND ONLY MICHELLE AKA CHELLEY.....YA DIGG

Chris:I need you
Dani:he a lying ass
Chelley:I don't know chris
Dani:girl leave him like a hooker on a street corner
Morgan:naw girl grabbed that
Chris:Ya'll but out
Dani:naw hoe imma beat your as

OMG D WHO AM I PREGGIE BY???????:?????? HEY I DONT WANNA ABORTION I WANT THE BABY NO KILLINGANOTHER HUMAN BING lol

awwww i think imma cry lol this is the best story I have evr read in my intire lifeadn im not sayin that cuz im in it but thiz is gud
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THE ONE AND ONLY MICHELLE AKA CHELLEY.....YA DIGG

Chris:I need you
Dani:he a lying ass
Chelley:I don't know chris
Dani:girl leave him like a hooker on a street corner
Morgan:naw girl grabbed that
Chris:Ya'll but out
Dani:naw hoe imma beat your as

Mhm dior girl u need 2 4get about fizz and get on yo grown woman and get wit a grown man. Ha.

Oop de it is

Run it

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"A good girl is a bad girl that don't get caught"

That describes me perfectly.

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Oooh boi I think of u.
On 2 occassions.
That's when I want.
That's when I need it.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

wow im mad at dior y wud she forgive his ass
man we all noe fizz is cheatin on hur n she 2 naive 2 find it out
run it

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ya gurl bri

omg!!! im sooo happy!!!!!
estoy muy bien!!!
run it!!

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" Whatever" i said snatching the bag out of her hand and eating the chips. "Hey umm..what if maria told you she was pregnaet" chelley asked..."what" i asked confused.."you know..preggie, having a baby"..."I dont know, support her" i said. "Well umm, i got something to tell you...i'm preggie"chelley said rubbing her stomach. "What" i screamed. " Look dont tell no one" i said..."have you told trey" i asked..."no" she said shaking her hand. "Why" I asked..."Cause it's not treys baby" chelley said..."What" i said.

Later on that night chelley explained the whole storie to me, i wanted to cry but held it in. She's planning on getting an aboption..but you never know." So, what we gonna do" chelley asked, i humped my shoulders. "Aint their a party going on tonite"..."yep and marcus house but, i dont wanna go" i said, chelley sighed and headed to the kitchen to get a tub of ice cream. "Omg lets prank call chris" chelley said excited.."what" i asked.." come on, let me talk he dosent know my voice" chelley said.."aiight".

Chelley dialed chris's number blocked and after the 3rd ring he answered. "Hey baby" chelley said seductively.."Who this" he asked.."Who you think" she said.."i dont know, what you want" he asked.."i want you baby, i wanna feel you inside of me" she said while moaning. "really" he said..."Really" she said repeating him. "Sorry babygirl that aint gonna happen".."and why is that" she asked.."i'm tryna to get with somebody now"..."What hoe done got you tripping off of me" she said, i let out a laugh in the background and than covered my mouth. "What's her name" chelley asked.."cant tell you that" he said.."Why not" she asked..."cause we not offical yet, and i dont wanna jinx nothing".."Oh".."is she cute", he was quiet for a minute and than said.."naw, she's beautiful" chelley looked at me and kept talking. "Give me her name" she said.."dior" he saidd.

"Dior"chelley said.." Yeah..she got my head gone" he said.."you really like her dont you" chelley asked.."i think its more than that" he said.."But look i cant be talking to no dam stranger so i'm out , aiight" he said hanging up.Chelley hung up and looked at me. "did you hear that" she said.."yep" i said sitting on the couch in shock. "But hey he proably knew it was us" i said. "Yeah , whatever..i like chris, he's on a grown man level and he treats you like a queen" she said.."and that dam fizz aint doing that"

New Chapter tomorrow
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he always touching you
calling your name
kissing you lips
feeling your flame
body to body
lips to lips
this was meant to be
the real
lovey dovey kiss kiss
_Gossip Girl_

am i in it or is itt tha otha brittany ? iquess it doesn't matter ; lol . buttt fizz is definately cheatinqq ; & she's so blind to ittt . runn itttt !

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