Wednesday, April 16, 2008 - 23:26
-TEACH ME- [[was LOVE OR LUST]] [a y/n && Chris story]
Characters:
y/n: She is 21 and loves to go out and party with her girls. Her friends mean everything to her…she shares a house with all four of them. She is about 5’6..light green eyes…chocolate brown hair a little passed her shoulder…and she is 100% Puerto Rican.
Daniella: She is 20. She is very outgoing and loud, she will speak whatever is on her mind. She is about 5’7...light skinned…grey eyes and has long brown hair.
Chasidy: She is 21. She is y/n’s cousin and some say they look more alike then her twin sister. Chasidy is about 5’5...has medium length black hair…light brown eyes…and is mixed with Puerto Rican and black.
Dora: This is Chasidy’s twin sister. (Also y/n’s cousin) She is also 21. Chasidy is outgoing but Dora is quiet around new people. But don’t get it twisted, she knows how to have a good time. Her and Chasidy are complete opposites. Dora is about 5’4...short black hair (right above her collar bone) with dark brown eyes. She is mixed with Puerto Rican and black.
Leah: She is almost 22. This girl is crazy! (in a good way) She is down for whatever if it means she’s having fun with her girls. She is also Daniella’s cousin. She is mixed with black and white and is about 5’6. She has hazel eyes and long sandy brown hair.
Que: This is Daniella’s boyfriend of about a year. He’s in a new group called Day 26 and is trying to make it in the music industry.
Willie: Leah's boyfriend of a couple months. They haven’t been together long but you wouldn’t tell unless you asked them. They’re always all over each other. He is also a member of Day 26.
Chris: Que’s friend that he grew up with. They are real close. Chris is a R&B singer and is surprisingly single.
Bow: Another one of Chris’ boys. They get into it a lot, but they always got each others back.
Setting: Miami, Florida
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.O01
[The Beginning]
At the ladies house:
Daniella: Come on! We got 10 minutes until we have to leave otherwise Ima leave ya’ll hoe.s!
y/n: I dunno who you callin a hoe, but I’m ready so you not about to leave me!
Daniella: I know you ready, its them other three chicks that take so long.
Dora: I’m ready…[she plopped down on the couch waiting for Chasidy to finish getting ready]
Leah: Me too..
Dora: CHASIDY! GET YO AS.S DOWN HERE!!
Chasidy: Alright I’m comin! I don’t even know why ya’ll getting so excited about this. Chris Brown and Bow Wow are probably not even gunna be there. And even if they are its not like ya’ll would get a chance to talk to them anyway.
Leag: Ain’t nobody tryna see them! My baby is performing tonight and I promised him I would be there.
Daniella: Right, I’m just trying to see my hubby! A dance with Chris would be nice though!…
Dora: Well, ya’ll trippin because I know I’m trying to get “Up Close and Personal” with Bow.
y/n: You stupid! I’m just trying to dance and have a good time, Chris Brown or no Chris Brown….. Come on…let’s go!
All five girls piled into Chasidy’s car and drove to Club 101. Just as they expected, the line was really long. Leah's cousin works there so they didn’t have to wait in line. When they stepped foot in the club “Lollipop” by Lil Wayne was playing. The girls took a good look around.
Daniella: Dang! It’s poppin tonight! [She started bobbin her head to the music]
y/n: I know! These fellas lookin right too!
Leah: Right! Dam.n, I wish Will wasn’t here!
y/n: Girl please, you know you all luvy duvy for that boy!
Leah: I know [a big grin came across her face]
Daniella: I’m bout to go get a drink, I’ll get at ya’ll later.
Leah: Me and Chasidy bout to come with you.
Dora: Come on bit.ch, we bout to dance!
Dora pulled y/n on the dance floor. They started dancing matching their moves with the beat of the song. A couple dudes tried to come to them but they rejected them and kept dancing. They danced for a couple songs and then went and found Daniella, Chasidy, and Leah by the bar. Day 26 was about to perform and they didn’t wanna be in the middle of that crowd.
Dora: Is Que and Willie gunna come out and dance with ya’ll after they perform?
Daniella: Girl, yeah! If he don’t Ima find somebody else to dance with!
Leah: You feel me! Especially with the way these dudes lookin tonight…
The girls started laughin but their conversation got cut off when the DJ came over the speakers.
DJ: YO! How ya’ll doin tonight? As ya’ll know, we got DAY 26 IN THE BUILDIN!! They will be performing tonight.
The club went crazy. There were girls screaming everywhere you turned. The DJ waited for it to get quiet before he started again.
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THEY SO DAMN CUTE...
RUN IT...
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~!*Behind Every Beautiful
Gurl Theres A DumbAzz
Guy Who Did Her Wrong
And Made Her Strong*!~
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Facts abuot me...Markita
DATE OF BIRTH- FEBRUARY 14
SIGN- AQUARIUS
HEIGHT-4'11...NOT SHORT...JUST FUN SIZE
RACE-AFRICAN AMERICAN
GENDER-FEMALE
FAVORITE COLORS-RED, WHITE, BLACK and BLUE
MAJOR-CULINARY ARTS and HEALTH TECH.
GRADUATION YEAR- 2008
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Facts abuot me...Markita
DATE OF BIRTH- FEBRUARY 14
SIGN- AQUARIUS
HEIGHT-4'11...NOT SHORT...JUST FUN SIZE
RACE-AFRICAN AMERICAN
GENDER-FEMALE
FAVORITE COLORS-RED, WHITE, BLACK and BLUE
MAJOR-CULINARY ARTS and HEALTH TECH.
GRADUATION YEAR- 2008
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ohh...ain been here in a min...
there's the sex i been waitin for!!! lol
they still cute tho...
RUN IT!!!!
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Chris:Listen,like yo,I just be like wow,cause I love my fans and I don`t wanna hurt them.
lmao ~dies~
shoutout to Bre!
run it
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Chris Brown`s wifeyyyy . <3 .
p.s. " i love my fans and i dnt wanna
hurt em' " - chris brownnnn lmfao !!
ok ok i got it!!!
let's have sex again lol
...jus a thought
-T.I.♫♪
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ideas? how about a papperazzii snappin photos of em when dey got dey freak on? den it appeares in a magazine and chris' reputation is ruined....well...maybe not??? =]
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i wanna run this but i have writers block.
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u betta run this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow !! lol !! youh did qood .
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Chris Brown`s wifeyyyy . <3 .
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OMG! Loved the sex scene. Haha! RUN IT!
thank you ladies!!
i was a lil nervous about that scene lol.
i'll add more tomrrow for ya!
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Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
and A Moment in Time.
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/forum/a-moment-time-%E2%99%A5
nahh it didnt suck...
Run itt mama!!!
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Who just lost somebody
Your best friend, your baby
Your man or your lady
Put your hand way up high
We will never say bye"
♥~♥~R.I.P Brendan 'Chance' Holston~♥~♥
September 3, 1996-August 6, 2007
♥-ya babe!☻
it was good..
it didn't suck.. LOL
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
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~!.You have to take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you've got and remember what you had Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret, people change, things go wrong, just remember, life goes on..!~
that was not horrible!
i loved it. ;]
run it baby!
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NAH THAT SCENE WAS ON POINT.....GODDAMN!!!!!!!!
RUN IT!
that was not horrible ...
they are so cute together ...
&& i`m glad that Dora is okay ...
run it !
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... They can take tomorrow and the plans we made, they can take the music that we`ll never play, all
The broken dreams, take everything, just take it away, but they can never have yesterday ...
run it i thought tht it was good...they r a cute couple 4real...hope they last a while
runnnnnnnn thissssssssss!!
run it i thought tht it was good...they r a cute couple 4real...hope they last a while
runnnnnnnn thissssssssss!!
Part 2
Chris palmed my breasts and sucked on my right nipple while playing with the other one. He made sure he gave each one equal attention and then planted small, sweet kisses down the valley of my chest down to my stomach. He kissed all around my belly button and started unbuttoning my jeans while he was still kissing my stomach. He pulled my pants down and played with the lining of my boy shorts. I fidgeted around and a smirk appeared on his face. Why was he teasing me? He knew I wanted him bad right now-I needed him.
Chris: Damn baby, you ready for daddy ain’t you?
I nodded my head yes and he slid his pants down but he still had his boxers on. He slipped my panties off and spread my legs. He kissed each of my upper thighs and slid his tongue inside of me causing me to jump. I wasn’t expecting that. He flicked his tongue between my lips…going up and down and in circles.
“s***!” I gasped as I threw my head back. He started going deeper and deeper and started nibbling. “ah--f***!” I arched my back and rubbed his head as he continued to please me. I felt my body start to shake and he jumped up. “No baby! Don’t cum yet.” He dropped out of his boxers and reached over to his night stand. He opened the drawer and grabbed a condom. While he put it on I was trying to figure out how ‘he’ was going to fit inside me--he was huge!
Chris: Are you sure you’re ready?
I moaned and he gently eased himself inside of me. He slowly started pumping in and out making sure he wasn’t causing me any pain.
“Faster baby!” He started going faster--going deeper with each stroke. I bucked my hips with his. “Harder baby!” He started pounding inside of me causing the bed to shake and the headboard bang against the wall. “Ahh--s***! God Chris!”
Chris: What’s my name?
Y/n: Chris!
Chris: Say it louder!
Y/n: CHRIS!!
He continued pounding my walls. Chris groaned as my walls contracted around his d***. I flipped him over so I was on top. I started grinding my hips on and bouncing up and down. “f***” he groaned and I continued to ride him like a horse. “I’m bout to cum!” He flipped me back over and pumped harder, and faster. We both came at the same time and he collapsed on me, out of breath. He pulled out of me and brushed the sweaty hair away from my face. He kissed me and held me into his arms.
Chris: Damn baby- you a freak.
I playfully hit him and snuggled up closer to him.
Y/n: I love you.
Chris: I love you too.
I laid there and listened to him as he went to sleep. I placed my hand on his chest and felt his heart beat. This was so perfect. I had a man in my life I loved and nothing could come between us.
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[okay ladies- that was my first sex scene so sorry if it was horrible! run it...]
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Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
and A Moment in Time.
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/forum/a-moment-time-%E2%99%A5
okay so I wrote this chapter yesterday but forgot to add it, and I was gunna wait until tomorrow to add it but I don't know when I'll have time--so I'm adding it now lol. Hope you enjoy!
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-Y/ns POV: Part 1
Chris grabbed my hand as we walked up the drive way to his house. He unlocked the door and let us both in never letting go of my hand. After shutting the door and locking it again, he pulled me into the living room. He sat himself on the couch and pulled me onto his lap.
Chris: Come here. I missed you.
He moved the hair off my neck and started nibbling at it. I laid my head back to rest on his shoulder.
Y/n: I missed you too baby.
He gripped my hips and turned me around so I was straddling him. He pulled me closer to him and buried his head in the curve of my neck. His big hands stroked the small of my back going up my shirt. He started placing small kisses on the lining of my collar bone.
Chris: [in between kisses] I missed your scent…….your smile…..your walk…..your touch.
I pulled his head up and kissed him passionately. I rubbed my hands on the top of his head. I felt him smile in the middle of the kiss.
Chris: Damn, I think I missed your kiss the most.
He kissed me again. The kiss intensified and my body started getting hot. He lowered me onto the couch and hovered his body over mind. He sucked on my bottom lip and a soft moan escaped my mouth. I tugged at the bottom of his shirt and he released his lips from mine. I pulled his white v-neck t-shirt over his head exposing his wife beater. I quickly pulled that off too.
Y/n: Come on baby, let’s go upstairs.
Chris looked at me confused but didn’t object. He grabbed my hand and led me upstairs to his bedroom. I laid on the bed and Chris stayed at the edge of it staring at me.
Y/n: Are you just gunna stand there?
Chris: Bae, I don’t think you want me to lay with you. I need to take a cold shower before I do that.
I shook my head.
Y/n: No. Let me take care of that.
A surprised look spread across his face.
Chris: Are you sure Y/n? Because I don’t wanna pressure you if you’re not ready.
Y/n: Chris, I’m ready.
[a/n: Y/n isn’t a virgin, she decided to be celibate until she found somebody she loved so she wouldn’t just be f***in--she would be making love]
Chris crawled onto the bed and towered his body over me. He smiled as he stroked my face. He leaned down and pecked my lips.
Chris: I love you.
Y/n: I love you too.
He lightly ran his hand up my arm and my whole body shivered. Just his simple touch sent an electric current through my body. He kissed me again. He gently lowered his body onto mine making sure he didn’t crush me and began to caress my back, pulling me deeper and deeper into the kiss. He pulled away from the kiss and began sucking on my neck. He reached for the bottom of my shirt and took it off me. I reached behind my back and unclamped my bra. His eyes wandered around my bare chest. I felt a little uncomfortable at first but then he smiled and pecked my lips.
Chris: Damn you’re beautiful.
How did he always know the right thing to say? I swear he was perfect!
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Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
and A Moment in Time.
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/forum/a-moment-time-%E2%99%A5
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Glad that Chris admitted that he is in a relationship
real supportive fans wont stop loving him because he has a girl so he shouldnt sweat it-Tina need to relax herself
Bow is a dumby for believing Drake over his girlfriend
Hopefully they work that out
What the hell are the police doing there
run it
RUN IT!!!
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
no more runs??
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Make sure you go and read my story "Teach Me"
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/357962
and A Moment in Time.
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/forum/a-moment-time-%E2%99%A5
awwww .
run it !!
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Chris Brown`s wifeyyyy . <3 .
awww well im glad she is ok...
it's good that she apologized...
awwwww Chris came back!!!!
RUN IT!!!
first i just wanted to say i am so sorry for ur loss and i hope u r doing ok,and the add u just did wasn't bad at all! i really liked it! keep runnin it girl...
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~~bribri:peace,love & harmony~~cb"s #1 fan
love you chris!!!
and plz check out my stories FROM A NERD TO A JOC, Everything's Not Always the Way it Seems..., and Summer Camp!in the fan fiction forum!!
awhhh.
chris is so adorable.
run it.
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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342
awww...that was sooooo sweet!!!!
I love him!!! SO ADORABLE!!!
Glad to know that Dora is okay...
RUN IT
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Jus respect it and keep my name out’cha mouf
(I’m a Queen!)
-"I'm A King"- T.I. feat. P$C and Lil' Scrappy
runn ittt!!
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--TASHA