aite new story that i think i can finish.
let me kno whatcha think.

Coming from out of the hotel, Chris adjusted his tie and looked at his wrist watch. "Damn, I am going to be late." He rushes to his car, as he turns the engine on, he turns up the radio. "I bet the nieghbors know my name!! Got to say, this is one of the best love making songs ever." Chris sped off onto the beltway.

"Sorry I am late, didn't know my last meeting would take as long as it did. But, now that I am here, what can I do for you fellas?" Chris asks as he sits at his desk, folding his hands.
The two boys look at eachother and gulp their spit. "Well, Mr. Brown, I just need to re-take my test some time this week. I'm saying, this 'D' just isn't going to cut it for my grades."
"Yeah, niether is my 'F' young."
Chris looks at his students, "I am not sure what you two young men are asking me..."

"We need at least a 'C' in order to graduate man. Can you please let us take the test over?"

"Now, before I even say no, I believe I said that this test grade is final and no changes. Why should I give the two class clowns a second chance and nobody else?" The boys just looked down and knew nothing was going to change. "Justin and Carlos, I like you boys, you guys have a sense of humor. You both just use it at the wrong time, class time. Now, my answer is no and it's final. Goodbye, I must go home now." Chris led the boys to the doors and locked it on his way out.

SO FAR....TELL ME WHATCHA THINK!!