Wednesday, April 16, 2008 - 16:07
***Bu$!n3$$ ...w!t... Pl3@$ur3***
YEAHHHHHH...IM SO HAPPY FINALLY I CAN OUT MY N3W STORY ON HERE!!!!!!!!
Hey everybody Im back with another hot banga called "Bu$!n3$$...oR...Pl3@$ur3" based on Trey Songz track called "Bidness or Pleasure"...b4 reading any furthur please listen to the track at the link below...I promise you will love it!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecG6xs8JYLI
Lyrics
http://www.kovideo.net/lyrics/t/Trey-Songz/Bidness-Or-Pleasure.html
Y/n-
http://www.mediatakeout.com/21951/gott_dayummm_check_out_jamie_foxxs_new...
You are 19 and you live in Cali...you work at this club called
"Hypnotic" its the best urban club in the city!! All of the hot celebs always come through showin yall love....you also do some modeling and videos on the side...its all fun!!
Anyway...lets get this party started!! (your cell goes off waking you up..you already knew that was one of your best friends named Bee who is a gay male....and your boss..(B. Scott…he is so hilarious…check out his youtube page.)
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=...)
"Touch my body
Put me on the floor
Wrestle me around
Play with me some more
Touch my body"
Y/n- (you scream into the pillow not wanting to wake up) Damn Bee, what do you want??.....Hello?
Bee- (talkin really gay) Heeey love muffin
Y/n- Hey Bee
Bee- girl where are you?
Y/n- Im in bed what do you think??
Bee- (smacks his mouth) well you need to get yo fast ass up becuz it is already 5:30 and we gotta get this party together for tonight!!!
You looked over at the clock that read 5:30 pm
Y/n- (jumping up) DAMN IM LATE!!!
Bee- ummmhmm see...I told you about stayin out late partying wit these celebs
Y/n- you aint tell me nuthin
Bee- what??..you know what? Call me when you on your way
Y/n- yeah bye (click)
So you got up and hopped in the shower and headed to work since you were already late...
At work you saw Bee and your other friend Ayana
http://i2.tinypic.com/vhvqix.jpg
Y/n- Im here
Bee- AND??...Lol...Im jus playin boo boo..come here...double kisses muah...muah
Y/n- lol…Hey Ayana, wats up
Ayana- last nite thats wats up...Lil Wayne had me up all nite partying
Y/n- I kno rite...I tried to stay up with yall but when 4:00 hit...I had to get going lol
Bee- so thats why you over slept (rollin eyes)
Y/n- I guess...(pouring yourself a drink)
Bee- UH UH!!!(takin it away)
Y/n- WHAT YOU MEAN UH UH??
Bee- we have a party to plan in less that 2 hours...and yall is not about to get TIPSY b4 we start...
You and Ayana burst into laughter becuz of the way Bee was talking)
Bee- oh ok...I see yall think this is a joke?? (as he flips his hair back)
Still laughing....
Bee- Look...I ‘ll be in the back…(he storms off)
Ayana- uh uh...Bee is crazy!!
Y/n- gurl who are you tellin....anyway who we got coming tonight
Ayana- I think Chris Brown
Y/n- that lil dude that sing RUN IT RUN IT...lol
Ayana- lol yeah..but he aint little no more...he got that new song "With You" and gurl..he is sexii lol
Y/n- Foreal...(not really caring)
Bee walks back in...
Bee- (clears throat) Yall still in here chit chattin...GET TO WORK!! LORD HAVE MERCY!!!
with that being said you and Ayana start preparing for the party
I HOPE YALL RUN THIS LOL...THIS IS GONNA BE A GOOD STORY...I HAVE ALL OF MY CHARACTERS ALREADY SO JUST READ AND ENJOY!!!♥
Replies for this Forum Topic
whoooo run it
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~babyboy u know dis from d start, well any which part u walk u got me caught u a d top my pepperpot~
run it, y/n and chris is getting hot and heavy
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MRZ. ANG3L..LUV$ TH3 B0Y CHR1$ BR33ZY
D0 1 $M3LL @ L1TTL3 B1TCH@$$N3$$???!!!!
run it, y/n and chris is getting hot and heavy
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MRZ. ANG3L..LUV$ TH3 B0Y CHR1$ BR33ZY
D0 1 $M3LL @ L1TTL3 B1TCH@$$N3$$???!!!!
run it, y/n and chris is getting hot and heavy
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MRZ. ANG3L..LUV$ TH3 B0Y CHR1$ BR33ZY
D0 1 $M3LL @ L1TTL3 B1TCH@$$N3$$???!!!!
WHat Terrence not flirtins
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MA Story
Promises of Love
I Luv Him But I'm IN Love with Her
oh ok den chris...get it mayne...u doing big things kissin., chris bout 2 get it in....and trey, O , and Bow...are crazy...but ya im still diggin dis story...RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT
smh..run it
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~Detroits Girly Chica~
now thats wat i like to see. lol run it!!
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chrystal's the name.
boys are my game.
softball is my claim to fame.
lol see you on espn bby. :]]
RUN iiT!
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ChECk OUt Mii StORii`Sz
~ Where Is My Hero To Save Me ~
~ S U I C I D E Is Painless, It`s L I F E That Hurts. ~
ooooohh..
they was kissin...
uh oh! no more interruptions...
RUN IT!!!!
Ooohhhhh...
RUN IT!
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New
Chris and I quickly pulled out of our kiss and looked up to see the guys standin in front of us smilin and laughin....
Chris POV
DAMN...
Y/n POV
IMMATURE ASSES...CANT THEY SEE...GROWN FOLKS TRYNA HANDLE SOME BUSINESS...
Y/n- uh...Im about to go to the restroom...I'll be rite back
(walks off)
Chris- (nods)
O- Damn...did we interupt lol
Chris- hell yeah!!!
Bow- she must be going to fix her make-up lol
Chris- (shruggs shoulders)
Trey- (sits down) damn you was all up in her mouth...how she taste...?
Chris- (gives him a crazy look)
O- I bet she taste good as hell...cause all I saw was tongue
Bow- lol ay he mad yall...leave him alone
they laughed
Chris- look wat do yall want anyway?
Trey- we had a section wit some honeys over there...
O- but we can see...you finally got you one lol
Bow- yup...more for us...we out
Trey- have fun...lol...(acting like a female) kisses
Bow- MUAH...
O- MUAH..
They walk off laughing...
After I came out of the restroom...I headed back towards Chris who was standing up talkin to Terrance from 106...
Terrance- yo did your thing 2nite man...that was a real good show
Chris- thanks man...you know I had to bring out Kanye...
Terrance- (laughs) yeah he shut it down..
walks up
Y/n- hey...
Chris- hey...Y/n this is Terrance...Terrance..Y/n
Y/n- hey nice to meet you (smiles)
Terrance- the same here...wow you look amazing...in that dress
Y/n- (laughs) thanks...I've been gettin alot of feedback on it...
Terrance- well Im not surprised...Im about to go find my boys...see yall in a bit
(walks off)
Y/n- so...wat were...the guys talkin about (runs fingers through ponytail)
Chris- nuthin...running off at the mouth...like always
Y/n- oh...(looks around)
Chris- you wanna dance?
Y/n- well...I cant waste this dress standin here...now can I?
Chris- (laughs) naw...come on
Chris grabbed my hand and we made our way towards the VIP dancefloor up the stairs above the VIP room...where there was little light...and hopefully no more interuptions
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♥Damn I hate a shy b****♥
Dont you hate a shy b****?
Yeah I hate a shy b****
She aint shy no mo She changed her name to my b**** (laughs)
Yeah Nigga dats my b****
When she ask u for da money when you do dont be surprised b****!!
Weez
Oooohhhhh!!!!! LOL
Get that s*** girl!! LOL
RUN IT
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New
run it...
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!* Behind Every Beautiful Gurl Theres A DumbAzz Guy Who Did Her Wrong And Made Her Strong *!
OH s*** Bow GOne get f***ed down LOLZ but yo they all being Honest
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MA Story
Promises of Love
I Luv Him But I'm IN Love with Her
lol...oohhhh girl run it plzzz like nowww
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~Detroits Girly Chica~
run it
run it
lol!!
RUN IT!!!
My bad for the wait...I felt that I had to reconnect with this story...because I was losing touch wit it...and the fact that Im so behind on it lol(meaning this story is still in the month of May lol)...there's so much that has 2 happen wit everybody in this storii especially Y/n and Chris...so Im gonna speed things up a lil bit...after these next adds
Y/n POV
As I approached the guys...I noticed all of their mouths watering...as they continue to stare...hey I dont blame them I was 5'7, thick in all the right places,and workin the hell outta this dress...
Y/n- fellas...I said Im ready...
O- you...you sure?
Y/n- yeah, see...(spins around)...dont I look good?
Trey- mmmhmm sexii
O- fine as hell
Bow- you aite...lol
Y/n- (playfully pushes him) w/e...
Trey- ay come on yall hopefully we can find us some ladies who look like this 2nite
They all laugh...
Trey started walkin and Bow and O followed...as Chris sorta stood there...still lookin at me...it was soooooo awkward cuz I havent talked to him since that dance...
Chris POV
Y/n had me speechless...she looked so beautiful...her body was glowing...her lips were shining...she smelled so good...just beautiful♥
Y/n- you know...wat you did 2nite was wrong...all that bumpin and grindin on me...(laughs)
Chris- (laughs) wrong?...It was fun 2 me...seeing you all hot like dat...turned me on (smiles as he slightly bites his bottom lip)
Y/n- oh really...well after 2nite...we'll see whose really gonna be all....hot & bothered (grins)
Chris- aite...you aint said nun but a word...lets go....
Chris held me closely by my waist as we got off the bus and headed towards the front of the club...where the security was waiting for us...a long line of screaming ppl...and a handful of paparazzi's...quickly snappin photos of me and Chris as we entered the club...
When Chris and I stepped in the club...all eyes were glued to us as The security lead us to the VIP...where the guys and other ppl were waiting on us...
Bow- bout time yall made it...
Chris- yeah...look at all of these ppl in here
Bow- I know...Im about to find me a honey to get my freak on lol(walks off)
Chris- aite...wat you wanna do?
Y/n- lets sit down
Chris- aite...
Chris and I found us a little spot in the VIP room and we sat down and started talkin...
Y/n- this place reminds me of Hypnotic
Chris- (looks around) yeah...it does...
Y/n- remember that nite we met...
Chris- hell yeah...I will never...ever forget that...espcially that dance you gave me... (laughs)
Y/n- lol...yeah thats was fun...now be honest...the rest of that nite...you couldnt stop thinkin about me could you?
Chris- (nervously laughs) well.....uh
Y/n- come on be honest...
Chris- aite...nope...I couldnt...when I went back to my hotel that night to go 2 sleep...all I could think about was that...deep...eye connection you was givin me...while you was tworkin in my face
Y/n- was it...like this
(stares in his eyes)
Chris- (licks lips) yeah...just like that...I kept saying to myself...I gotta get her...
Y/n- oh...so you wanted me?
Chris- no..."I want"...you
Y/n- (leans forward seductively) well...here I am....
Once again my eyes never left Chris as this time...I leaned in for a kiss as his hands gripped my waist pullin me closer to him as R. Kelly's "Seems Like you're Ready" banged against the club walls (listening to it now lol)
Chris POV
I couldve sworn e/b in the entire club had just disappeared...as Y/n's soft juicy lips and tongue interacted with mines...as I held her warm body in my arms...this kiss was even better than the first one...
Y/n POV
The feelin of Chris lips against mine...was...amazing...we havent even been in the club for 30 minutes...and we was already gettin each other hot and bothered...until........
The guys- OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!!
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♥Damn I hate a shy b****♥
Dont you hate a shy b****?
Yeah I hate a shy b****
She aint shy no mo She changed her name to my b**** (laughs)
Yeah Nigga dats my b****
When she ask u for da money when you do dont be surprised b****!!
Weez
run it!
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iL3an
iRock
iJig
iYuhhh
iSnap
iPop
Then iYoutube
iDance iDance iDance iDance iDance
Soulja Boy "iDance"
*** NEW READER....PLZZ RUN IY GIRL
I AM LOVING THE STORY SERIOUSLY..THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES ON HERE....PLZZ RUN IT
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~Detroits Girly Chica~
upz
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MA Story
Promises of Love
I Luv Him But I'm IN Love with Her
run it plz!!!!!!!!!
Run itt mama!!!
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Luv Ya Lotz
Like Tater Tots
And Even More
Than Vodka Shots
Ur My Friend
Till The End
Bestie ♥,
Brittany
Uh oh!!
In a dress like that...she sure to have all eyes on her...
RUN IT!!!
ShE GoN ALL EyESz ON hER && ALL MOUtHSz dROOliN
RUN iiT!
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ChECk OUt Mii StORii`Sz
~ Where Is My Hero To Save Me ~
~ S U I C I D E Is Painless, It`s L I F E That Hurts. ~
well she got them staring lol all eyes are def gone b on her lol run it
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~babyboy u know dis from d start, well any which part u walk u got me caught u a d top my pepperpot~
She got them niggas like WHATTTTT!!!!!!
LOL RUN IT
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Money on my mind, money is my habit
Stay on the grind, until money's automatic
b**** I love money, I'ma f***in fanatic
Weezy-Brand New
After picking out the right dress to wear for 2nite...I had to get started on my hair...I didnt feel like wearing it down again so I decided to put it in a ponytail...
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s190/gabbybabble/2007-11/26/kleesimmo...
In the front...
Chris- TREY YOU TAKIN TOO LONG...(bangs on the door)
Bow- he prolly in dere jacking off...lol
O- hell yeah..lol
Trey- (opens door) I heard that nigga...dont get your ass busted
Bow- w/e man....Ay Ced?
Ced- wats good youngin?
Bow- how far are we?
Ced- we gon be pullin up in about 15 minutes
O- make sure you park in the back
Ced- the back?
Chris- yeah...its embarrassin when a big ass bus pulls up to a club...e/b gon be lookin
Ced- thats wats wrong wit yall young folks these days...yall spoiled...in my day...if we wanted to go to the club...we get on the city bus...or hop on our bikes...and we didnt care who saw us
Trey- prolly cause e/b was on the bus
They all laughed
Ced- yeah, but it was alright...
Chris- Im about to take my shower...and it better be some hot water left..(looks at Trey)
I turned the water on and got in the shower...the hot water hit my face...makin the entire bathroom steamy...I was starting to think about Y/n and wat the guys were saying...I need to get in that ass...but...it wasnt that simple...she's the type of girl I can grow a real bond wit...the guys see it ass a physical attraction...but...its so much more than that...About 10 minutes later...I got out,dried myself off, and quickly change...
http://www.fanpix.net/gallery/picture-view.asp?ID=117625
Bow- (bangs on the door) YO CHRIS WE HERE...COME ON
Chris- AITE!!...(takes one more look in the mirror) Sexii♥ (walks out)
Bow- about time...Ced parked on the side...so we all gon walk to the front 2gether...
Chris- aite thats cool...lemme get my watch and necklace...
O- Trey go and tell Y/n to come on...
Bow- hell yeah...she been in there for a long time...she might be sleep...lol
Trey- hell yeah...Chris prolly put her ass to bed...lol
Chris- lol...wat can I say...
Trey- (knocks on door) Ay Y/n you ready?
Y/n- YEAH...HERE I COME
Y/n POV
I finished my hair and applied...some golden body bronze I shimmered on my body giving me that extra glow...I topped my entire look off...with some pink strawberry lip gloss that covered my full lips...I was sexii
Dress
http://www.yandy.com/Plunging-Neckline-Dress.php
Shoes
http://www.madaboutshoes.org/images/baby-phat-shoes_49.jpg
Trey- here she comes...
Chris POV
The guys and I heard Y/n opening her door...we all turned our heads...and our mouths...dropped...allll...the way to the floor...
Y/n- (grins) Im ready.....
Guys- DAAAAAAAYUMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!
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♥Damn I hate a shy b****♥
Dont you hate a shy b****?
Yeah I hate a shy b****
She aint shy no mo She changed her name to my b**** (laughs)
Yeah Nigga dats my b****
When she ask u for da money when you do dont be surprised b****!!
Weez
run it
Omari a damn fool get in that ass But RUn it wats the dress
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The One I Co-Write
Inbetween Us 2
And Ma New
Promises of Love
RUN IT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They both need to stop playin' around and just do the damn thang!!! Mmmm--I wonder what that outfit is going to look like...
RUN IT!
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Even if your hands are shaking
And your faith is broken
Even as the eyes are closing
Do it with a heart wide open
Say what you need to say
John Mayer-Say
CHris was just now walkin out of the center...and noticed the guys standing outside of the bus...
O- my nigga...lol(shakes up)...you did yo thang boy
Chris- you know how I do...(laughs)
Trey- you had Y/n...in la la land foreal
Chris- I know...while I was driving her crazy...she was driving me crazy..biting her lips and s***...lol
Bow- I thought yall was f***in for a minute...lol...
O- hell yeah...she wanted it...you need to quit playin around and get in that ass lol
Bow- hell yeah you takin to f***in long...lol
Chris- man shut up...where she at anyway??
Trey- Ced said she on the bus gettin ready...she prolly naked right now...puttin lotion all over her body(licks lips)
Chris- Ay...cut that out...you gotta get your own
Trey- w/e...
Bow- damn...its our last night in NY...and Im about to get my party on
O- Im hittin da shower first
Bow- I got next...
Trey- Im after Bow...Chris you last...
Chris- w/e...
I was still on the fone talking to Bee and I heard the guys walkin on the bus talkin loud and wat not...
Bee- wats all of dat noise??
Y/n- the guys just walked on...you know Chris saw that video you sent me...
Bee- FOREAL...(SCREAM)...OMG...GIRL WAT DID HE SAY?
Y/n- he was feelin it...he said you had moves lol
Bee- I got waaaay more moves than that lol
Y/n- lol...
Bee- so wat you gon do about Chris?
Y/n- wat you mean wat Im gon do??
Bee- love muffin...is you gon get wit him or not...he is single, sexii, and big...(smacks) you playin around..
Y/n- I am not playin around...I just have a few doubts...
Bee- you not suppose to have doubts...just roll wit the punches that God is throwing at you...you've been through alot and now its your time to shine girl...I can feel it
Y/n- Omg...is this Bee Im talking to...gettin all sentimental wit me...the Bee who said dont mixed business wit pleasure??
Bee- lol...I know rite..but look all Im saying is that you're young and should be having fun...so just do that...ok?
Y/n- ok...I will
Bee- good...well love muffin this fone is gettin hot and its messing up my make-up...so let me call you back
Y/n- aite
Bee- double kisses...muah..muah
Y/n- muah..muah...bye(clik)
After gettin off the fone wit Bee...I tried to find me sumthin sexii to where for the party 2nite...we were gonna be at club Forty Flavors...and I wanted all eyes on me...so I needed sumthin to bring out all of my curves and that fits me like a glove...and I knew just the dress to do that♥
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♥Damn I hate a shy b****♥
Dont you hate a shy b****?
Yeah I hate a shy b****
She aint shy no mo She changed her name to my b**** (laughs)
Yeah Nigga dats my b****
When she ask u for da money when you do dont be surprised b****!!
Weez
AHHH Run it Yea Change that voice mail little gurl
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The One I Co-Write
Inbetween Us 2
And Ma New
Promises of Love
lol
run it!!
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--TASHA
run it!!
run it
OHHH MY LORD!
i wonder if chris will ever do that in real life,
hmmmm i wonderrrr anywhooooo imma new reader and i love this
story Y/N has got to get her groove back whooo!