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Without you feels like i took my last step and breath in my life!!!!!!!! HOTT!!!!!!!!

This story is based off of the Charlie Wilson song Without you. In the beginn' of the story were u learn about y/n and her relationship w/ Chris.Then after some type of 'PROBLEM' y/n has she HAS TO break up w/ Chris.Wonderin' wat her 'PROBLEM' is then read and stay tuned Trust you'll wanna read dis!!!! Some of tha story will have flash backs and when it does I'll put Y/N'S P.O.V. NOW as the Chapter title. Most of this is flashbacks and then after that is gets very interestin' stay tuned to find out!!!!!

"Without you" By:Charlie Wilson
Mmm...hmm...

It feels like a lifetime, a thousand days have passed
by
Since I held you close to me
If I could see that smile from my friend
I know that I could live again
I need you here with me

Heaven knows what to say
Even though for right now youre so far away
I hope and I pray
Somewhere in your heart Ill always stay

Girl, lately my sun doesnt shine without you
Never noticed what it feels like to be without you
Feels like I took my last step and my last breath in
my life ending
Had to say just what I was feeling, girl
Cause my sun doesnt shine, sun doesnt shine without
you

This is more for me than for you
Girl, I finally see theres no substitute
For what we have
Do you know how much I love you

Heaven knows what to say
Even though for right now youre so far away
Gonna tell you and show you
Do whatever I can do to get back to you

Girl, lately my sun doesnt shine without you
Never noticed what it feels like to be without you
Feels like I took my last step and my last breath in
my life ending
Had to say just what I was feeling, girl
Cause my sun doesnt shine, sun doesnt shine
without you

Addin' soon if I can figure out how to post pics on here lol!!!!!

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The Way She Came Into The Place I Knew Right Then And ThereThere Was Something Different About This Girl The Way She Moved Her Hair, Her Face, Her Lines Divinity In Motion -Michael Jackson

u -ma do we really have to move here why can't we jus stay here w/ dad

y/m bends down to ur level and says:

y/m-because sweetie..........I told u many many times before that ur father and I are gettin' a divorce and it'll be a fresh start if we just move ok

Y/m kisses ur forehead and begins to walk back into your house packing up all or ur belongings you walk up into ur room that u share w/ ur sister Simmone. You start to shed tears because you aren't ready to leave your home to move somewhere that isn't the one that u've been used to for some many years. Your sister Simmone notices that you were crying and comes over to you and starts to comfort you. By huggin' you and tellin' you that everythings goin to be alright.

sim-everything is going to be alright sissy I promise jus give it sometime

u-time doesn't always dry the tears Sim. I wanna stay here w/ mom and dad not jus mom I love her but I want my parents to be happy again I want the happy family that we once had

sim-I'm sorry y/n but dats jus not gone happen this time...................but we can still be happy in Tappa...something I don't remember tha name it always gets me confused but it'll be nice there

u-I still wanna stay here I have so many friends and family our whole family is here

sim-correction Dad's family is here mom is orignally from VA

u-so

sim-plus I heard mom talkin' bout some cute boys down in Va

u-well dat gud fo u cause I'm not goin'

Y/n sits down on the floor that once was her room but now is nothin' but an empty room filled w/ boxes.

sim-y/n come on now u makin' dis harder than it already is

u-well maybe b/c I don't wanna move unlike somebody I kno

Looks up at Simmone

sim-look

Sits down beside y/n

sim-I don't wanna leave anymore than u do ok

u-then why aren't you mad about dis

sim-because I'm not lookin' at it as negitively as u r I look at it as a new opportunity to grow and to get to know our real family not just Dad's u kno

u-wateva

sim-u so stuborn .............plus i kno u ready to get out of sharin' rooms........cause whenever we get to our new house we don't have to share no more we even get to pick our on rooms and if you're lucky I might let you get tha biggest room in da house

Y/n starts to crack a smile

u-ok

sim-ok so now that's settled we needs tah get these boxes out so we can get movin' come on

Simmone and y/n pack up all of their boxes and items into the U-haul truck and take one last look at their beautiful house.

u-I sure am gonna miss it here

sim-yea

y/m-but yall r goin to love it in VA

u-don't be so sure bout dat

y/m-oh y/n I kno u will

Y/m closes the U-haul door while Simmone and y/n get in on the passenger side.

u-how do u know dat

y/m-because they have real cute boys in VA

u-wat is it w/ u and Sim about cute boys I don't care

y/m-y/n ur never too young or too old to be thinkin' bout boys

u-wateva

Y/n sit back in the seat as y/m begins to drive you to your new home and new life. Y/m and Simmone were talking about what it would be like in VA while y/n was sittin' by the door lookin' out the window thinkin' or were this new location would lead her. Would she like it? Would the people there like her? Would it be any better than Ohio? All of these questions were runnin' around y/n's 14 year old mind she had no idea what it would be like there but she knew that she had to get used to it whatever lied ahead. She finally got tired of thinking about it and dosed off.

y/m-I really am worried about her

Y/m looks at you then back at the road.

sim-don' worry bout here mom she'll be alright I asure you.........we jus needa give her time and she'll heal and be tha crazy outgoin' y/n we kno

Simmone said lookin' right at you while you slept

y/m-I sure hope so

The hours of driving finally ended as you became closer and closer to your new home. Y/m told Simmone to wake you up because you were almost to the new house and wanted you to be wide awake to see your new surroundings

Sim-y/n.................y/n gurl dang wake up

Simmone starts to shake you harder and harder you finally woke up

u-wat do you want

sim-to tell you that we're almost at our new house

u-oh aite ............sorry to go off on u like dat but u kno how i get when my sleep is disturbed

sim-yea u betta be glad I'm in a good mood or I would've pimp slapped a hoe

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** New reader**
OMG! Dats so damn gudd!!!
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I don't truly count dis as Chapter one it's kinda jus an intro so yall kno wats goin on a lil bit.

UR P.O.V. NOW
(JUS SO U KNO A LIL ABOUT WAT'S GOIN ON)
Waking up in this hospital bed doesn't ever become something that I look forward to every morning. I wish I could jus break free and take off this gay ass gown w/ my ass hangin' out all in da back but I have no choice. Either I stay in dis hospital bed w/ all of this stuff that I hate the most or I can die it's my pick sometimes I jus think what my life would be like w/o my "PROBLEM" and how much my life would be different. I sometimes ask God why this had to happen to me I could have the best life right now but I don't. I could have a beautiful baby w/ the one I truly love Christopher Maurice Brown like we planned to have but all of that got put on hold because of this this "PROBLEM" u could say it was a medical problem, karma from who knows how long but I am one of the lucky ones some haven't even made it this far thank God I have. Often I sit in this hospital bed watchin' the people walk down these halls w/ their loved ones and leave out of this place not looking back just once I wish that could be me. Then I sit here thinkin' about my past,my future and my one LOVE and when we first met.

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Girl this sounds so interesting so as the first person to respon i give you the first and official RUN IT!!!!!!!!!

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Baby i'm a winner, didn't even take me twelve rounds to do it, got the tittle now, he gonna tell the whole world, to give it up for his girl(dats me, just in case you ain't no)