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*Brand New* -- Whirlwind-- 03.02.13 update (Mature)

Thinking about starting a new story titled "Brand New" It's going to be a little different than my other stories. I cant give too much detail but I am going to post the intro and you all tell me "Keep" or "Dump".

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Awww bt wats goin on dis nigga cusn in wit ricky run it

Aww breezy that was sweet!
Run it plz!

..12..

My day couldn't get any worse, I missed my bus, so now I have to wait 30 minutes for the next one, it's not that bad but now I'm going to be running late for orientation at the college, which is going to make me late for work. I sigh and sit down on the bench, I have been trying to stop thinking about Breezy but I can’t get him off my mind. I pull out my headphones and sit back for the wait. I saw a cream Rolls-Royce pull up and I knew it was <a href='http://postimage.org/image/5zkedhe21/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/5zkedhe21/game_shannon_brown.jpg' border='0' alt="game shannon brown" />Cruz</a>, I wonder what he wants; I hope this has nothing to do with Ricky because I don't work for him anymore and they both know it. Cruz pulled the car over and got out. He smiled that beautiful smile that I used to love so much. I turned my iPod off and waited. "Hey Maliah" I just stared at him with a blank expression, "Merlin"; he smiled and grabbed his heart. "Damn mami, it's like that?" I rolled my eyes. "What do you want?" I crossed my arms over my chest. "I came to take you out Mamita, get you a couple outfits, some shoes, and take you out to eat. Whatever you want." I shake my head because I know there's a catch, with Cruz there is almost always a catch. But despite my better judgment I think I'm going to go with him. I sigh; I could never resist Merlin Antonio Cruz. He knows this and so does Ricky. Cruz reached his hand out to me and I take it.

I got out of the shower and threw on some sweats and a t-shirt. I grabbed my phone again wondering if I should text Mimi, or call her. Damn, I grabbed the blunt off the nightstand and sparked it up. I took a long pull, held it in, and then let it out. As I let out another pull, my phone vibrated. I looked down at it and rolled my eyes. Draya, what the f*** does she want? I don’t have time for this s***. "Hello", I barked. "What the f*** is wrong with you?" I didn’t answer. "What the f*** ever Chris. You should call your daughter every once in a while." I took yet another long pull of the blunt before I put it out. I shook my head. It’s not what you think ya'll, I am not a deadbeat. Draya just always wants things done on her terms. "Where is she?" I heard Draya smack her teeth. "She's with my mom, at Pat's house." "Alright, I'm gonna head out that way in a minute." "Aright." I hung up the phone and went to my closet. It's been a minute since I've seen my baby girl. Draya's always playing games. I change out of my sweats into something a little <a href='http://postimage.org/image/acnzt0t49/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/acnzt0t49/chris_brown_valentines_day_20.jpg' border='0' alt="chris brown valentines day 20" />nicer</a>. I put on some shoes and head out to the mall to grab something for my heart.

Cruz and I were finishing up. I had gotten my hair done and got a couple outfits. I know something’s up though. Cruz had gone to the bathroom when I saw him, my heart skipped a beat. <a href='http://postimage.org/image/uirhrwort/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/uirhrwort/tumblr_mdgkc8_YPPE1r28ar7o1_1280.jpg' border='0' alt="tumblr mdgkc8 YPPE1r28ar7o1 1280" />I</a> touched my hair and looked down at my clothes, I hope he likes it. I heard the toilet flush and it snapped me out of my reverie. s*** they cannot see each other. f***! I panicked. I saw Chris walk into a toy store and caught my breath. Cruz walked up behind me and I jumped. "Hey papi, you scared me." I looked over at the toy store, please stay in there Chris. "You ready? Ricky wanted to see you." "I figured, look I'll call him. I have to stop by my place before work. He knows I won’t run from him because I don’t have to." Cruz held up his hands. “Fair enough." I saw Chris walking out the store and heading towards me and Cruz. I didn't know what to do. I looked at Cruz then looked at Chris. Cruz just stared at me, like he was silently questioning my loyalty. Before I could open my mouth to say anything, Cruz spoke. "What up cuz?” cuz? As in cousin? I slumped against the wall while Chris and Cruz exchanged a handshake and a brief hug. Chris came over to me and sat me on a bench. Cruz looked at me then Chris. ''You think we should tell her?" Chris looked at me. "I'll tell her, you report back to Ricky and I'll hit you up later." And with that Cruz was gone. Chris turned back to me. "Why did you leave?" I opened my mouth to speak but no words came out. I fidgeted with my bags.

Why did I leave? I sighed, and then looked up at Chris. “I shouldn’t have slept with you.” I felt the tears well in my eyes. I got up with my bags in tote and tried to get away before he touched me. Too late, I didn’t make very far before his tugged at my elbow. I stopped but didn’t look back. The tears were flowing now. “Mimi, look at me.” I could feel his warm breath on the back of my neck, smell his cologne that does crazy things to my senses. I tried to wipe my eyes but I had too much in my hands. Chris turned me to him and I heard a muffled swear come from his mouth. “Why are you crying?” He took his thumbs and wiped away my tears. “I didn’t want..I thought that.” He looked at me questioningly. “I felt this connection between us.” He smiled. “Yeah, I feel it too.” I looked down at my feet, and Chris tipped my chin up to him. “Tell me what’s going on inside?” “I wanted to give whatever it was between us a fighting chance, but I just had to go and be a f***ing whore. I can’t do anything right.” Chris put his hand on either side of my face. “Shh, don’t you say that. Your profession doesn’t make you who you are. You are defined by the person that you are inside. You need to let her sow a little more, but don’t you dare say those things about you. You are an amazing, strong woman and I’m glad you’re her with me.” And with that his lips crushed mine. I tried to let his words register in my head but his sensual prowess was much too potent. He tipped my head back to deepen this kiss and I wrapped my arms around his neck. When he finally pulled a way from me I was stunned. Speechless. He just laughed. “Come on, grab your bags. I want to take you to meet someone.”

O he out cold run it

The first two pics were acting up, here they are:

<a href='http://postimage.org/image/ubbo0rdrd/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/ubbo0rdrd/o_CHRIS_BROWN_MOTHER_570.jpg' border='0' alt="o CHRIS BROWN MOTHER 570" />Family Photo</a>

<a href='http://postimage.org/image/txac15tnt/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/txac15tnt/chrissleep.jpg' border='0' alt="chrissleep" />Breezy Sleeping</a>

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“Dear Lord, I don’t know what it is but I just keep having this feeling that I need to pray. Whatever it is Lord I ask that you see it through. I ask that you show up and show out, Father God. May your will be done.”

A tear falls down my cheek and I wipe it away as I grab the <a href='http://postimage.org/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/5vyulypgp/cbmama.jpg' border='0' alt="cbmama" />picture</a> off my desk. My knees get weak and I fall to the floor.

“And Lord, I ask that you will continue to leave your hedge of protection around my son. Please keep him Lord and just give him the strength he needs to survive in this cruel world. Lord all I ask of you is that you bring him home to me, alive and well as the day he was born. He’s my baby Father. He’s all I have and I love him so much. It’s in your son’s holy and righteous name I pray. Amen.

I hold the picture to my chest and let the sobs that rack my body overtake me.

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Damn, what the hell did I just do? I sigh I can’t believe I let myself go like that. I really wanted to make something of this thing that was going on between Breezy and I and I f***ing blew it because I’m such a f***ing slut. I looked over at the clock, 5 in the morning. I looked over at <a href='http://postimage.org/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/t8ww4h5k9/cbsleep.jpg' border='0' alt="cbsleep" />Chris</a>, he looks so adorable. You’d never think under that lied this cold hearted killer. I slip out of the bed gathering my clothes in disgust. I wiped a tear from my cheek and shimmied into my pants. I hurriedly put on my shoes and shirt and grabbed my bag. I look back at him, then walk out the before I make an even bigger fool of myself.

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“So, you used to strip for money and you had a pimp?” <a href='http://postimage.org/image/efi8jpxt5/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/efi8jpxt5/lauren_london_photo.jpg' border='0' alt="lauren london photo" />I</a> nodded, “Not just any pimp, but one of the most dangerous in LA. Mimi tried so hard to steer me away from that life but I wouldn’t listen.” <a href='http://postimage.org/image/lk01sr52h/' target='_blank'><img src='http://s20.postimage.org/lk01sr52h/Dustin.jpg' border='0' alt="Dustin" />Dustin</a> exhaled sharply. “We’ll get through this together.” Dustin was looking at me with those pretty brown eyes, the way he used to look at me when we were together and in love and everything was perfect. I looked away. “Stop looking at me like that.” Dustin frowned, “Like what?” I looked out the window and sighed, “Like you’re in love with me or something.” “Brittani, I’m not in love with you.” “Well that’s a relief.” I felt a tear slide down my cheek as I continued to look out the window gazing at the stars. “I’m not in love with you because a person that’s “in love” can fall out of love at anytime. I love you with every fiber of my being.” I stood up and shook my head violently, tears running rampant “Don’t! Don’t you say that. You don’t love me, you can’t love me. How could you love somebody like me?” Dustin closed the gap between us so quick it made my head spin. He grabbed my face in his hands. “I love you so much Brittani Washington, you were my first love and you’re my only love. I know things between us haven’t been ideal, but you’re home now and we can fix things, we can fix us. You just have to let me in. Let me love you.” I was stunned speechless. I couldn’t think of a coherent thing to say but so I put all I had, every fun time all the sweet memories we shared, the hopes of a future all into a kiss. It was a hungry kiss, like I was lost and finally found my way home. Dustin tilted my head back and deepened the kiss. He ended it by gently kissing my lips, then my forehead. “Thank You Dizzy. Thank you for being my knight in shining armor once again.” Dustin smiled, “Your welcome my love, it’s almost 3 in the morning. Go shower and we can get ready for bed.” I nodded, “Thanks again for letting me stay with you.” He smiled “You know I wouldn’t have it any other way.”

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Last night was different. It seemed as if I was made for her and she was made for me. Sounds cheesy I know even to me, but it was like she was kind of shy with me. She puts up this big macho I can handle my own persona when all she really wants is a man that’s going to treat her right mentally and physically. I grinned, rolled over in the bed to find the other side empty and cold. I sat up on the edge of the bed and ran my hand down my face. She left? What did I do wrong? I get out the bed and go to the bathroom. I walk back to the bed and grab my phone off the nightstand. No missed calls, No text messages. Damn, I throw my phone on the bed and head back to the bathroom.

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“Ey boss, one of the sluts snitched, they overheard that Brittani went back home to Atlanta.” I leaned back in my seat with my cell to my ear. “Good, send Marco and Reyes out there, tell them I said find her, and watch her. I don’t want them showing themselves just yet. Tell them to get all the information they can and report back to me.” I cracked my neck and sat back. “Ay, boss. Will do.”
“They better not f*** this up Cruz.” Cruz is loyal and I trust him with my life, he’s one of the few and I know he’ll set them straight. “I got you boss.” “Ey Cruz, One more thing.” “Yeah boss?” My jaw twitched. “The b**** that gave up the info on Brittani, Kill her! I don’t need any snitches on my team.” “Consider it done boss.” “Good, and all my others, take them out to get something nice; they deserve to be treated every now and then. Especially Maliah, get her dolled up and bring her to me.” “Say no more.” I hung up the phone, lit my cigar, propped my feet up and smiled. “Vamos a jugar”

About to write more.. Thanks for reading :)

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Nessie J!!! I missed you boo!! Thanks for sticking with me mama!! Yeah I used to be so in love with Dustin lol he's so sexy hahah but I'll update more soon!!

Oooo ilove it! Its great! I'm glad yu have another character.
Chris is always wonderful bt I'm glad its Dustin this time instead
of Trey. Everybody use Trey. Dustin jus as sexy. And he red!
Omg he so hot! Bt yea ilike it. Its gud to see Brit doin gud in
her life. Tryin to turn it around. Hopefully that blows over well
and Dustin sucks for havin a baby wit mesha. Bt anyway this
is gud. RUN IT!

Oh my gawd! Nani banani is that yu??!!! Where have yu been all my life?? In my ri-ri voice lol
Ur baaaaaakkkk!!!!! Omg this cause for celebration.
Lol ok imma go read this and come bak and comment. :))))) missed ya!

..10..

I couldn't hold the tears in any longer. I sat on the floor pouring all of my problems out in the form of tears. My mom was crying and also trying to soothe me in the process. "Baby, it's okay. You're home now." Dustin wiped his face, "Yeah baby girl you're safe, we just need to know what happened and what we're up against." I sighed shakily, "I-I" I looked at both Dustin and my mother. I hung my head low, Lord please help me. "I went to California." They both looked at me like they wanted me to continue. "I didn't have anything, no money to my name, no friends or family to help me." My mother spoke, "You had us baby. You had me and Dustin." As I looked at Dustin and my mother I felt an anger I've only felt once course through my entire body with a vengeance. I couldn't keep it in any longer. I know its been years, but I'll never forget. "If you were here for me the way you say then you would have noticed that I had changed. You would have noticed that I wasn't happy anymore." My voice cracked. You would have noticed that my grades were slipping and that I was failing. On the verge of not even graduating." I shook my head feeling the tears stream down my face. "You were too busy following behind that b**** ass nigga Chauncey." My mother stood up so fast that her stool toppled over. Dustin shook his head because he already knew what was coming next. "You are not about to sit her and talk about my husband like that!" Her husband?! Oh my Lord. "You wanted to talk mother so let's f***ing talk! Let's talk about how your 'husband' used to sneak into my room at night while you were at work. How he would." I started crying tears of built up pain and frustration. Dustin came over to me. "Bri, it's alright you don't have to say anything else, it doesn't matter what you did or where you were. You're here now and that's the only thing that matters." I shook my head. "I have to tell you everything, but once I do there's no turning back."

"Where the f*** is that lil nigga?" Oh Lord, this is not going to end well.

"Maliah, go upstairs to my room. It's the master bedroom. First bedroom on the right and I will be there in a few minutes." She didn't budge. She looked like she was in another place. "Maliah, upstairs now!" She jumped a little. "Yes Daddy." She was biting her lip and backing up towards the stairs. I nodded my head towards the room and she hurried up the stairs. I wonder what all that was about, I'll find out soon enough, now it's time to deal with these knuckleheads. "D, bring Eric in here." In walked this c**ky little motherf***er, with a smirk on his face. "What the f*** are you smirking for?" I grabbed the lil nigga by his collar and slid him up the wall. I slammed his head against the wall. "What the hell were you thinking? I've been in this game for a minute, I've been staying a few steps ahead of these niggas and then you go and pull this s***! I should give up your name and throw your ass to the wolves." I slammed his head against the wall again. "When I put you on I wasn't signing up to be? your babysitter. Now I have to work twice as hard to keep what I have made and twice as hard to keep your little ass safe." I brought his feet back to the floor and squeezed his neck. "If you f*** up again I'll kill you. D, take him out back and show him what time it is. I would do it myself, but there's a lady waiting for me upstairs." I threw him on the ground. "Get him out of my sight."

I don't know what it is about this man, but seeing him in charge like that did something to me. Once I got upstairs to the bedroom I scoped the place. It's actually very beautiful. It's masculine and bold, but homey and comfortable all at the same time. I walked to the dresser and picked up one of his colognes. I sprayed it on my wrist and inhaled. Mmmm..I went into his massive walk in closet. I found a nice black button up. I held it up in front of me. Ohh it looks good. I toed off my shoes and neatly placed them by the door. I took off my jeans and my top and put on the button up. My curves fill it out perfectly. I go in my bag to get my comb and chapstick. I comb through my hair and put on some chapstick. I know Breezy is going to be wound tight when he gets upstairs so i grab my stash. I never leave home without it. I always keep some of that good s*** on deck. Got that exotic, pineapple kush to be exact. I pull out my pineapple White Owl cigar, I used to split it with a blade, but now I just use my fingers. I emptied the tobacco into the toilet. I went back to the bed and finished rolling up, as i was licking the paper Breezy walked in. He looked a little surprised, but I could tell he was still pissed. I was getting a little nervous because of the way he was looking at me. His eyes were seeing right through me. I had butterflies in my stomach. "Come over here, I know you've had a rough day." He walked over and sat on the edge of the bed. He sighed. "Rough doesn't even begin to describe it." I sat up on my knees behind him and started to massage his temples. "It's okay, don't worry about all that right now. Just relax." I let my hands slide down from his temples to his shoulders. I placed little kisses up and down his neck. I felt my pulse pick up speed. I had to change the vibe, "I rolled one up for you, it's kind of sweet though. I love pineapple." He turned around and smiled at me. "We'll get to the blunt later, right now I want to know what was up with that 'Yes Daddy'." I felt my pussy throbbing. Oh great. "A weak lapse in judgment?" He shook his head. I bit my lip. "Don't bite your lip, it turns me on." I kept biting my lip and unbuttoned his shirt. His hands were on me in no time. I pulled him to me and kissed his luscious lips. I wrapped my legs around him. "Mmmm." I rubbed myself up against his growing erection. "Oh Breezy.." "Mmhmm, I like the way you say my name." I couldn't take it any more, I started to pull down my lace panties and Chris finished taking them off. I spread my legs and rubbed my hand down my pussy. Chris grabbed my thighs then went to work. I couldn't stop shaking. "Oh s***, s***." "Uh huh, make that pussy cum for Daddy." I moaned. "Not yet, I want you inside me. Chris shifted on the bed and grabbed a condom. He let me put it on him, then he pushed the head inside. "Ohhh.." He went deeper and deeper until he was in to the hilt. He was hitting all my spots, I felt my pussy clench up. He started to move faster and faster. "Ohh, Christopher I'm about to cum." "Ohh s*** Mimi, s***." We both reached our peaks together. Chris kissed me then pulled out. He threw out the condom then came back to the bed smiling. "Now, how bout that blunt?"

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Just finished first part of the update :) I hope you guys like it!

About to finally add more!! I know its been a while! I was on deployment, had a lot going on but im back now!! Gotta get my writing game back up!! Love You Guys!

Will update soon!

Thanks for the love! I will update today!

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omgg... i like this... the preacher lady is sooo nice.. and f***kn chris...MMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmm....

need i say more???

So.. it's 2 mains? dustin n bri.. n chris n mimi??

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Omg run it

@diamontez no prob lol

Lol. Thanks. I get confused easily. Brand New then. :)

@diamontez you can put either or lol thanx for reading!

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Ooh. that was foul Lameesha. Lol.
Run it.
Or Brand New.
I'm confused.

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“So, what could I get for you two darlings today?” I looked over the menu. “I’ll take a double cheeseburger with bacon, French fries and a double chocolate milkshake.” Breezy and the waiter both looked at me in amazement. I laughed “I like to eat.” Breezy smiled, “I’ll have the same thing.” The waitress took our order and left. “Wow girl. Now I want to see if you’re going to eat all of that.” I smiled. “I will I’m starving. I haven’t eaten all day. So, what all should I know about you Mr. Breezy?” He grinned, “Well, actually I want to know about you. I can tell you about myself at anytime. First things first , what’s your name?” I grinned, “It’s Miliah Michele, but you can call me Mimi.” “Okay Mimi, What are you going to major in?” “I actually wanted to major in Business Management; I want to open up my own Dance Studio.” He looked at me with a glint of something in his eyes, but I couldn’t figure out what it was. “That’s what’s up. I have a degree in business management myself.” I was shocked, I know he’s in the streets, but to have a degree also that’s rare. Wait a minute—I received a text message. <em>Mimi, Sonny got shot and Ricky is on a rampage. If you know where Bri is let her know to watch her back. He’s threatening to kill her and I think he’s serious. Love yah Ariel.</em> Oh God, it’s all coming back to me now. The waiter came back to the table with our food. “What’s the matter you look like you just seen a ghost.” I sighed. I really like this man, but I don’t know how he’s going to feel about what I have to say. “Does the name Ricardo Alonzo Chavez Jr. mean anything to you?” Breezy looked taken aback. I shook my head. “Damn it, I knew I heard your name before. Ricky’s brother just got shot, so I know he’s going to be on some other s*** and now he’s after my best friend.” Breezy scooted closer to me. “I want you to come with me and tell me everything about your friend and what you know about Ricky. He’s been after me for years now I’ll explain everything later, but we have to go.” Breezy’s phone rang. “What’s good D?” “Yeah, I heard. What!! Tell that nigga I said his ass can f***ing stand by. I’m on my way.” I was used to this from Ricky but not Chris. He hung up and grabbed my hand. He paid the bill and left a very nice tip for the waiter. “Sorry Rosie, we have to go, but thanks for everything.” “Do you want me to wrap it up for you?” My stomach growled. “Yes please.” Breezy looked at me. “You go get the truck, I’ll get the food.” He nodded, “Aight ma.”

“Brittani! Sweetheart, come down here.” I rolled my eyes. I know Dustin and I said we were going to talk, but I just don’t even want to look at him right now. How could he do that to me? Sleep with my sworn enemy and get her pregnant, but I’m not supposed to be mad and everything is supposed to be okay. f*** that s***. “I’m not coming down there ma. Tell him to get the hell out of here.” “Brittani Alicia! Watch your mouth. This boy has been down here all night and he’s not leaving until you speak with him.” I sighed, “Ma, this is your house not his, kick his ass out!!” I heard my mother slam something on the counter; I was standing at the top of the stairs hiding. “Brittani, get down here right now!!” I whined. “Don’t make me come up there. Bring your yellow ass down here.” I ran down the stairs past Dustin to my mom. “Yes ma’am?” She had her arms crossed against her chest. “Why are you being so rude to this boy?” I looked at Dustin with disgust written all over my face. He looked down and sighed then looked at my mother. “It’s partly my fault Ms. Washington, the reason she won’t speak to me.” “Well what is it?” I looked at Dustin with a “you’re gonna get it face”. “I slept with someone and got them pregnant.” My mom lifted her eyebrow questioningly. “I see, well Brittani what did you expect this boy to do? You just ran off and didn’t tell anyone where you were going, or what you planned on doing. You just left.” I crossed my arms to my chest. “You’re defending him? He slept with Lamesha! And I’m the bad guy.” My mom took a step back and sat down in her knitting chair. “Not Lamesha! Dustin, you know how much she hates Brittani.” “I know Ms. Washington, I was just so angry with Brittani. I should have handled the situation a lot differently, but it all in the past I can’t take it back, I love my daughter and I just want Brittani and I to move forward.” I wiped the tears from my face. I sighed, I was about to spill my guts when I got a text. <em>Hey mama, Ariel just told me that Ricky is out for your head. Why didn’t you tell me you ran? Someone killed Sonny now he’s pissed. Watch your back little mama. I’ll call you in a few once I get some stuff figured out.</em> I dropped my phone and fell to the ground. Dustin ran toward me as did my mother. “Bri, what happened? What’s wrong?” I kept shaking my head and crying hysterically. “I just wanted to get away. I had to get away.”

hw do i get an update?

hey ladies, I'm working on the updates now. I should have them to you by tonight or early tomorrow!!

Let the games begin; and I believe the last update for never mix business with pleasure that I got was number...6?