You
you made me wonder
when all a long you
were the perfect finder
without the beauty in your eyes
this world would be made of ice
being around you is all I need
a long with your love'in
is all I see
If your love was all I had
the world wouldn't be so bad
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This is really sweet and sincere. I love this poem! I seems really heartfelt. You should rally keep at the poem writing, your stuff is really good. :)
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It's Britney Biitch!!!
i have to agree with everyone and say 'awww' to this one! it's really good and soo cute! keep it up sweetheart
by LucyLu - Sábado, Feb 16, 2008 - 9:09pm GMT
THAT POEM IS REALLY REALLY GOOD...
ALL YOUR POEMS ARE GOOD
KEEP IT UP...
Dat wuz fresh 2 def keep writn
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She’s a fallen angel, sent from heaven up above
She’s a fallen angel, waitin for me to love her, yeah
(Know that she’s) She’s a fallen angel, take your judgment off her
I know, that she’s a fallen angel
dat peom dat i read wuz so fye u gt talent
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miss graham
