YOU DON'T RUN ME {RE-POST}

YOU DON'T RUN ME {RE-POST}
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RUN IT!!!!!!

RUN IT!!!!
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Go read this story!!!! It's hot!!
♠WHEN YOU’RE GOOD AT SOMETHING……………
Courtesy of my girl Kourtney :]

July 30th 2003

"Let's go! Let's go!"
"What bout her?"
"Who?"
"Her!"
"J-j-just take her. We got no other choice."
"Aight!"
"Come on b**** let's go!"

I struggled to get up. I was in too much pain. I didn't even wana go. Damn I hate July 30th. 2001 this day, my brother and mother died. This time last year my baby father and boyfriend at the time was taken to jail for the death of James and mama. The drama never ends. Cause today I been beaten up real bad. My plan back fired when I tried to get Tiffanay and Ciara kidnapped.

*~*FLASHBACK*~*

August 23th 2002

"Yo Marcus. What's good yo?"
"Yo Yo Amita. What's really good? You lookin hella sexy these days, ready to-"
"I aint givin you none. And ima mama now."
"Oh. Is yo baby daddy, James and ya mamaz killer?" He said with a smirk on his face.
"Yaint funny. I need you to do me a favour."
"What would that be?" He replied coming closer to me.

I could smell the weed even stronger. So I backed away. I took out the picture I had with Tiffany and Ciara.

"See these two b****es. I want you to kidnap them for me. Ima give you time and date wh-"
"Wait." He interrupted. "You want me to be your hitman? But you won't let me hit you?"
"I only want you to kidnap them. I'll do the rest myself."
"What I get from this?"
"Well. What you want?"
"You."
"Nah Marcus you can't get me."

Just as I said that Donzee and Bella came in. They were both lookin hella pissed and when I asked them what was wrong. Bella said that Abby was in the hospital cause her and Chris was foghting, then they said Chris was on the loose. I knew what that meant. He too was out to get revenge or something like that. Chris was dangerous. But so was I. I wasn't scared of no dudes. Put ya hands on me and be prepared to fight.

Well I thought I could always win a fight with a dude. I had always done that when I was growing up. So, Marcus, Bella, donzee and I went back to mine to get Choicy and Shanay. Then we headed off to the hospital. Whilst we were there I told the girls of my plan. They all liked it. But Marcus was still not fully on our side.
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read these please
YOU DONT RUN ME
PLAYETTE CARD

RUN IT I WAS WONDERING WHERE THIS STORY WAS.....

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CHRiS ALL i WANNA D0 iS BE WiTH y0U!
I ALWAyz ASK MySELF iS THiS L0VE?
BUT OBVi0USLy y0U HAVE SUM y0UNG L0VE WiTH RiH RiH!
BUT GUESS WHAT i'LL BE JUST FiNE!

Blah! Re-post...
RUN IT!!!!
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Go read this story!!!! It's hot!!
♠WHEN YOU’RE GOOD AT SOMETHING……………
Courtesy of my girl Kourtney :]

lol abby
ima run wen i get some more ppl in here
yall can help 2

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read these please
YOU DONT RUN ME
PLAYETTE CARD

WHERE DO I START
THIS s*** IS CRAZY AS HELL
I CANT THINK OF ANY THING SO JUST
RUN IT TO THE FULLEST

DUN DUN DUUUUNNNNNN!
RUN IT

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_Abby&Chris_
♥---I keep that on lock!
:::
If Jack helped you off a horse...
Would you help Jack off his horse?
LMAO

REVENGE!!!!

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You a star ☆
Baby you a star
You a sta-a-a-ar
You a sta-a-a-ar

Cuz when you shine ☼
Baby when you sh-i-i-ine
When you sh-i-i-ine
When you sh-i-i-ine

You'll be lighting up my life (oh)

Light up my life (oh)

K I WANT ALL READERZ
TO MAKE SUFFICIENT COMMENTZ
AND IF YAL SAY SUMN I LIKE THEN IMA JUS
SLIDE IT IN THA STORY IF ITZ A NICE LIL SUGGESTION
CAUSE I STIL AINT FINISHED WRITIN CHAP 3
ALL COMMENTZ, SUGGESTIONS, RUN ITZ ARE WELCOMED
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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

Chapter 2 Final part

I jumped up in a cold sweat and woke up Shad at the same time. I can't believe it was a dream, it seemed so real. I felt the tears begin to form in my eyes, we were leaving here today to go back to Vegas, and somehow I didn't want to go back.

"Baby, what's wrong?"

I looked into Shad's eyes or at least I tried to look him in the eyes, but my eyes were watery, so my visioin was blurry. He used his thumbs to wipe away my tears and just as I was about to speak, it happened. They came for him. It took them a year to figure it out, whilst I was trying to link everything back to my dream.

Before they bust into the house all I heard was Mr. Moss we know you are in there, so you have two options, either come out with your hands up, or we break your door down. When I heard that I froze. He froze.We snapped out of it though, when they broke the door down. He told me that he was sorry, then jumped through the window.

They came in the room and one officer asked me where he was. I was still focussed on the window, my eyes were fixed, my brain raced. At first I didn't know why they wanted him. Why he ran. Why...

"We got him. He's down." One officer shouted.

Another ran to the window, whilst one held a gun pointed towards me.

"Yup he's down, they had to shoot him."

With that said. I passed out. I didn't end up going to Vegas because of that. I had spent two days in hospital.

Yup, there again. Doing something I did some days ago. Watching the news. This time this was said.

"A young man, Shad Moss was taken in for the murder of James Hamilton and his mother Janaki Hamilton."

This was crazy. I gave him my life, my heart and my everything. He is the father of my daughter, but also the killer of my brother and sister. The report hadn't even finished there. cause they said "The police are still looking for his accomplice, Chris Brown."

Just great. The guy who is my sister's boyfriend. I had to contact her, I had to let her know. I had to contact the police. I had to do something. I had to get revenge.

My eyes were on flames at this point. I was burning up. I had been to hell and back. I was no angel now. I was the devil's accomplice. I wanted to kill Shad and Chris. But I knew that way they wouldn't feel the pain in which I was feeling. So I had to do something. My mind raced, until the switch in my brain flicked on.

I would get Shad's cousin Tiffany and Chris' sister Ciara both kidnapped. I would get them released on bail the day Tiffany and ciara goes missing, then start sending calls to threaten them, I would get someone to shoot Shad and someone to cut Chris. My revenge would be slow, but painful.

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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

Chapter 2 Continued

We were in the hospital for three weeks before being discharged, because we were both in critical conditions after I gave birth. I was warned of the risks of not having a C section done, but I wanted to have a fully natural birth. I did get pregnant naturally didn't I? I wasn't the virgin Mary who never had sex, but somehow got pregnant. I wanted to feel the pain, the pain in which my mother went through when she was having me. I took the chances, even though Shad, Abby, Jamzy, Donzee, Choicy and Bella was scared. You see I prayed and believed. Now my daughter and I are doing fine.

Everyone came to visit us whilst we were in there, even Abby's boyfriend [Chris]came to visit me. He and Shad were both friends and Chris was going to be Shanay's godfather. When myself and Shanay were discharged from the hospital, we stayed at Shad's place cause there was all sorts of stuff packed up in her room and it was already planned that we would spend up to 5 months with Shad. It was lovely, all three of us together, like a happy family.

However, that didn't last very long as the days drew closer to mark a year since the death of James and mama. We were gonna fly back to Vegas on the 28th and I was gona take a chance to fly with a new born baby. I began to feel emotionally weak and I felt like a wreck. No-one could imagine the pain in which I was facing.

July 30th 2002

We went to visit the graves and just as before, neither Chris nor Shad was around. They said they had to take care of some business. Just as they said last year for the funeral, they were not able to make it, because they had business to handle. Even the day James and mama died, they weren't around. Now i'm thinking, it's either I'm jumping to conclusions to much or they got something to do with the death of my brother and mother.

As myself, my sisters and bestfirends stood at the graves, Shanay started to cry, so I walked off with her, just to try settle her. When we went back to the others I saw Nick, Rodger and Ricky. I went and greeted them and introduced them to the newest member of our family, not long before Nick got shot. A wound to the heart. This was not good. Abby rang the ambulance, Shanay was crying super bad, we heard a lot of shouting saying go go go.

Next thing, Ricky and Rodger got shot too, but before the ambulance even arrived...

We ...

We... lost Nick...

It didn't stop there though, cause some one else got shot. That some one was....
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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

Chapter 2

June 26th 2002.

There I was sitting up in my hospital bed, thinking about the past. How my life began to change after pops died in 1999, how James and mama died last year, how Abby, Jamzy, Donzee, Bella, Choice and myself had moved from Vegas to the big apple and how lucky aunt Janice had been. Everything in my life had changed. The way in which I viewed life. I took my time to analyse things, I took life a step at a time just to ensure that I didn't end up doing anything stupid.

They still hadn't found out who was responsible for the deaths of James and mama. It's almost been a year and there has been no eyewitness or nothing. just me, but I was unable to identify anyone cause their back was turned to me. James would have been 22 today. Unfortunately some dumb muthafuqa had to steal his opportunity to live life to the fullest.

Whilst I sat up in the bed reminiscin on the past, I turned the tv on to check the news just to see wat was goin on. As soon as I switched it on, there was a report talking about "two men were spotted leaving an old abandoned house on 5th Street. This house was owned by the late James Hamilton, who was shot here, almost a year ago, in front of his little sister Amita."

My body froze over, I can't understand what's happening. Why would anyone want to go into James' house? What is there that they want?

My thoughts were interrupted when [he] entered my room. "Hey beautiful. How you feeling today?" He smiled and approached me.

"Well, I'm tired. That's one thing for sure."
"Aww baby." He said as he kissed my forehead.
"How is Shantay? Did you get to go see her?"
"Yeah I did. She is doing great. She sleep though."

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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

CHAPTER 1 PRT 3

On the day of the funeral our older brothers Nick and Rodger the 23 year old twins and Ricky the eldest, who'se 26 flew over from Minnesota {sp?}. In my whole life I had never seen 3 grown men cry before in my life. And they just cried like babies. On a normal day I would have laughed. But this was no laughing matter. Rodger said he had been planning to come over to pick a fight with James over some dumb s*** and he wanted to surprise mama.

At the funeral, Jamzy and Ricky did a song together. Then Nick and myself read out some poems which mama and James wrote and two in which we wrote. Rodger and Abby read a eulogy one about mama and the other about James. There were readings from other members of the family. The church choir sung mama's favourite song. The pastor did a lil sermon. Then we went to the cemetery.

Just as we were leaving I heard screaming. I turned to see Nick holding his left shoulder, blood was coming from it slowly, so I knew it wasnt an artery. But to think folks would pay respect at a funeral. I knew that I would need to get to the bottom of this, and unfortunately, that meant staying in Vega for a much longer period of time. Nick was rushed to the hospital, his injury was minor, so the doctors, nurses, who ever they was in there with him, had patched him up quite good. He didnt have to stay in the night which was a good thing.

I already knew it wouldn't be Tevin who been shootin people, cause he wasnt at the funeral. He was behind bars, just to make it clear.

But who could it have been? I know that they are clever, cause they seemed to have everything under their control. I was ready for war. This was gona be a war. One in which was gon take place in the neighbourhood, and it wouldnt end till i announce the person i was beating up as dead.

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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

CHAPTER 1 CONTINUED

With all that was going on, cops, forensic scientists, everyone rushing round the house. It was chaotic. [Jamie] came in and walked over to us. She asked me what happened, she asked for mama and James. Poor baby didn't know her brother and mother died. She was the baby in the family. Jamzy was only 16. Still in school, so the plan was that she would live with mama till she finsihed high school, then come to live with me and my girls. But that plan had to change, cause now, there was no mama.

"Jamzy, come here hun. Take a seat." Abby said whilst walking over to her.
"Aiight I aint like the sound of that. Cause that's the same thing mama said to me two years ago..." She inhaled deeply, I knew what she was about to say, but I made her complete her sentence. "When popz died."

Jamie took a seat and Abby knealed infront of her. She wiped away tears from her face before proceeding with the bad news.

"Jamzy, mama and James..." Abby was slowly inhaling and exhaling. This s*** wasn't easy.

I walked over to them and held Abby in my arms and completed the sentence. My spit choked me, my eyes burned, but I had o let Jamzy know.

"They got shot and died." I said. keeping my eyes fixed on her.
"Where did they get shot?" I heard her manage to utter.
"James got shot in the heart." I paused for 5 minutes and cried. When I finished crying, I told her "mama got hit with a brick, it hit her in the head... causing her to bleed severely. "

Jamie shook her head in disbelief. "Yall lyin to me. Please tell me yall playin a dumb trick on me."
"Jamzy, we wouldn't do s*** like that. That's the last thing we would say." I calmly explained to her.

The rest of that day was a blur to me. I just remember us going back to Abby's house and phoning around to inform the family of what had happened.

Two days later and I was still in Vegas. The killer's weren't found as yet and there was more bad news to come. My aunt Janice was living with this dude she called her husband. I had never liked him. But u know, gotta be quiet and submissive, conform to all that s***. So I said nothing, not even to James. But this dude was beating on aunt Janice.

We got a phone call at around midday saying that she was in the hospital. When we arrived I saw him. The evil ass muthafuqa. How could he do this. He is the reason why she here and he had the audacity to cry? I couldn't believe this mofo.

We were in the waiting area for 3 hours waiting for news, then the doctor decided to show up.

"Are you the family of Janice Johnson?"
"Yes we are" We all said jumping to our feet.
"So what's the news doc?" The ass asked.
"Well you will be pleased to kno that she is in a very stable condition. She is a lucky woman. She got an angel watching over her, because she has a broken rib which punctured her lungs, but... I don't know how this happened... but.... she is able to breathe without a ventilator and she didn't lose much blood. So we were able to work on her."

I looked over at the devil and he looked scared. I approached him and asked "what's wrong? Sad that my aunt still alive?" He looked at me, "look little girl keep out." "Well as far as I am concerned, I aint little. I kno you did this, you will pay." With that I walked off.

Two minutes later the cops showed up.
"Mr Tevin Johnson?" One called.
"Here."

They walked over to him. Next thing I heard was "Mr Tevin Johnson you have the right to remain silence..."

For me, that was great victory. I didn't listen to the rest cause they got him. I didn't know who said anything, but I was surely thanking them.

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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby

Chap 1

July 1st 2001, it was finally time to leave this place. I couldn't understand why it's taken so long for us to get sorted. I was moving from Vegas to somewhere. I really didn't know where, all I know is was gon be away from all these fake ass folks. As for all these dudes round here? Well, I hope they all rot in hell.

As I was sitting on the steps round the back, I saw James on his way home. You see, James is my older brother, he's 21, he don't give a damn bout no-one but me, and I aint the youngest. But big bro always lookin out for me. He aint live with us no more, but then again you might as well say he does, cause he lives right cross the road from us and he spends more time in our house than his.

"Amita, what you doing out here sis?" I remember him saying. My response... I don't remember, all I can remember was him getting shot. He was lying there in a pool of blood. I couldn't move, cause my legs were like jelly. I couldn't scream cause fear was choking me. No-one could save James. Not even me. Amita Sarai Hamilton. 19 years of age but unable to save her brother who loved her dearly.

This is where one journey ended and two other journeys began.

I sat there in horror, trembling when my sister Abby came outside to call me. She too froze in place. She was 20 and beautiful. I adored her also. But her and James? They were not best of friends. He would say she was too much of a little slapper, but hey you really can't say that. She know she sexy and she had to show it off.

We were still in shock and I dont think we had noticed that Miss Jones was tearing up holding James in her hand. The fright took over our bodies, especially mine. I only snapped out of it when I felt someone hold me in their arms. It was my bestfriend Donelle but I call her Donzee. We known each other since rugrat dayz, where we been walkn round tha house but naked without a care in the world.

"Mimi, hun, you're shivering like crazy, come on, let's go inside." She said in the most comforting voice.
"Why did it have to be him Donzee?" I said allowing the tears to roll down my cheeks. " Why did it have to be James? Of all people?"
"Boo, I have no clue. but we gots to get you in the house. You can't stay out here and I have called to cancel the flight, cause it wouldn't be fair to have you leave today as distraught as you are."
"Thank you Donz." I sniffled.
"Anything for my bestie."

We headed in the house and as soon as we reached we heard none other than Bella. She was never the loudest of the group, but she had this crazy ass crush on James, which I guess is the main reason why she was going crazy. If there's anything I gotta admit, it's that I was scared of her. She was red in the face, her makeup dissappeared, her innocent baby face dissappeares. I saw a monster in her. She was a tiger bout to pounce on it's prey.

"Ok. I aint playin. Ima find out who tha f*** done shot James and ima kill them. James aint never done s*** to hurt anyone. He alwayz the peacekeeper. Ima fuq some one up hella..." her voice drifted off in my head.

*smash*

We all fell to tha floor. I looked up to see Choicy holding her right shoulder with blood seeping through. I felt sick. I was sick. I wanted to know who was behind all of this. I ran over to her and looked at her. She was in pain, she too should be leaving here with me, Donzee and Bella.

"Mimi..." was all she said to me. It was hard for her to speak due to the pain she was in.
"Choice... don't go... I can't lose you too. Babygirl stay with me..."
"Noooooooooooooooooooo" I heard Abby scream. I turned my head so fast, that I managed to strain my neck in the process.

I looked in Abby's direction, I saw her holding a female figure in her arms, with tears rushing down her cheeks.

"Omg, Abby, who is it?" I forcefully asked.

They all looked at me with even more pain in their eyes. Tears began to form in my eyes also, cause I suddenly realised who it was. The tears stung my face. It felt as if someone had slapped me with a flat iron. that's how much pain I was in.

When the paramedics finally came. They managed to save Choice on the spot, but mama died. They said that she died before they even got there.

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love or lust?
idk but i think itz love
cuz datz how i feel bout my baby