Chris Brown
JANUARY 30, 2008, 8:26 pm
Far away
I see you from up far,
never did I have the heart,
You get my eyes the way you walk,
You get my lips the way you talk,
How would I have ever known it was you,
from the things you do
now face to face with no words to say,
why so afaird to express what I feel for you,
is it the same way for you?
the things your friends tell you, are never so true,
they speak words of hoes that blow but take a minute with me and we would flow like never seen before,
I see the one you're with, ask yourself this question is she really faithful?
Hang'in with other guys when your at home thinking of what to buy her, is that really fair?,
she doesn't cook, all the sweet things she saids and do, you think its coming from her heart, when its read from a book,
Its so crazy how you say you love her when your more in love with her,
the things she does behind close doors with another man, is not worth the pain,
would I ever, ever be able to take the blindfold off your eyes, so you are able to see?
would I ever be able to set you free, so life would be a breeze,
a minute of thought is all it takes to see, that she is not the one for you, one minute with me to see that its me, the one, your everything
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wow
dang thats a really good poem! u can write!!!
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Priscilla B
thats cute
this poem is sooo cute i love it u got it goin on gurl keep doin u iight !!
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Recognize & Remember iight
luv u chris yea its true
one of these days imma be wit
chu!!
Nice
I liked this one, its really deep. You have some talent keep it up...
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$Blue Magic$
nice
this poem is really cute!
I agree with Christina, you should do an extended version cause I know you've got a lot more to say about ya boy CB :D
i've enjoyed all of ur poems!! but i like far away the most!! ur very talent!...Don't let go of ur DREAMS!!!
awww
thats cute i like that
YOU HAVE TALENT
I LIKE THAT POEM
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this is good
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Nice....
Awww, this was a good poem mami
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two thumbs up!
I like this poem : ) good job girly
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I like it!
I write poetry too, good poem :)
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You talkin about my hubby???? I don't appreciate that! Nah I'm playin lol
Awww this is cute. You should do an extended version real soon :-D
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Dis poem is fyre