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>*Animal Kisses*< by Shae (Phenomenal Story...TRUST!) updated |Aug.26|08
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It had been a good two months since my accident. A lot has happened since my first day in the hospital. HE continued to visit me on a regular basis. When he wasn’t able to do so he made sure that he called. He’s been my rock through this these trying times; and I’m not solely referring to my accident but also through everything I’ve been through with my mother before and after we first started going out. He’s an incredibly understanding person. My body is healing better and faster than I believed it would. The nurse that I had grown fond of during my time spent here had entered my room and started gathering and packing up my things. “You know that you don’t have to do that, right” I said in a low voice with c**ked eyebrows. “Aida don’t start with me” she said while placing both hands on her hips. Her German accent was its strongest when she was agitated, frustrated, or flat out pissed. She took extra special care of me, more than she had to.
“I’m just saying, you’ve done enough for me already,” I said closing my eyes, trying my best to keep my composure.
“What’s wrong sweetie,” Helga asked attempting to voice her concern.
“Nothing, I’m fine,” I said nodding my head reassuringly.
Once Helga started to walk away from me I got that feeling deep within the pit of my stomach. You know, that feeling you get when you tell a lie you didn’t really want to tell. So I thought about it in that brief second and decided to recant what I had told her.
“Wait, I lied,” I said examining the lines in the palm of my hands.
The squeaking of her shoes was the result of her doing a 180 (a turn). As she stood there; silence quickly filled the room. I figured that she was looking at me but I was scared to look up to confirm my suspicions. I had more respect for this woman than any other adult figure that I have encountered throughout my life.
“Why would you feel like you had to lie when you know that you can tell me anything,”
she asked as she walked over and wrapped her arms around me.
“I know, lying is senseless but what bother me is that you didn’t know me but you cared for me. You’re selfless and you don’t expect anything in return. Why,” I asked seriously confused.
“Well first off it’s my job. It’s what I’ve been doing my whole life,”
I shook my head the whole time she was speaking. “I don’t know anything else,” Helga stated.
“No, people have jobs but they don’t take them seriously. They don’t love what they do; it’s just a check to them. You’re different; you love what you do even though you aren’t rewarded for it,” I said waiting for her response.
“Well, you’re right about one thing. I do love what I do,” she said smiling brightly as though she was auditioning for crest commercial. After immediately noticing this I started to laugh.
“Aida, are you laughing at my accent again,” she exclaimed hitting me gently with one of my pillows.
“No, I’m use to your accent. I was admiring your smile, I never noticed how pretty it was,” I said returning a smile to show her that she had me feeling much better.
“Well, in that case; thank you. If I may say so, you have a lovely smile as well,” she said while adjusting her glasses.
“Thanks,” I replied.
I happened to glance up at the door right as it was opening and in walked a familiar face. He had papers in one hand and a bag filled with prescription drugs in the other.
“Hey, stranger,” he said while walking towards us...
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Ahh darn.
Well, at least she got to see a friend.
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Jeanette is Aida's bestie|bff. not sister.
sorry you mixed the two up.
Asia is Aida's sister.
"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
Awwww,
I'm glad she got to see her sister...
But damn, her mother is so damn spiteful...
What happened with Chris after her accident???
Man, this is so interesting...
RUN IT!!!!
Part II of Chapter 33|Reunited
“Just a week?!”
“Yeah.” She said dryly.
“Why didn’t you come see me?”
“Why didn’t you call?”
“My phone was destroyed in the accident, and you know I don’t know numbers by heart.” My adrenaline was pumping…
She was silent, I guessed she thought my excuse was admissible.
“and what about you?” I said almost coyly, pointing at her before placing my hands on my hips.
“Well,” she started. “After your mom told me what happened, she said it would be best if I didn’t visit you for awhile, and despite how shady she is I listened. I mean after all you were hit by gotdamn SUV. Then time passed and I was tired of waiting around so I went up to the hospital I believed you were in.” looking down at her vans covered feet that was kicking the ground, she bit her nails cautiously. “Turned out I was at the right place but your heart of gold mum decided to black list me.”
“Blacklist you?”
“You don’t know?” she looked up—shocked, she stopped biting her nails.
“Know, what?!”
“Your mom had given the hospital clerks a list of people who weren’t allowed to see you.”
I was convinced that I had never met anyone as spiteful or as evil as my mother and hoped to never meet anyone as evil or spiteful as her.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t know.” Refusing to cry, I rubbed my face. “I should’ve tried harder.”
“Come here,” she said reaching for me—pulling me into her arms.
I held her tightly and thought about how stressful things had been recently and how I completely took our friendship for granted…but like the saying goes “you don’t know what you’ve got till it’s gone.” We sat on the picnic table and spoke about everything, past and present. I was fortunate for this; I was able to share these new moments with her and was no longer caught up in the mere memory of “us” I was playing over in my head a few minutes prior to her appearance. She had informed me of what had been going on at school, gave me little profile updates like a little myspace whore…a myspace whore that I loved…but a myspace whore nonetheless. Tippy had gotten pregnant by that b**** ass nigga Brian Walker; supposedly she was a little over 2 months a long but with her ass who even knew if that was the truth. I myself had doubts that the baby was his, but I hoped to hell it was. Maybe a baby was just what both of them needed considering how they both were. Principle Miller had gotten a girlfriend and was much nicer now that he was getting laid on the regular. Donald had been transferred to a new school when rumors about him and my mother started going around. That was all I needed. Due to the fact that they denied it and no one could actually prove the affair, my mother was never charged. How lovely…, I thought. I assumed that she was done updating me, until she asked how Chris was doing.
“So how’s the hubby?”
“He’s alright I suppose.” I said, trying to act uninterested. “I haven’t heard from him in like a week.” I became unusually antsy, fidgeting with my fingers as talking about him made me uneasy.
“No, before all of this,” she said, moving her hand through the air as if she was painting brush stroked in the sky.
“He was ok.” I stated quickly.
“Oh, I was just wondering.” The words in her sentence kinda faded, they were subtle…then she picked it back up…in a sense. “It’s been forever since I’ve seen him.”
“Forever?”
“Yeah.”
“What do you mean?”
“Aida.” Placing her hand on her neck she took a step back and titled her head to one side. “Chris stopped coming to school after your accident…”
She continued to speak but I ignored accident on, I was afraid to imagine his reason for leaving school. I thought I had gotten to all of his secrets, when there was another closet chock full of skeletons I hadn’t known about. Why the secrets? Why him out of all people? My sister, Chris, my sister, Chris, my sister…my mind went back and forth. I’ve gotten few answers, for which I am still grateful, but it was then I realized it was going to be a long road to tow…and that I was going to need lots of sleep.
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
Part II of Chapter 33|Reunited
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“Just a week?!”
“Yeah.” She said dryly.
“Why didn’t you come see me?”
“Why didn’t you call?”
“My phone was destroyed in the accident, and you know I don’t know numbers by heart.” My adrenaline was pumping…
She was silent, I guessed she thought my excuse was admissible.
“and what about you?” I said almost coyly, pointing at her before placing my hands on my hips.
“Well,” she started. “After your mom told me what happened, she said it would be best if I didn’t visit you for awhile, and despite how shady she is I listened. I mean after all you were hit by gotdamn SUV. Then time passed and I was tired of waiting around so I went up to the hospital I believed you were in.” looking down at her vans covered feet that was kicking the ground, she bit her nails cautiously. “Turned out I was at the right place but your heart of gold mum decided to black list me.”
“Blacklist you?”
“You don’t know?” she looked up—shocked, she stopped biting her nails.
“Know, what?!”
“Your mom had given the hospital clerks a list of people who weren’t allowed to see you.”
I was convinced that I had never met anyone as spiteful or as evil as my mother and hoped to never meet anyone as evil or spiteful as her.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t know.” Refusing to cry, I rubbed my face. “I should’ve tried harder.”
“Come here,” she said reaching for me—pulling me into her arms.
I held her tightly and thought about how stressful things had been recently and how I completely took our friendship for granted…but like the saying goes “you don’t know what you’ve got till it’s gone.” We sat on the picnic table and spoke about everything, past and present. I was fortunate for this; I was able to share these new moments with her and was no longer caught up in the mere memory of “us” I was playing over in my head a few minutes prior to her appearance. She had informed me of what had been going on at school, gave me little profile updates like a little myspace whore…a myspace whore that I loved…but a myspace whore nonetheless. Tippy had gotten pregnant by that b**** ass nigga Brian Walker; supposedly she was a little over 2 months a long but with her ass who even knew if that was the truth. I myself had doubts that the baby was his, but I hoped to hell it was. Maybe a baby was just what both of them needed considering how they both were. Principle Miller had gotten a girlfriend and was much nicer now that he was getting laid on the regular. Donald had been transferred to a new school when rumors about him and my mother started going around. That was all I needed. Due to the fact that they denied it and no one could actually prove the affair, my mother was never charged. How lovely…, I thought. I assumed that she was done updating me, until she asked how Chris was doing.
“So how’s the hubby?”
“He’s alright I suppose.” I said, trying to act uninterested. “I haven’t heard from him in like a week.” I became unusually antsy, fidgeting with my fingers as talking about him made me uneasy.
“No, before all of this,” she said, moving her hand through the air as if she was painting brush stroked in the sky.
“He was ok.” I stated quickly.
“Oh, I was just wondering.” The words in her sentence kinda faded, they were subtle…then she picked it back up…in a sense. “It’s been forever since I’ve seen him.”
“Forever?”
“Yeah.”
“What do you mean?”
“Aida.” Placing her hand on her neck she took a step back and titled her head to one side. “Chris stopped coming to school after your accident…”
She continued to speak but I ignored accident on, I was afraid to imagine his reason for leaving school. I thought I had gotten to all of his secrets, when there was another closet chock full of skeletons I hadn’t known about. Why the secrets? Why him out of all people? My sister, Chris, my sister, Chris, my sister…my mind went back and forth. I’ve gotten few answers, for which I am still grateful, but it was then I realized it was going to be a long road to tow…and that I was going to need lots of sleep.
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Chapter 33|Reunited
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“No!” I screamed, holding my face…astonished. “Oh my god!”
“Aida, oh my god!” Jeanette raved, grabbing my shoulders. “Where have you been child?!”
“Where have you been?!” I said in a wobbly voice, as she excitedly shook me.
“No, no, no.” she shook her head rapidly. “I asked you first.”
“Well, a lot has happened,” I said, holding my chest trying to calm down.
“No, s*** Bonnie ]!” I smirked at her comment as she took my hand and pulled me over to the nearest picnic table to sit down. “Tell me everything, Me likey details!”
“I had an accident.” I said simply.
“Yeah, I know.” She said, as if she was saying “duh!”
She continued to stare at me so I decided to give her the short of everything that happened.
“So, boy meets girl—boy and girl start to like each other a lot, stupid girl runs off and gets hit by a big bad SUV—girl is in critical condition and is then hospitalized for 2 months—girl is released, boy takes girl home, except no one is home. Boy and girl decide to wait and see if anyone will come back—boy and girl find out house is trashed, out of the blue random ass guy breaks into house, trys to rape girl and shoots boy.” I paused shortly so that I could take a breather, then I continued. “Girl then takes boy to hospital against his wishes, and in fear of not being able to be together. Boy and girl flee the hospital and become the speculation of a nation, boy and girl finally get caught due to dumbass mistake girl makes but is ultimately glad since her and Boy ended on bad terms.” I barely huffed, puffed, and heaved my way throughout my ridiculously long rant. “Happy?”
“Whooooa, that was a bad ass story!” she said, her mouth opened wide and eyes filled with awe . “How romantic!” she clasped her hands together as if she began to hope for a love of her own.
I laughed but was immediately side tracked by my thoughts, curious as to who told Jeanette about my accident in the first place.
“When did you hear?!” I said, clearing my throat…trying to get serious. “And who told you?”
“I heard like a week after it happened and mommy dearest was the one that informed me.”
Why would my mom tell Jeanette? My mother never did anything nice for anyone. What would be her point…whatever the case I knew for a fact that she most definitely had an angle. I wondered.
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
Man ol man
I'm so happy I joined thiss board
I use to be on chrisbrownfiction but they deleted it . =(
Thiss story iss likee soooooo eff'n bomb
I almost cried
Run it
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You gone feel it when we take off .
Feel it when we movin .
Feel it when we touch .
Boy you know what we doin .
I'm gone take you outerspace .. .. ..
Awww man.
Well I'm glad she's in the care of Helga...
I wonder how Chris is doing...
Ooooh, who did she see??
RUN IT!!!
IM SO CONFUSED!! KINDA
RUNZZ
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omqsh . this story is incredible ! & i wonder who that was . & i hope chris qets outtah jail ! run it . . . . .
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qet in my spaceship and HOVER !!
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i wonda if it was jeanette.....
but uhhhhhhh i want 2 noe y they cant c each otha gee louise lol
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ya gurl bri
Is it Sunny C? (aka Sunny D, Chris style)
Dis story got so many twists n turns, its nuts.
Dont end it!! I personally know a few silent readers for yur story cuz they aint registered, dey like it, so dont stop...but how long is dis story?
Run it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I set a trap & ooh look how I caught u wit it
Im an animal.~Captive
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Part 2 of Chapter 32|Memory Lane
Days turned into nights and before I knew it a full week had officially passed since I had last seen Chris. I was in the hospital for close to 3 days, Helga was able to convince my “temporary” social worker that it would be in my best interest to stay with her until my 18th birthday which was when I would be able to figure things out for myself— on my own [obviously]. I completely avoided going to see my mother, even though once she learned that I knew that she had been in jail she sent for me. I refused, she clearly didn’t care and I was reaching that same point as well. I did still love her and to be honest, I was relieved when I found out that instead of ending up dead or remaining a missing case that she was only in jail. I later found out that the cop that I talked to was the reason that my call was traced, but it wasn’t on her behalf so the information that she gave me was indeed correct. Deciding that I really didn’t have anything to lose I made up my mind to make the call. I picked up the crumpled piece of paper that sat on top of the night stand next to me. Ignorant as to what would happen next I nervously inhaled deeply, my heart raced as the phone rang and rand and rang—“I’m sorry the number you are trying to reach has been disconnected.”
“f***,” I screamed, throwing the cordless phone clear across the room. “I need answers.” I mumbled as I bit worriedly bit my fingernails, trying my best to mentally map out my next move, I knew now that I couldn’t afford to “pussyfoot” around anymore—I had to get down to business. I couldn’t go to my mother for info, there was no way in hell. So I had to think—she didn’t have any close friends just people—cowards she didn’t mind taking advantage of, and she didn’t’ have a real job so she didn’t have any co-workers. The only source that I would be able to get even the slightest bit of information out of is that so-called ex-man of hers; the only problem was I knew absolutely nothing about him and I wouldn’t know where to start. I rested my head in my hands and looked over at the clock which read 1:10pm; I looked over my shoulder—peering out the window behind me. It was Tuesday and the weather outside was beautiful, so I decided to take a walk—get some fresh air.
“Helga,” I yelled from the top of the staircase—hanging off of the balcony.
“Yes, my dear?”
“I’m going for a walk; I’ll be back later.”
“Alright, be careful and be back in time for dinner.” She bellowed from the kitchen.
“I will,” I said running down the steps and out the front door.
The luke warm afternoon breeze lightly grazed my face, I inhaled and let out a deep and what felt like cleansing—sigh. My steps were subtle as I treaded along the curb, my head remained down and before I knew it I had arrived closest park. The last time I was at this park I was in the sixth grade, I had gotten suspended for pantsing a fellow student—the f***in' runt grabbed my chest. I smiled as I reminisced and I stumbled upon a memory I hadn't thought about in such a long time...the day I met Jeanette. We first met at this very park and I hated her—we hated each other. She was a snob—a grade A bratty little b****...until she met my dad. She had the hugest crush on him, and being the shallow conniving twirp she was she got close to me just so she could get close to him. Then somewhere down the line we actually became friends and from then on out we were pretty much inseparable until my accident. Even thought I was the one that was in the hospital a part of me regrets not reaching out—going above and beyond to contact her. I just figured that maybe she just didn't think I was that important anymore.
"Aida?" a voice asked. "Is that you?!"
Looking up I gasped—I shook my head and blinked my eyes several times to ensure that what I was seeing was in fact real. What are the odds?
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
do i still have a lot of readers on here?
if not i'll stop cause thats one less site to worry about.
we'll see after i post this chapter.
Part 1 of Chapter 32| Memory Lane
My eyes were glued to the ceiling—amazed at the fact that I was in this position once again. I was in the exact same hospital and the exact same room I had been in for two whole months after my accident. I was strapped down to the bed completely, which didn’t surprise me one bit…I saw this coming. I shook my head and shifted underneath the covers trying to find a comfortable position. I heard the door open but I couldn’t see who it was, due to the curtain that was blocking my view.
“Hello?” she said pulling back the curtain.
I sighed—relieved—it was Helga.
“Helga!” I shrieked.
“Hello my darling,” she said staring down at my cuts— before taking me in her arms and hugging me tightly.
“I missed you.” I cried. “I don’t know what’s gonna happen to me or—Chris.”
“Everything will be fine, don’t you cry.” She insisted, wiping away my tears. “You’re much to pretty to cry.”
I smiled at her comment.
“Did you talk to the police yet?” I asked, rubbing my nose and sniffing up my tears.
“No.”
“Good because there is something I have to tell you,” I squirmed a little, iffy as to how she might react.
“What is it?”
“I told the police that you didn’t have anything to do with us being in your house, I told them that me and Chris stole your address from one of the filing cabinets in the hospital and that we broke into your house after you left for work this morning.” I inhaled quickly, glad that I finally had a break to breathe.
“No.” she commanded. “I refuse to let you take the blame for all of this!”
“Why not, It really is my fault!”
“You are too young; you have long life to live.”
“Helga, just trust me.”
“Ok.” She said patting my hands “I trust you.”
“Thank you, so much.” I said motioning my hands—asking for a hug. “For everything. “
“No worries.”
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
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will add soon!!!!!! & it will get good i promise.
i've been working like crazy. but new add! coming soon!
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run it!
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Bringin it back to the true essense of sweettooth....
All u haterz can hate if u want to but u wastin your time.
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Wow.
Why don't his parents want to see him??
That's f***ed up...
Them cops sound so dumb...
RUN IT!!!
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hahaha hehe im readin this on young-love.net 2 n i still want 2 noe y his parents dont want 2 c hym n if aida is ok n wat n the hell r they gettin charged 4??
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Chapter 31|Jail Bird
Dazed and dumbfounded with my forehead pressed against the chilly backseat window. I was so gone—I hadn’t noticed that the car had come to a stop until one of the officers turned around and snapped me out of it—literally.
“Yo!” he said, snapping his fingers in my face. “We’re here.”
He opened up the car door for me and let me out, guiding me towards the entrance of the police station as I walked. There were news cameras and photographers everywhere. The flashing lights were overwhelming, I felt trapped.
“What do you have to say for yourself Chris?”
…they knew my name? This had gotten way bigger than I ever expected—anticipated. It was never suppose to go this far.
The other police officer—his partner opened up the front door and I was hit with a blast of cool air. Bums, prostitutes, and supposed down right criminals filled the lobby. The air although cool was abnormally thick—not literally, it was more like a presence—an aura or maybe it was the nervousness that was deep within my stomach that provided me with this supposed mystique. Whatever it was—whether it be the thugs, street walkers, or cops; I felt out of place and radically uncomfortable.
“Stop right here.” He said, stopping us in front of a grey door.
They put me in an empty room; I assumed that this was the confession room. The room where good cop, bad cop, intimidating lighting, and the pressure of being watched from a double sided mirror made it much easier for any type of criminal to break. I sat down at the table that was located in the middle of the small room.
“Have a seat,” one of the officers said.
“I’m already sitting,” I informed.
“Don’t back talk me boy!”
“I wasn’t back talking you.”
“Are you mocking me now?”
“I’m not mocking you.”
“I think you’re mocking me.”
“No one is mocking you,” I reiterated.
“Are you raising your voice?”
“I’m just trying to tell you that I’m not mocking you, damn it was just an observation.”
“You think you’re hot s*** cause your little stunt just happened to go nationwide, huh?” he said leaning forward in my face. “You think you’re some type of celebrity now?!”
“What are you talking about?”
“Oh so now you’re playing dumb,” he asked. “I’m not stupid.”
“You could’ve fooled me,” I said under my breath.
“Ok.” He laughed. “What does this say?” he inquired, pointing to his name badge.
“Officer Ramone,” I answered.
“Officer Ramone,” he yelled. “Do you know what that means?”
“That you’re an officer and your name is Ramone?”
“Oh we got a smartass, Benkowski.” He said looking over at his partner who seemed abnormally stone faced and calm. “He’s f***in hilarious, isn’t he?”
Officer Benkowski slowly shook his head in agreement at the question. After officer Ramone
“Fortunately, Officer Ramone means a lot more than that, but all you need to know is that this title that I have earned means I can do whatever the f*** I want. So you will watch what you say to me,” he said, taking out a cigar and lighting it. “…cause who knows maybe one day, you’ll need me way more than you might suspect.”
From the looks of it this guy undeniably believed every word that was coming out of his mouth.
“That’s nice but I’m not saying anything until I have a lawyer present.”
“You want to play it like that?” he questioned, fiddling with his cigar. “You’ll get your f***in lawyer.” He said before walking out of the room.
His partner followed him out and my head collapsed in my hand. I didn’t understand how I had gotten to this point. Jail wasn’t for me, I’m not a criminal. I watched the clock closely; it was the only thing in the room that I could focus on for more than two seconds. I sat there and watched a full hour pass, I looked over at the door then over at the double sided mirror and back up at the clock. I heard the door open, turning my head back to that direction I saw a woman in a grey skirt suit.
“It’s Chris right?” she asked closing the door.
“Yes, it’s Chris.” I said cautiously. “If you don’t mind me asking, who are you?”
“I’m your lawyer.” She smiled.
“Provided by my parents or the state?”
“Your parents”
“Are they here,” I asked, unsure of whether or not I really wanted an answer to that question.
“Yes.”
“Can I see them first?”
“Of course, I’ll be right back.”
She left the room and in her absence I started to worry, I hadn’t seen my parents in so long and I didn’t know how they would react to seeing me again. I wondered what they would possibly say, ask and do. Trying to prepare myself I closed my eyes and took in a few deep breaths. The door opened and the same woman—my lawyer—came back in and closed the door right behind her; I thought that my parents would come in right after but I was wrong.
“I’m sorry but they’ve decided that due to the circumstances,” she said, using gestures to get her point across. “Due to the fact that you might spend some time at a juvenile detention center they would rather not see you until everything is figured out. They figured it would be less emotional but if all goes well you might see them sooner than you think…”
She went on and on but I was stuck on “less emotional”…what did they mean? Maybe they felt that it would be best but I was their son, I was a run away….I hadn’t seen them in a few days…I had just been shot and yet they didn’t want to see me? Not even to see if I was ok? I knew my parents very well and that excuse didn’t sit well with me, something wasn’t right.
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
What the hell??
they arent like bank robbers or some s***...
like what are they bein accused of???
i hope Aida is ok...
i hope somebody really listens to them...
RUN IT!!!!
no!!!
What the hell?
Why is she hurt?!
OMG.
man they arent criminals, hopefully some people will listen to them.
Damn.
Run it!!!!!!!
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Shae come ack to me!!!
I miss you so much bastard i do foreal I do, come back to me!!!!
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U can hate if you want to but ur wastin yur time.
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bumping!
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
Chapter 30|Love Is Blind
“Aida,” I whispered, scared that my voice would increase her pain.
She sat there—balled up—in the far corner of the bathroom, the expression on her face informed me that she was in deep shock. Tears and sweat consumed her pale face as she held her bleeding wrist tightly.
“Aida, what did you do,” I asked trying my best to suppress the trembling that was taking over my body—I approach her slowly, so that I wouldn’t appear to be a threat.
“Don’t insult my intellect; I’m not a child!” she let out. “You know good and well what I did!”
“I’m sorry,” I said trying to calm her down.
“Yeah, you’re sorry alright.”
I reached for her arm…
“Let me just-”
“No!” she yelled, cutting me short.
“Babe...” I said reaching for her a second time.
“Don’t touch me,” she cried. “Don’t touch me….”
She repeated the words until they started to fade, her eyes were starting to close and soon she was out. I ran to her side—picking her up with extreme caution I made my way out of the bathroom; stepping in the small pool of blood on my way out. Heading for the front door I flew down the steps. I was a few feet away from the door when I stopped—I paused because I suddenly realized that she was no longer breathing.
“Aida, baby wake up,” I said gently slapping her face. “Aida!”
She didn’t respond…
“It’s time to return the favor.”
I grabbed my car keys off of the table and proceeded toward the door. I opened it only to be greeted by about twenty to twenty barrels—gun barrels. The street was swamped with police officers, swat units, and on lookers. I looked up to the sky; it became dark as the grey puffy clouds started moving in on the suns territory—blocking its rays.
“She needs help,” I screamed. “She’s hurt.”
“That’s fine, but you need to put her down,” the officer said.
“You don’t understand.” I struggled to get out. “I can’t, she’s not ok.”
We had come so far and I couldn’t believe that it was ending like this. I looked down at Aida, who was limp and still. Tears flowed freely from my eyes as I laid a small kiss on her forehead. I looked up and realized that this was it—it was over—done and I prayed that I would be able to see Aida again.
“Stop where you are and put her down or we will open fire!”
With eyes still fixed on her face, I replied…”Alright…ok.”
I dropped to my knees and laid her down carefully on the cold hard-bitten concrete.
I then got up and stepped a few inches away from Aida before dropping to my knees and proceeded to lay face down on the ground. I watched as they handcuffed me—I could see everything so clearly but voices and various sounds were soft like tiny whispers that would easily go unnoticed. All I could think about was Aida and whether or not she was going to be ok. Then other thoughts and questions came rushing to me. I wondered what would happen to me, what would my parents say, what would people think? All questions I had dodged before because I didn’t care, one becomes careless when they’re in love. Nothing else matters and all you see is that one person, that makes not caring ok. The intensity of red and blue flashing lights was too much for me to handle—shielding my eyes I looked away and in turn caught a glimpse of Aida being taken away on a gurney. My head was being pushed down as I was being forced into the police car. I sat there partly dumbfounded, patiently waiting for both officers to get in the car.
“What’s gonna happen to her?”
“That’s a stupid question, you’re not so bright are you?” the officer asked sarcastically. “They’re taking her to the hospital.”
“No, I mean after that.” I stated, leaning forward waiting for his answer. “What’s gonna happen to her, legally?”
“I have no idea son.” He said, actually sounding sincere. “You guys got yourselves into some deep s***.”
Letting out a heavy sigh, I sat all the way back; the sky opened up and the rain came pouring down. I felt as if God himself was empathetic to my situation. As we pulled of the speed of the rain increased, I watched through the windows as they were getting pummeled by huge droplets of water. I shuffled in my seat and tried my hardest to predict the worst case scenario but my head wasn’t clear enough to do so. I closed my eyes and imagined that that she was with me—next to me, so close that I could feel the heat radiating off of her body. I licked my lips and I could taste her as if I had been freshly kissed by hers. I inhaled making sure to completely fill my lungs and smelled fresh vanilla, her scent. She had taken over my senses….she had become my senses…
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
RUN IT!!!!!!!
What happened?
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i aint been on here in bout 2 monthz which i kno aint a gd thing
cause i missed a LOT
but s*** blood?
nah she knt b dead
i kno that
i think
but chica
run it
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as the dayz go bye i keep fallin deeper and deeper
is this love? or am i bein lustful?
Awww Ship...Run It...
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!* Behind Every Beautiful Gurl Theres A DumbAzz Guy Who Did Her Wrong And Made Her Strong *!
I DNT GET IT WATS GOIN ON...CUZ I DNT KNO AT ALL...
BUT STILL RUNNNNNN ITTTTT-
I DNT GET IT WATS GOIN ON...CUZ I DNT KNO AT ALL...
BUT STILL RUNNNNNN ITTTTT-
Oh no whats happened
mrs. Payne is her mom right???
whats goin on im soooo confused
welll run it please!
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iL3an
iRock
iJig
iYuhhh
iSnap
iPop
Then iYoutube
iDance iDance iDance iDance iDance
Soulja Boy "iDance"
OMG!!!
who is Ms.Payne???
i mean that hoe just came up outta nowhere....
omg...what happened??
RUN IT!!!!!
Part 3 of Chapter 29|Disturbia
She was pissed, because this was the one truth she had never faced. I finally understood that she dwelled in her mistakes—her wrong doings. Why would she want someone else to try and right their own wrongs?—misery loves company, indeed.
“You son of a b****!” she said raising her hand over her head giving me the impression that she was going to hit me.
Expecting her blow to come down hard I hurriedly covered my face. A few seconds passed and I was just sitting there—arms raised high, protecting my face…but nothing was happening. I slowly lowered my arms to find her gone. Amazed at what just occurred I sat there and I started to feel a little better. The feeling soon left when I remembered what was supposed to come next. Praying that it wasn’t too late, I got up and ran up the rest of the way. Barging through her bedroom door my eyes scanned the room, impatiently trying to locate her body. I started to panic when I noticed that she wasn’t there, remembering that she had a weird thing for bathrooms, I ran straight to there. The door was closed—locked.
“Babe I’m really sorry about the way I’ve been acting.” I sighed nervously, swallowing hard. “My attitude lately—more recently today has been completely uncalled for, but I really need to talk to you.”
I paused hoping that she would answer but she didn’t.
“Look I’m coming in and I hope you’re decent.” I chuckled, trying my best to ease the tension. “If you aren’t then I’ll close my eyes and give you a lil time to get yourself together.” I said opening up the bathroom door.
Still keeping my eyes closed I walked into the bathroom and shut the door.
“Ok that should be enough time, I’m gonna open up my eyes now,” I took a step forward…a loud splash caused me to open up my eyes. I assumed that I had stepped into a puddle of water. I diverted my attention to the source—looking down in horror I froze, my limbs were stiff with fear...I was petrified. Never had I ever seen so much blood...
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"Oh Razz-B and J-Boog soo fine!" What? You're eatin raspberry flavored boogers? Captain Razz? We are being attacked by sector J-Boog. Lieutenant Fizz! PREPARE THE OMARIONS!" - Jade
This ish is hot Shay-nay-nay!
I love it. That damn hoe Mrs. Paine, hoe!!!!!
She need to go hook up with chris' brother, phsycos!
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**sounding like shae** BASTARD! Run it! I love it. Write more.
I been waiting a long time for this story dammit! I just lost a test dammit, gimme what i want, more story!
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U can hate if you want to but your wastin your time.
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