You

01/31/08
Average: 4.5 (4 votes)

you made me wonder
when all a long you
were the perfect finder

without the beauty in your eyes
this world would be made of ice

being around you is all I need
a long with your love'in
is all I see

If your love was all I had
the world wouldn't be so bad

Comments for this Blog post

mtownsbabygurl

aww

my world be so sad without Chris lol, I like this one!!

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*--->AnD tH@t'a AlWaYz<----*

Kellz c/o 09 (www.myspace.com/mtownsbabygurl)

Fri, 02/01/2008 - 11:53
_iiRockSoHard_

this is my favorite one

this is good girl u got sum skillzz!!!!

Fri, 02/01/2008 - 15:38
_iiRockSoHard_

this is my favorite one

this is good girl u got sum skillzz!!!!

Fri, 02/01/2008 - 15:38
_iiRockSoHard_

this is my favorite one

this is good girl u got sum skillzz!!!!

Fri, 02/01/2008 - 15:38
miss graham0104

dat wuz fye

dat peom dat i read wuz so fye u gt talent

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miss graham

Sat, 02/02/2008 - 09:49
fernandra.

AWWWWW

Dat wuz fresh 2 def keep writn
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She’s a fallen angel, sent from heaven up above
She’s a fallen angel, waitin for me to love her, yeah
(Know that she’s) She’s a fallen angel, take your judgment off her
I know, that she’s a fallen angel

Sun, 02/03/2008 - 19:37
tha_princess

awwww

that is so sweet

Sun, 02/03/2008 - 20:06
FRESHIE

AWW

THAT POEM IS REALLY REALLY GOOD...
ALL YOUR POEMS ARE GOOD
KEEP IT UP...

Sun, 02/03/2008 - 20:27
ms. boo

awwww

i didnt kno u were soo mushhyy lol i like it

Tue, 02/05/2008 - 12:05
LucyLu

soo cute

i have to agree with everyone and say 'awww' to this one! it's really good and soo cute! keep it up sweetheart

Sat, 02/16/2008 - 20:34
.Miss.B.

This is so sweet...

This is really sweet and sincere. I love this poem! I seems really heartfelt. You should rally keep at the poem writing, your stuff is really good. :)

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It's Britney Biitch!!!

Sun, 02/17/2008 - 21:53