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Chapter One: Welcome To Boot Camp Missy

Momo's POV

~On The Airplane~

"Goodmorning passengers this is your pilot Mr. Myers speaking! It is now 6:30 a.m. we will be reaching our destination in
approximately 30 minutes. Please enjoy the rest of the ride!" he cheered getting off the intercom.

I sighed heavily looking out the window as the sun begin to come out a little making the sky a purple orange color. I
heard a loud snore next to me and I turned over to nudge my sister Mulan in the side. She jumped up.

"Ouch girl! Don't be doing that! You know my skin bruise up easily." she groaned rubbing her side.

"Man whatever. We wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you." I spat.

"Girl whatever. But you know what, I think this might actually be kinda fun. I'm ready to see all those sexy soldiers
walking round' giving me demands." she grinned.

I rolled my eyes playfully.

"You are so full of it." I giggled.

"Yeah I know. I've been told." she laughed.

"But seriously though, I can't believe Mom did this to us." I said shaking my head.

"Girl me either....I wonder what this camp will be like." Lani said texting on her phone.

"Me to......me to." I said looking out the window thinking about how we ended up in this situation in the first place.

~Flashback~

~At the Walker Family <a href="http://www.sterlingchaserealty.com/zretsphotos/7/e8/1/7-O5166083-1.jpeg">Home</a>~

"<a href="http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/nruboc/nruboc0808/nruboc080800071/3434675-a-pretty-asian-woman-at-home-on-the-porch.jpg">Mom</a>, please don't make me
do it this is bullsh*t."
<a href="http://distilleryimage5.ak.instagram.com/e061a3feef3311e2b4b422000a1f903d_7.jpg">I</a> said as my mom gave me a stern look.

"Listen here. You and your sister are out of control! All y'all do is get in fights at college! I'm done with that!" she
yelled throwing a pair of my jeans at me.

"Mom this is ridiculous!"
<a href="http://mrdreamzmag.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/sean-paul.png">Mulan</a> said coming in
looking just as upset as me.

"Look y'all don't want to act right, I'mma teach y'all a listen. Y'all are going to boot camp TODAY. No if ans buts about
it." she said packing up some more of our clothes in two suitcases.

"But mama please. That wasn't my fault! That hoe was asking for it! She knew not to look at me cross eyed." Mulan said
flipping her long hair.

I rolled my eyes.

"Man now look what you done did." I said crossing my arms like a little child.

"Whatever man. This is child abuse." Mulan argued.

I chuckled at her nonsense.

"Well it can be child abuse all it want. Y'all are getting outta my house pronto! Your uncle John says Fort Brag Boot
Camp is an amazing place to learn discipline. And if I can't teach y'all discipline maybe someone else can." my mom said.

I sighed heavily and stormed out the room and went into the living room and got on my iPhone. The first person I called
was my best friend in the whole world, Peaches. He, yes he, was one of the coolest gay guys in the world. I loved him to
death. His ringtone "My Milkshake" by Kelis was playing until finally he answered the phone.

"B*tch!" I cheered.

"Heeeeeey b*tch! What's going on Mo Mo?" he asked calling me by my little nick name.

I sighed deeply, rolling my eyes.

"Man you know that fight that happened yesterday at the club?" I said.

"Boo boo how could I forget you and Lani beat the hell outta those whores." he said popping his gum.

"Okay, so tell me why the hell when my mom find out she talking bout sending us to damn boot camp to discipline us! Wth do
we look like to her? That sh*t ain't fair." I said shaking my head.

"Girl what?! Oh no honey you gots to do something! I can't be without my two main b*tches here! You know we have perform
at the twerk festival down at the Booty Tree next week!" he argued.

"Boo, I wish I could, but my mom's is dead a** serious right now. She say we leaving today. She says we're
gonna be gone for awhile." I sighed.

"What?! Oh hells nawh! Nah uh boo no! That is not gone work b*tch! Who else gone teach me how to suck d*ck right?! You
remember that lil trick you told me to use on Marcus?" he said.

"Yeah?" I giggled.

"It worked! I had him screaming like he was singing opera honey. Booyah!" he cheered.

I laughed hard at him. Him and his boo Marcus was a hot mess. One minute they arguing the next they kissing all on each
others faces. It's so funny. I shook my head still laughing.

"B*tch you nasty!" I laughed.

"Hoe I know you ain't talking! You the one that f*cked half the football team AND s*cked Dale's pickle for a nickle
okayyy!" he joked.

"You must be confusing me with yo mama." I said and burst out laughing.

"Listen here slut don't be getting on my mama now. I know she was a rolling stone but dang. Don't hate on her game." he
teased.

We talked some more and finally said our final goodbye. I hung up and just as I did my
<a href="http://cdn.mos.totalfilm.com/images/m/malcolm-x-00-470-75.jpg">Dad</a> walked in, sitting his briefcase on the
coffee table, holding a bottle of water in his other hand.

"Hello sweetie. Aren't you suppose to be in school?" he asked me giving me a kiss on the forehead.

I sighed heavily.

"No sir." I mumbled looking down.

"No? Why? Is it vacation time already?" he chuckled taking off his tie and taking a huge gulp of his water.

"No Daddy.....me and Lani got expelled." I said as he spit out his water and started coughing slightly.

"Say what young lady?!" he coughed.

"M-me and Lani got expelled." I said lowly.

"What in the world Momoko?! How did this happen?!" he yelled sternly.

"We....we got in a huge fight at the club on campus and that was it Daddy." I said trying to give me the puppy dog eyes
that always works on him.

"No that look is not gonna work this time. Mulan?! Get down here now young lady." he yelled up the stairs.

I could heard footsteps until finally she came down stairs reluctantly.

"Heeey Daddy you lookin' good there sir." she said giving him a huge smile, trying to butter him up.

"That's not gonna work. I can't believe you girls. Haven't I and your mother taught you better? You two know not to be
fighting in school." he said putting his hands on his hips as my mother came down the stairs carrying two suitcases.

"I told them that if they didn't straighten up they were going to boot camp and damnit that's what I mean." my mom said
crossing her arms.

"Boot camp? Are you su-" my Dad was cut off.

"As a heart attack." my mom said looking at him, challenging him to test her authority, but of course he did not.

"I'm sorry girls, but your mother is right." he said giving us a little smile.

"P*ssy." I mumbled under my breath.

"What was that?" he said.

"Nothing Daddy." I said giving him a fake smile.

"Good then. Now what time are they leaving darling?" Dad asked Mom.

"Later on today. Since the camp is in Virginia it's gonna take them 10 hours to get there. I already got their plane
tickets. The flight isn't leaving until 9 o'clock tonight. They will reach the airport around 6 and I will
have someone to pick them up and drive them to the camp." she smiled.

I rolled my eyes.

"This is like the ultimate torture! I hate this." Mulan hissed.

"Oh well. Yall two spoiled brats need to see the outside of this lavish life. Maybe if you spend some time in the camp
you'll realize life is not always a piece of pie. It's hard out there. The struggle is real. You need an experience like
this. I think it would be great for you two." My mom said walking into the kitchen.

"Daddy please." We begged.

"Sorry sweeties. There's nothing I can do. Your mothers' mind is made up." he said giving us both a kiss on the forehead
and walking upstairs.

~End of Flashback~

Minutes later I woke up to a slight bump.

"Whoa! Wth was that?!" I said sleepily, rubbing my eyes.

"Girl we just landed." Lani said as she was putting her stuff in her Michael Kors purse.

"Really? Damn that was fast." I said as the pilot came on the intercom telling us we could get off the plane in a few.

~Off the Plane && In the Airport~

Me and Mulan walked around the airport a bit til our ride gets here. This place was huge. It was beautiful too! There were
so many little souvernirs we could buy. I bought one for Mulan. It was a little necklace with the word best. She bought me
one that said friends. We then got us icees from the Burger King they had in the airport and then sat down chatting,
waiting for the driver. As always though all eyes were on us. I don't mean to brag but, we are the hottest girls in
school. Boys were walking by whistling and winking, but we just ignored them. I guess it was the outfits we had on:
<a href="http://www.polyvore.com/passion_4fashion_aztec_beauty/set?id=91143867">mine</a>
<a href="http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=87692674">Lani's</a>
.
"Girl what if we have to sleep on disgusting a** mattresses!" Lani said scrunching up her face.

"Give that's not even half the problem! Imagine if we have to scrub floors with toothbrushes!" I cried.

"Omg even worse! What if we have to..." she said and we both finished the sentence.

"Cut our hair! Ahhhhh!!!" we cried holding onto our long hair.

"Omg this is a freaking nightmare!" I cried.

As we were going on and on some random guy just walked up to us.

"Uh, excuse me ladies. Are you the Walker sisters?" he asked.

"Yes...we are." we said in unison.

"Good, good. My name is Mr. Thomas. I will be your driver for today. Your mother has instructed me to take you to boot
camp. It is a two hour drive there. Would you like to grab something to eat before we get on our journey?" he said
politely.

"No sir." we said in unison again.

"Okay well I already have your luggage. Shall we go?"

"We shall." we said getting up and grabbing our purses.

~Later On~

After we got in the limo we were headed towards the camp. Honestly, my stomach was filled with so much butterflies I
thought I was gonna be sick. And Mulan wasn't any better, she kept ranting on the phone to all her friends. I sighed and
looked out the window at the rivers and lakes we were passing. I squeezed my eyes shut. I was very very VERY terrified or
water let alone bridges rivers and lakes. I hated water. Ever since I was a little girl, for some reason, I've always been
scared of water. I was about to start panicking until Mulan calmed me.

~2 Hours Later~

Two hours later I woke up to the limo stopping in front of a gate that had barb wire surrounding it. I gulped loudly. We
must be here I thought. I looked over at Lani and she had this look of disbelief on her face.

"Wth is this? A concentration camp?" she groaned.

"Looks like it." I groaned.

"Maaaaan sh*t!" she sighed deeply.

Just then the gate opened and a young soldier who I must say was looking mighty fine in that uniform came out and walked
up to the limo. He started talking to Mr. Thomas.

"Goodmorning sir, <a href="http://thumbs.hotnewhiphop.com/public/article/600_1340217605_rapper_ti.jpg">my</a> name is First Sergeant
Harris. Just park in the visitors park and we will take the luggage and put in the cabin. Now, where's the two recruits?"
he asked.

I thought the only way we could survive was to be optimistic and sweet hearts. Maybe we'll get outta here faster. I told
Mulan that and she smiled.

"Girl you so smart you should be on 106 & Park!" she grinned agreeing with me.

"Their back there." Mr. Thomas said as he got out and opened our doors.

When we got out we had bright smiles on our faces.

"Goodmorning officers my name is Momoko, Mo no, for short,it's Japanese for peach child!" I smiled widely extending my
hand for him to shake. He just looked at me like I was crazy.

"Hoe that's not how you introduce yourself! Look, this how you do it. Heeeeeeeeey! My name is Mulan! It's Chinese for
wood orchid! But er'body call me Lani for short! And I'm ready to work sir!" she said put her hand up to salute him, but
she extended her arm as if she was saluting Hitler.

I burst out laughing. She looked at me like "what?".

"B*tch you doing it wrong! You look like you're saluting Hitler." I laughed and she joined me.

"Oops!" she laughed.

Our giggling was quickly shut down when we saw the mean glare F.S. Harris was giving us.

"Sorry." we said looking down, playing with our fingers.

"Oh you're not sorry yet. Sergeant Major Brown is gonna have fun with
you two. Especially you." he said looking at me, smirking.

I twisted my face up about to say something but Mulan gave me that don't you dare look. I rolled my eyes and crossed my
arms.

"Anyway so, where are we staying? I heard you say cabin, does that include a jacuzzi?" Mulan asked smiling.

"Jacuzzi? What you think this is? This ain't the Four Seasons." he said in a country accent.

"What?! Then where we staying?" I shrieked.

"Follow me ladies." was all he said.

"Wait I gotta get my gucci bag." I said going into the limo and getting my purse and iPhone.

"Girl me to!" Mulan said getting her Michael Kors purse.

"Now we ready." we smiled.

He shook his head and we walked through the gates. As soon as we stepped on the scene all eyes were on us.

"Hi soldiers! I salute you!" I cheered as they stopped working on what they were doing to stare.

Me and Mulan were waving and speaking to everyone, looking like the superstars we are. Some waved, some said hey back, but
a majority of looked at us like we were crazy.

We then arrived to this cabin labeled Cabin B.

"This is where you'll be staying ladies." Harris said opening the door and leading us inside.

My mouth dropped! This was horrible. There were beds lined up in the room with a thin piece of cover. There was suitcases
already set by the beds so I'm assuming those were claimed.

"This is....this is....ugh!" I said as we followed Harris to our beds that had a uniform on each of them.

It was tiny, nothing like my king size bed at home. I sighed heavily rolling my eyes.

"This is where you'll sleeping. You are not allowed to go anywhere but here unless instructed otherwise. You're late for
training so you will be instructed to do suicides when you get with the rest of the recruiters. You will certainly have
to take off those inappropriate outfits so take those off and put on your uniforms. Anything else you need to know? No?
Good. I will be waiting outside the door. You have 15 minutes. Oh and don't address me as dude. You will address
me as First Srgt. Harris and that only. You two ladies have a nice day." he said marching out.

I slumped on the bed picking up our uniforms. Hmmm....

"Girl I think we can spruce this uniform up a little bit." I smirked.

"What do you mean?" Lani said sitting on her bed that was next to mine.

"Girl I got some rhinestones and some glitter to make make these uniforms
pop!"

"For real? That'll have to wait. We have to get out there quick. Harris said we were going to do suicides and that doesn't
sound too pleasant." she said.

I nodded my head. Mulan was putting on her uniform while I was texting Peaches.

"Girl what are you doing, we gotta hurry!" she said looking at me.

"I know, I know. I'm just telling Peaches what's going on." I smiled at his text he just sent me.

"We don't have time for that chick. We only got a few minutes left to get ready or else." she warned me.

I rolled my eyes.

"Whatever. That uniform smells. I'm not putting that sh*t on. You know green is not my color." I said scrunching up
my face.

She rolled her eyes.

"Can't say I didn't tell you." she said as she buttoned up her camo shirt and then put on her hat.

"Ladies it's time for you to come out!" Harris yelled through the door.

"Let's bounce." I said getting up and dusting off my leggings.

"Girl you is gone be in trouble!" she said seriously.

"Yeah, whatever. I don't care. These people can't tell me what to wear." I
said.

"Whatever. It's your a** though." she said as we walked out the door.

Harris looked at me like I was crazy.

"Why the hell are you still wearing that?" he yelled.

"Chill man. You need to calm down. I ain't wearing that bull. I'll just have
to face the consequences." I said smartly.

"Oh really? You think you bad?" he said getting in my face.

"Whoa my nigga you bets back up. I know kung fu." I said.

"You know what, you talk alotta sh*t. Let's see if you'll be the same when Srgt. Mjr. Brown is finished with you." he growled.

Just then we heard a bunch of males voices chanting.

"Sound off! One two! Sound off! Three four!" they chanted marching in
place with guns on their shoulders.

"Ahhh! Omg soldiers!" we shrieked together.

"Heeey! How yall doing?" we said flirtatiously.

Harris clenched his jaws at us and we got super quiet.

"Teeeeeen hut!" one of the soldiers yelled as the others stopped marching
and stood straight.

"Oh my God that was so synchrinized." I whispered to Mulan.

"Girl mhmmm..." she whispered back as we giggled softly.

"Hello there First Srgt." the <a href="http://www.camloot.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/tyga.jpg">soldier</a> said
saluting Harris.

"Hello there Corporal." Harris said.

"Who are these two young ladies?" he asked looking at us.

"These two....insults are Private Momoko and Private Mulan. They're new here and so far, neither one of them follows the
rule. Especially Private Momoko." he said looking at me.

"Oh boy. Sergeant Major Brown is gonna have fun with you." he said to me.

I rolled my eyes.

"Yo why everybody keep saying that? He ain't bout that! He ain't bout that life! Imma thug okay. He ain't gone do nothing!
He ain't my Daddy. So as far as I'm concerned he can kiss my pigu. Which is Chinese for butt." I said crossing my arms.

It got really quiet when I said that. I looked at everybody and they were looking stiff.

"What? Is there something on my arm? Is it a bug?! Omg get it off!" I shrieked as I stepped back and bumped into something
hard.

"So I can kiss your a** huh?" a voice said, sending chills down my spine.

I slowly turned around to see <a href="http://thelavalizard.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/Chris-Brown-Dont-Judge-Me_TheLavaLizard.jpg">him</a> staring down at me. I felt my heart skip a beat. Damn this boy was fine, but he sure as hell looked angry through them
shades.

"Uh....u-uh....uh....." I stuttered.

He took off his shades and continued to glare at me.

Oh sh*t what have I just done?

To Be Continued.

Don't be a SILENT reader! Don't! Just don't do that! How am I suppose to know how yall feel about my story if ya don't
comment? lol Anyway this is something new I wanted to try and Yes I am going to finish my other two stories I got out there.
I'm defiantly finishing Welcome To Hell: When Chris Brown Goes Insane. But anyway let me know how yall like the story so
far!! :-) I put my all into my work so don't not give me feedback!!!! <3

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lol thank you i will try to update as soon as possible!! :D

OMFG! She just doesn't learn. Who can be that damn stubborn. This nigga made you run 100 laps, clean nasty ass toilets with toothbrushes, he's about to make you work out somemore, and to top it all off, you haven't eaten. You can die Mo! I don't understand. Do you have a death f***ing wish! You tryna prank him now. Adrienne don't go through with it!
Run it!!

Chapter Two: Getting Revenge

Momo's POV

So it's around seven in the morning and I STILL haven't eaten yet. I was literally scrubbing toilets just like Sergeant Major Brown ordered. I almost gagged at these nasty toilets. Just then I heard footsteps behind me. I slowly turn around to see <a href="http://assets.nydailynews.com/polopoly_fs/1.346819!/img/httpImage/image.jpg_gen/derivatives/landscape_635/alg-cheetah-jpg.jpg">her</a> leaning against the doorway. I rolled my eyes and went back to my cleaning.

"You know Chris is not gonna let up on you." she said in a thick Spanish accent.

I stopped scrubbing to look at her.

"Who?" I asked.

"Chris. Well Sergeant Major Brown if you must. He's not gonna let up on you. Your attitude, he's got his work cut out for him. See most new comers don't even step up to him the way you did. They respect him, they fear him. He knows you're neither one of those so he's treating you like sh*t to let you know who's boss." she laughed.

I nodded and joined in the laughter.

"So that's what the devil's name...well...he ain't scaring nobody. I know he's acting like a little d*ckhead right now, but he just frontin'. I'm gone get his a**. But anyway what's your name?" I smiled.

"Get him? What the heck do you mean? Girl I hope you ain't tryna do nothing stupid. Chris will kick your a**. And my name's Corporal Adrienne Bailon. " she saluted.

"Nice to meet you Corporal."

"Same here Private." she greeted.

"And trust me, he ain't bout that. Anyway, I was just gone pull a little prank on him. You know, but I need some dish on him. " I smirked looking at her.

"Wait, whoa. I hope you ain't looking at me. Girl you know I will be kicked out of here!" she said crossing her arms in disbelief.

"Ah come on. I know you're probably not new here, so I know he's probably treated you the same. So why not seek a little revenge. I just need to sneak over to his office and look around a bit. Please? This will be the only time. This dude is making scrub nasty toilets with toothbrushes....come on." I said pleadingly.

She sighed and smacked her forehead with her palm.

"Ugh! IF we get caught we're toast!" she said shaking her head.

"Yay!" I leaped up, but suddenly my back started killing me and my legs were shaking slightly.

"Whoa, he must have really worked you. So how was it?" she smirked.

"How was it?" How was what?" I asked confused.

"The sex! Everyone knows that when Sergeant Major Brown only gives newbies a hard time if he really wants them." she chuckled.

My eyes went wide. Sergeant Brown wanting me? NO WAY. I shook my head no.

"There's no way. That man hates me and I don't even know what I did." I said disagreeing.

"Girl whatever. It's the truth you'll see. So about this plan, when should we take action?" she asked.

"Ughh.....ASAP." I smiled.

"Hmmm...there is going to be a little dinner later on around 8 it lasts til 11. Sergeant Major Brown and basically eveyrone on campus will be there. It's like to introduce the new people. We can breka into his office and go through his personal stuff." she smirked.

"Ohhhhhh yeahhhh! Let's get it crackin'." I said.

"Well I gotta go, but all the other Privates are in the training room. Sergeant Major Brown sent me to come get you to join them." she said and I followed behind her.

She lead across the campus all the way to a big cabin. She opened the door and I walked in and there were soldiers everywhere working out. I looked and saw my sister and smiled. I ran over to her as she was jogging on the treadmill.

"Kon'nichiwa(Hello in Chinese) Mulan." I smiled.

"Hey girlie. Boy am I glad to see you! What did you do?" she asked continuing her jog.

"Man I was in there freaking scrubbing toilets!" I cringed at the thought.

"What?! Omg no! That man has issues for real. So, are you just gonna sit there or join us. All of us are to exercise on the treadmill for two hours then switch to another equipment." she said.

"Two hours?! Is he fool?!" I argued as Mulan gave me "the look".

"What?" I whispered.

"He's watching us." she whispered slightly pointing to a nearby corner and sure enough he was glaring right at us.

He then started walking our way. I sighed heavily knowing I was about to hear an ear full.

"Private Walker what the hell are you doing?" he asked stepping in my face.

I sighed looking down. I wasn't really in the mood to fuss with him especially since he had me scrubbing toilets. I didn't say anything I just crossed my arms and glared at him. He gave me a look like are you challenging me? I smirked at him and looked back at him like hell yeah. He clenched his jaw.

"You know what? You're going to be training with me....privately." he said storming off.

Just then Corporal Bailon approached me with a huge smirk on her face.

"I told you he wants you." she grinned as we all sat there gazing at Sergeant Brown as he took off his shirt and begin to lift weights.

To Be Continued.......

I'm sorry it's short you guys but I promsie to make the next one longer! :P Please gimme reviews ladies!

LOL thanks for the reviews i'll be writing more tomorrow!! :-D

Run This

What?! That was like torture mixed with discipline. Run 100 laps, the most I ran was at least 50. I'd take that over suicides anyday! People's asses in your face and s***. No! That chant was....was....was something else. Did they say send me in a box? Hmmm, I feel some type of way. Yay! She did it! Good job. Mulan picked up easily, great for her! Oh God, this child is going to pass t'f out! Well, should've thought of it as Major Brown says, and he didn't say rest. Mulan was about to pop off. Glad she didn't.
Run it!!

of course! of course! i got you! :)

lol.. i know lani and momo gone need a friend i'm here for ya'll lol i'm done talking till tomorrow. which i'm assuming the update will take place ...

lol.. recruiter is the person who brings the ppl to the place if i'm correct? damn i thought i was gone get it in with one of the sgts . lol but heres my info :

Girl: adrienne ballion ( may have misspelled it , latino who dated rob kardash and ex cheetah girl)

age: college like 20. yea 20.

peppy*

LOL! THANK YOU LOVE <3 .

LMAO! I love your attitude! You're so petty! :-D lol

YASSS LAWD I'S READY NOW! *TWERKS*

YES LITTLE MISS DONT WANNA OBEY WANNA GET THAT ASS TORE UP BY BROWN IS GOING TO REGRET WHATEVER SHE HAS UP HER SLEEVE .... I PRAY FOR HER EVERY NIGHT POOR DAT YOUNG CHILD !

just tell me who you would want to play as your character and thats all i need to know! and the name and age. :D

LOL yall are crazy! But yes i was talking to you Autty. You'll be a recruiter! :D again thanks for the reviews! momo would be crazy if shes thinking about doing something to sergeant major brown, but then again....anything can happen. *hint, hint*

I CANT STOP REVIEWING LAWDDDDDD !!!!!! THEM SGT ...... I WOULD HAVE PASSED OUT BY JUST LOOKING AT THEM. SHOOT SEND ME TO BOOT CAMP 365 DAYS WITH THEM.I'LL COME BACK HOME A SAINT LIKE VIRGIN MARY . THIS IS MYLAST COMMENT TILLYOUR LAST UPDATE.K? BUH BYE LOL

AUTTY (;

LOL.. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN JESUS! YASSSS LAWDT! WATCHING HER CHANGE ? I WOULD HAVE SHRIFFLED UP ! 100 LAPS ONA FOOTBALL FIELD ? NO FOOD? JESUS CHRIST! I WOULD HAVE DIED ON THE FIRST LAP JUST TO LEAVE THAT PLACE BUT, KNOWN SIR YES SIR I PROBABLY WOULD HAVE BEEN STILL RUNNING AND CHANTING IN MY GRAVE ! I CANT ENOUGH AND YOU JUST STARTED IF LANI KNOWS WHATS BEST SHE'LL BE AS QUIET AS A MOUSE ! I WANNA SEE MJR BROWN'S P.O.V OWEEEE MANE WHATS GOT HIM SO UP TIGHT ?

AUTTY (;

lol are talking to me or the other girl cause .. MY ANSWER IS HELLYEA ! LOL . JUST LET ME KNOW IF YOU WERE TALKING TO ME CAUSE I WILL BE WHOEVER AND DO WHATEVER LOL ! JUST LET ME KNOW !

AUTTY (;

LORDT JESUSSSS! YASSS!

HELLO Sergeant Major Brown. He don't play them games!
And First Sergeant Harris...my god first sergeant,
what i gotta do to get in this bootcamp? i'll fall right
in love with sergeant harris, sir yes sir!
i will whatever he tell me to do i'll do boo!

but damn momo and lani can't put a toe outta line!
they thought shid was a joke. smh. momo bouta get
fcked up talm bout she got a damn master plan. she
gon' learn today!

girl, can't wait for the next add :)

Run It

Lol thank you for the review! And yeah Momo should defiantly be like Mulan, but of course she's kind of the rebellious type especially when she likes someone. *hint, hint* anyway thankss for taking the time to read it. i defiantly appreciate it and will defiantly update soon!

OOOOOWEEEE! I probably would've raped one of them. Whew! I broke out in sweats when Major Brown was behind her. When Mulan had introduced herself, I thought it was Srgt. Harris and he had called her a hoe. But now I get it. Damn! MoMo you's a delirious girl. I would've put that outfit on in ONE minute. Mmm, Mulan is smart. Be like her. Oh s***! Why did you have to tell him to kiss your pigu?! Oh no.....you poor thing. I'll pray for you!
Run it!!!

Chapter Two: Getting Revenge (Preview)

"Uh...I...I'm...so..." I stammered.

"Sorry? You're gonna be. Now I don't know if you know or not, but I'm sure you do, you're little slutty outfit is unacceptable. You're gonna take it off now." he demanded pointing towards the cabin.

"Excuse me you ain't my-" he cut me off.

"Daddy? Hahaha No I may not be but I AM your Sergeant and what I say goes. No if ands buts about it. Now take off that ridiculous outfit and put on your uniform Private." he said as he turned on his heel and walked up to Cabin B and opened the door.

I crossed my arms as Mulan whispered "Ooooh girl you in twouble" she teased. I shot her a look and then went back into the cabin when Srgt. Brown closed the door behind him.

"Hold up now! You can't watch me undress." I argued walking all the way down to my <a href="http://comps.canstockphoto.com/can-stock-photo_csp0201021.jpg">bed</a>.

He didn't move a muscle so I had no choice but to undress in front of him. I tried to cover up as much of my body as I could as I took off my shirt and put on <a href="http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=91201565">this</a>.

"That's better." Sergeant Brown said opening the door as we walked out.

"What took you so long?" Mulan asked winking.

"Girl bye. It wasn't even like that." I said crossing my arms.

"Alright Privates I want all of you to go down to the field to do suicides since these two lovely ladies wanna show up fashionably late we're gonna work fashionably late! Am I understood?!" Srgt. Brown yelled at us.

"Sir yes sir!" the soldiers yelled.

Me and Lani just sat there confused. Were we suppose to say that to? Srgt.Major Brown walked up to our faces.

"Did you two not just hear me?! I said am I understood?!" he barked.

"Sir yes sir!" Mulan said looking straight ahead.

I still didn't get it. I shrugged my shoulders.

"What am I suppose to say?" I asked.

The soldiers started laughing. Brown smirked and shook his head.

"I'm gonna have so much fun with you today. So much fun you're gonna be crying for your mommy when I get through with you." he said as he turned on his heel and begin to march, the soldiers following behind him.

Me and Lani marched in the back. I was so scared. My mind was wondering what the heck he meant by that. The hot sun was beating down on our faces. It had to be at least 90 degrees. I was not use to this hot a** weather. I was beginning to sweat already.

"Damn it's hot." Mulan complained as we finally made it to a wide field that was the size of a football field.

We then stopped.

"Extension!" Brown yelled as the soldiers got in line and we quickly did what they did so we wouldn't get in trouble.

"Fall in!" he ordered again as we all got into a tight straight line.

"Since we, yes WE, can't seem to follow the rules we will be running this entire field 100 times. And when you run you better run in good formation because if you don't we will repeat this over and over again. I have all f*cking night! You won't even get to eat! Now go go GO!" Brown yelled clapping his hands as we began to race down the field with 1st Sergeant Harris leading us.

"C130 Cadence!" he yelled as the men started chanting:

Here we go
All the way
Sing my name on the dotted line
cause all i do is a double time
up the hill
down the hill
on the hill
around the hill
C130 rollin down the strip
Airbourne Caddy gone make a little trip
stand up buckle up
shuffle to the door
jump right out and count to 4
if my suit do open wide
i got another by my side
and if that one should fail me to
look out below i coming through
here we go
all the way
if i die in a old drop zone
box me up and send me home
pin my wing upon my chest
tell me momma i done my best
here we go
all the way
pt pt

It took me a while to learn it but I finally had got it down pat! Hours later we were finally done and my entire body was shaking. I started crying.

"I can't take this no more. I can't." I cried falling to my knees as Sergeant Brown approached me.

"What's the meaning of this Private? Did I tell you to rest?!" he yelled squatting down to my face.

"N-no sir." I cried.

"Why the hell are you crying?!" he yelled.

"I-I wanna go home." whimpered.

"Ha! It's been a couple hours and I broke you already?! You little weak sissy!" he yelled in my face getting back to his feet.

"You know what, you won't be getting any food today. Go to your cabin and scrub the bathroom toilets, sinks, AND floors. I want it to be squeaky clean do you understand Private?!" he hollered.

"Y-y-yes sir." I cried.

"Now get up and go!" he yelled as everyone just stared at me with some sympathy.

I looked at Mulan and she looked like she was about to explode the way he was talking to me. I just shook my head for her to keep her mouth shut. I slowly got up, my legs shaking badly and walked away, heading towards my cabin. I wiped at my flowing tears. I couldn't believe he was treating me this way. This isn't right. It's just not! But you know what. I'll get his a**. I had the perfect revenge plan. I just needed to find the right sources......

To Be Continued!....

Uh oh! What do yall think is gonna be Momo's Master Plan!? LOL How do yall like Sergeant Major Brown so far? Do you think he being a f*ck nigga? x-D Lemme know what yall think and tell me do you think you could handle this boot camp?!

LMAO! Thank you for the review! And yes Srgt. Brown do not play! Imma write a preview now or just another chapter. Hey, do you wanna be a character in the story? :)

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PLEASE! OH ! PLEASE! RUN IT! JESUS CHRISTT ! MJR BROWN DONT PLAY ! AND I KNOW HE DONT PLAY IN THE BEDROOM ! SOMEBODY ! ANYBODY! PLEASE HELP THAT POOR LOST CHILD JESUS SHE GONE BE SORE, LIMPING, CRAWLING, IN A WHEELCHAIR, OR MAYBE CONFINDED TO A BED WHEN HE'S DONE "WHIPPING" HER INTO SHAPE! SHE'S PROBABLY GONNA GIVE HER LIFE TO THE LAWD AFTER HE GETS DONE . I SAID ALL THAT TO SAY THIS RUNNNNNNNNNNNN ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT !

I'LL BE READING AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE !

AUTTY (;

LOL Yeah girl! Sh*t about to get real! LOL Imma update later on today! :-P

GIRLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL WHEN TYGA POPPED UP I WAS LIKE DAMN SERGEANT HOPEFULLY ILL GET TO CALL HIM THAT MORE OFTEN ;) AND DAMN SHE BOUGHT TO GET IN SOME TROUBLE. HER DAMN BODY GON BE HURTING AFTER HE DONE WITH HER. ATLEAST MULAN WAS SMART ENOUGH TO PUT ON HER OUTFIT EVEN IF SHE DON'T LISTEN SHE ATLEAST LOOKS THE PART XD
RUN IT SISSY :D