FEBRUARY 1, 2008, 2:27 am
In our relationship theres abence,
you handle it my taking subtance,
In our relationship we need some adjustment
because you can not handle the judgement,
In our relationship when you have something
planned we come to an agreement,
when I have something planned you always
turn it into a disagreement,
In our relationship you are known as Mr.Dependent
when I'm known as Ms.Independent,
In our relationship we both have stayed committed
when we both get around others there is submission,
In our relationship you stayed jealous,
In the end I realized that, that was the past
and without you now life wouldn't be so fablous
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This is really good!
I like this alot. You've got alot of talent, girl!
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It's Britney Biitch!!!
good question!
I mainly just write down what I'm feeling or what I hear and see, and it just all comes together!
whoa!
man, i really like this one! it was goin along kinda dissin the dude or w/e, then you flipped it and was like "that was then, this is now" type stuff...pretty good!
you're very talented kristina! Do you just write for fun/relaxation or is it something you really want to pursue?
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i really like that, that is hot. alot of ppl could relate to that.
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(P.R. 4 life)
that was hot
that was deep i liked that a lot
Diz iz wussup
I lyk diz poem, u got talent keep writn poems cuz there goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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She’s a fallen angel, sent from heaven up above
She’s a fallen angel, waitin for me to love her, yeah
(Know that she’s) She’s a fallen angel, take your judgment off her
I know, that she’s a fallen angel