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<a href=http://thechrisbrownblog.com/wp-/http://thechrisbrownblog.com/wp-/wp-content/uploads/2011/02/chrisbrown-outtake.jpg>Jay</a> walked outside and blew warmth into his palms as the chilly evening air whipped across his face. He dug his hands in his pockets and walked down the empty block. He got to his post and stood there, looking in both directions. It had been a year. He was well on his way to a promotion, so he didn't sweat the lonely nights. He pulled out his iPhone and went through his contacts. He stopped on Monique's name, just as a young guy approached. He looked to be about 15. Jay looked him in the face and nodded.

"Mookie sent me." The guy said.

Jay dug in his pocket and handed him a dime bag. The dude handed him a crumpled twenty and walked off down the street. Jay pressed Monique's name and put the phone to his ear. Her voice broke the silence surrounding him and he looked down the street, as he leaned up against the building he shared this corner with.

"What you doin tonight?" He asked, his tone of voice implying that he wanted to see her.

"Mm, nothing if you tryna come through." She said.

"Be up when I call." He said, hanging up the phone and putting it back in his pocket.

He sighed and looked up at the sky and marveled at the number of stars he could count tonight. He wondered what was up there. He wondered who was sharing this view with him this evening.

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3 miles to the north, <a href=http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_tQdwsIDgYn8/TT9EjShVK6I/AAAAAAAAA0w/l-yh8As6e20/s1600/tumblr_levrt02CVs1qdg4ipo1_500.jpg>Selena</a> looked up at the stars and wished that she was there. She looked back at the crowd of kids surrounding the swimming pool, celebrating graduation. She spotted <a href=http://eleven25.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/trey-songz1.jpg>Narvin</a> and his eyes were glued to her. She turned away and sighed. She heard his footsteps behind her on the concrete. He put his hand on her lower back and she stepped away.

"Are you crazy? What are you doing?" She asked, looking at him.

"I haven't heard from you." He said.

"I didn't know this was something I'd committed to." She said, frowning at him.

"So what? What happened doesn't mean anything to you?" He asked.

"No. She's my best friend, Narvin." Selena snapped.

"Can I have everyone's attention!"

Selena heard her best friend <a href=http://www.blowoutsandbikinis.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Robyn-Rihanna-Fenty-1-3.jpg>Chelsea's</a> voice and she shivered.

"I wanna thank everyone for coming! Thanks to everyone who has ever been there for me. We're graduating you guys! This is huge. I've had so many good times with everyone out here. I'm gonna miss everyone. I really wanna thank my best friend Selena and my boyfriend Narvin for being there when I needed them. I love the both of you. I don't know who I'd be without you guys." She said.

Narvin smiled and Selena's face swelled with tears. She stared blankly back at her best friend and then at the sky. She didn't want to be here anymore.

Comments

ABSOLUTELY loved this story!! You always write stories that are filled with such emotion. I loved the way the story ended. At times I wanted Selena to end up with Phillip or Levi because of the way James was acting but in the end I am so glad that they BOTH grew up and ended up together. I wouldn't have had it any other way.

im glad that they got married and that they stayed together with the twins this was a good story

BRAVO! That was an AMAZING story!

"I'm gone grind for my girls. Period" I L O V E It!!!!!! That is most definitely my favorite quote period.

Lol at Aubrey and Ashton trying to excape out of their cribs too cute...I love how they made it work through everything they've been through

YAAASSSSSSS!!!! I enjoyed it! Great job girl!

yayyyyyyyyyy !! glad things worked out . and i'm beyond happy you updated . i'm in love <3

hahaha!

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!!!!!! LOL

@No_Replica: I'll agree to add to Clouds Over Brooklyn IFFFF you can find it on this board. Lol.

Short but sweet. I like how you ended it Carmen... The look back on there lives together, them officially being married now. And the best joy outta the two of them is Aubrey and Ashton. They're so adorable and mischevious. Gotta love these two. I enjoyed reading the stoey of these two. It was so beautiful and I think you for giving us an ending.

Omg Selena and James were great!! I love the recap.

OMG you don't how long we been waiting for this I love it!!!

soooooooo I don't wanna jump the gun but can we get a ending or something to
"TWICE" & "Clouds over Brooklyn"

aww the twins are too cute!
i like how u ended it recapping the story
cute story :)

Welp, that about sums it up lol. Marriage. Babies. Love. Collisions. :)

Selena placed her wedding shoes back in the plastic and smiled a little, running her finger across them, before she put them in the box and tucked them away in her closet. James walked into the room, wiping his hands on his sweats. He sat down on the floor.

"What you up to?" He asked.

"Just putting away my wedding shoes." She said, exhaling and smiling over at him.

"I was just, thinking a lot downstairs about this weekend and...all of the beauty at the wedding, you know? Made me think back to all of the ugly we grew out of." He said softly.

She smiled, "...New Years, when I kissed Phillip because you were upstairs pissing when the clock hit 12."

"That time that you found lip gloss on my lips Christmas Eve.." He said, shaking his head.

"...when my dad passed, and you weren't there." I whispered.

"It hurts me that we can even recollect this many and...s*** this isn't even half of it, let's be honest. But at the same time, knowing all of that terrible s*** we've been through...all of the arguments we had, all of the breaking up, the doubt, the insecurities...it says a lot about our strength too...and our resiliency, our willingness to be in this thing, no matter what personal sacrifices we had to make." He said.

"And I wonder sometimes, how we got here," She said, crawling towards him and turning around, leaning up against him.

He wrapped his arms around her shoulders.

"The wounded drug dealer from the corner marries the..." He started.

"Conflicted rich girl from up the hill. Sounds kinda cliche... like a teenage melodrama." She said, looking over her shoulder at him.

"Let's remember some good." He said, smiling.

"The letters you sent me, when I first got to school...after we'd broken up." She said.

"The love you've always had for my mother," He responded.

Selena's eyes teared up, "...Aubrey & Ashton. The best products of this catastrophe turned victory." She said, smiling.

"Catastrophe's right. Our lives just sort of...collided, you know? And in that collision, s***'s bound to break. I think the both of us have been broken once or twice." He said.

"But some good comes out of collisions too..." She responded. "Like wisdom, knowing what not to do...how slow to go, how to maneuver around one another."

"Mrs. Taylor, I love you.." He said.

There was a noise down the hall, so Selena got on her knees and crawled to the door, opening it. James smirked.

"It's the girls...you know it's the girls. Why are you being stealth?" He asked.

"I wanna catch them in the act," She whispered, pulling the door open and crawling softly down the hall to the girl's room. She pushed the door open to find Aubrey standing on the floor, looking up at Ashton who was trying to get out of her crib.

"Hey!" Selena called.

Aubrey fell down on her butt and Selena stood up and flicked the light on, folding her arms.

"Somebody has some explaining to do," She said, raising her eyebrow at Aubrey, who was looking at Ashton.

Selena smiled and picked her up, putting her back in her crib. Aubrey lied down and grabbed her teddy bear. Selena smiled at the two of them.

"I love you...good night. I don't wanna hear any noise for the rest of the night. Get some sleep," She said, turning to find James at the door.

She shut the door and looked up at him. He kissed her lips repeatedly.

"I wuvvvv you," She mumbled.

He shook his head and put his arm around her, walking back down the hall to their room. He smirked and lied down on the bed.

"So when we gon put that honeymoon lingerie to use? We ain't goin nowhere." He said.

She pulled off her shirt and tossed it across the room before she dropped her shorts.

"Who needs it?" She asked.

"You're right," He responded, grabbing her and pulling her to the bed.

So... I was scrolling through the stories on here (which I never do) and I found Collisions on the second page. I've been reading the entire thing since yesterday... And without further delay, I'm writing the finale.

run it!

love this story !!

I love this story!!! I wanna know the rest. Please run it!!!!!

wat happened to this???!!!!
ugh iwuld love to get an
add....sooooo with that
bein said......RUN IT!

i come time to time to this site to pass time with meaningless stories but i must say that even though you didn't officially finish the story that it was epic. you touched on a lot of very real and meaningful parts of relationship that a lot of us females dont know. or they go through it and dont know how to handle it. even though it was a fan story this is movie or novel worthy style writing. I loved every min of this story it was just so.......realistic and raw and honest thanks for healing some of my old wounds I've had with relationships that were almost exactly like jays and selenas or like selenas and Chelsea's.

but im rambling i hope to read more from you......thank you

Omg this story is amaaaaaazing!!!!!!
I enjoy reading it sooo much :)
RUN IT!!!

RUN IT!!!!!!!

Please come back

Runnn it

Come Back To This Please, Run It!

this story was awesome my sistah and cuzns put me on !

your an amazing writer !

Run It Please ! (:

Plz add run it!!!!!

Run it !!!