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~'~'~'~'RAIN ON ME PART II - THE DAMAGE~'~'~'~

Ahhh! It's finally here!!! I'm excited!! I hope you guys are just as excited as I am. Well.........if you all don't know this is the part 2 to my other story, RAIN ON ME based on Ashanti's song off her second album.

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And yes, she is y/n. But she looks and performs like Beyonce. In fact, most of her songs are hers. I know, the ultimate package right? Well........as the other story finished off........Y/N is a superstar singer, a household name, just the biggest thing since sliced bread. A major hit in the music industry. Her and Chris were best friends before she got famous, and when she did they had a few fall outs. She ended up getting into an abusive relationship and engaged to Omari, her ex. But she ended that, and now she's with Chris........who she should have been with all along. So basically, now all is right with the world. Or so they think. Little did they know.........they were soon to become one of hollywood's most powerful couples in the industry ever. But how does the FLASHING LIGHTS affect their relationship??!?!? Stay tuned to find out. Here is

RAIN ON ME PART II - THE DAMAGE

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Chris woke up holding Y/N. He looked down at her and couldn't help but smile. Waking up to her beautiful face just re-affirmed that last night was no dream. There were no doubts in his mind. Everything was real. He really did have her again. And she was his. Forever.

Chris slid out the bed sure not to wake her, and went in the kitchen. He decided he would surprise her with breakfast.

About an hour later, Y/N woke up to the smell of something burning....and almost simultaneously 20 seconds later she heard the fire alarm go off.

She jumped out the bed and ran in the kitchen to see something on the stove on fire and Chris frantically trying to put it out. She instinctively dove for the sink and pulled out the sprayer and sprayed the stove putting the fire out. Drenching Chris and most of the kitchen in the process. After it was out she turned the water off and slowly turned around to face Chris.

He stood there trying to look innocent and had a big ol' goofy smile on his face.

Chris(raising his eyebrows): Surprise?

Y/N just lowered her head laughing. Shaking it from side to side. She looked back up and put her hands on her hip with a face that read "What exactly were you doing?" But she was laughing so hard the words wouldn't come out.

Chris(stuttering): I......I wa.......I was tryna make bacon.

Y/N just looked at him amazed. This was what she was going to spend the rest of her life with. And she was okay with that.

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F.Y.I:

I like when people write REAL comments on my stories. I REALLY hate when people just write "run it". I mean, I really appreciate yall running my stories, but I really care about what yall think. Yall opinions matter to me. So please leave real comments!! Thanks!!!

Comments

Aw thats sweet but i want to know what's going to happen to omarion
RUN IT

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~chrisbreezy4lyfe...or not?
Rhianna is changing chris breezy~

Aw thats sweet but i want to know what's going to happen to omarion
RUN IT

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~chrisbreezy4lyfe...or not?
Rhianna is changing chris breezy~

i been missin this stori!!!!
run it!!!!

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~*~!'m@ D!v@ 3v3N !n m@ $n3@k@~*~
Gangsta Gurlz, F.Y.A.A.D.S. N Fiya Squad
2 D! FL!PP!N W3RL!!!!!!
Hot Suh Bad Suh Evrything Inna 1 Suh!!!!
Tru Jamerican A Tek It 2 Dem Like QQ 2 Rahtid!!!

whatttt? is this story already over?
run it?

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JAy ♥

M1sS-ChR1sS-Br0wN

`=)

aww..thats so sweet of chris....

└►RUN IT◄┘
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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea

aww...run it!

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DO U have a RaSh or DoeS my SwaGg juSt iRRitate you?

Go Read my new story "The Hood Has My Heart"

awh finally.
and this chapter was so cute.
chris is amazing.

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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342

Finally, girl, dang!
Run it.

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[...Most Don't Get Alla That, a Brain And Her Face is so Flawless...
All Those Games We - Used to Play Now Seem So Lame To Me]

awwww! He's so sweet, he's a good guy :)! RUN IT GURL!

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*Jessica*

Aw, so sweet!

But I'm ready for REVENGE!!!

haha..run it.

AWWWW
tHAt WAS SO SwEEt
RUN iiT!

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"Because you have seen me, you have believed. But blessed are the ones who have not seen, and yet they believe."
-John 20:29

So, the doctors kept her in the hospital for 4 weeks………………and Chris was there everyday. He canceled the rest of his schedule, and stayed with Y/N.

3 weeks later……………………………….

For Chris she pretended to be happy, but inside……………………………..she was deeply depressed. She felt so used, and violated, and dirty and worthless. She felt like nothing. Like she could never do anything right. Technically, she really couldn’t keep a man, especially Chris because he went to Rihanna, and now she really feels like she won’t be able to keep him because she couldn’t give him the one thing in this world he wanted.

A baby.

She felt like a failure.

And she couldn’t do anything. The doctors put her on bed rest, and her ankle was broken. She looked at herself in the mirror.

She stared into the mirror looking deep into her own eyes. As she did so, the tears filled her chest and she couldn’t take it anymore. Her reflection looked like such a filthy, useless version of her former self it disgusted her. Her eyes wondered over her skin examining all the bruises that were still visible. She started crying. It was like………………………..her life ended. She could never go back. And things would never be the same.

“You’re still beautiful…………………….”

Chris walked into the room without her noticing and saw her crying.

She turned around and looked at him with tears in her eyes.

Chris: You’re still beautiful baby…………………nothing’s changed.
Y/N(voice cracking): Don’t lie to me………
Chris: Why would I lie(gco)
Y/N(yelling): CHRIS LOOK AT ME!!!!

She started crying harder.

Chris walked over to try and hug her…………….

Y/N(backing away): Don’t touch me…………
Chris stood there amazed…………..

She limped over to the couch in her hospital room and brought her knees to her chest and kept crying. Chris went to sit next to her. He took her hand.

Chris: Baby…………look.
She shook her hand no refusing to look up.
Chris: Baby…………baby just look.

She looked at him holding her hand. He was playing with her ring.

Chris: You know what this means?
She looked in his eyes.
Chris: It means that I vow to be your husband and to love you and support you. And to be there for you through sickness…..*she starts crying*….*he touches her chin making her look back up into his eyes*….and in health. For richer or poorer.

He smiles.

Chris(smiling): So you’re stuck with me. No matter what. And Y/N no matter what happens……….you will always be beautiful to me and still be my angel.

Y/N gave a weak smile.

He kissed her forehead and she rested her head in his lap and cried.

Chris: I love you Cola…………
Y/N: I love you too Baby……..
Chris(stroking her hair): I know it was really bad…………..and I hate myself for not being able to prevent it…………….I mean……………I told you I would protect you………..and this happened. I’m so sorry Cola…………………but………………..you gotta stop crying baby…….
Y/N(crying): I’m trying…………….I just feel…………like…………….I don’t know…………
Chris: Feel like what bae……….
Y/N(crying harder): Like now I’m……………….useless and dirty……………..like I’m this slut or something……………….and things wont be the same………….
Chris: Why you feel like that?
Y/N: Because…………………I’ll never be able to give you what you really want……………I can’t have kids……………..
Chris: Bae you think that’s all that matters to me?
Y/N gets quiet.
Chris: There’s still ways for us to start a family and you know that…………………..
Y/N gets quiet again………..
Chris: You know I’m right.
Y/N: And I feel like I wont be able to sing again………..or perform……….and it’s what I love to do Chris. It’s my life.
Chris: Baby I know what music means to you. And if means that much to your heart, you’ll always have it inside you. It doesn’t leave. Don’t worry.
Y/N: And then my body looks so different now…………..it’s bruised up………..
Chris: The bruises will go away and the pain will heal. And you’ll have fans no matter how much your body changes………*smiles*….what were they gonna do when you got pregnant with lil Chris?
She laughs.
Chris: You’ll always have people who love your music ALMOST as much as I do………….because I love you………….FLAWS AND ALL.♥

He looks up and kisses his lips softly.

He was still her baby. After all this time, and all they’ve been through.

He still loved her.♥

omg!
it's working again!
please bring it back!
run it.

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my story, I Promise You - (Used to be Lie About Us).
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342

Pretty pretty PLEASE bring this back!!!
RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT!!!

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*Jessica*

it works again.

RUN IT!

hey girl, will u PLEASE run this storie?!?! its one of my favorites! RUN IT!

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*Jessica*

run it!run it!run it!run it!
run it!run it!run it!run it!
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they are so damn GOOFY!lol!
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A DIVORCE!!??
Here we go AGAIN!
[Just Kidding]

RUN ITT!!

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~Tell Me How I'm Supposed To Breath With No Air~
[[My Mind Is Blind At Times I Can't See Anyone But You]]
&hearts;Your soldier&hearts;Your friend&hearts;Or Your Lover&hearts;Girl,I wanna be&hearts;

♫RUN IT ♪RUN IT ♫RUN IT♪
♪RUN IT ♫RUN IT ♪RUN IT♫

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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea

*NEW READER*

R
RU
RUN
RUN I
RUN IT
RUN IT!
RUN IT!!
RUN IT!!!

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-Chris Breezy Got Them Kissables!!!!

OH, *SOBS*

OK, RUN...

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Chris's wifey 4 eva n' more @$&*#%!^+

OH, *SOBS*

OK, RUN...

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Chris's wifey 4 eva n' more @$&*#%!^+

OH, *SOBS*

OK, RUN...

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Chris's wifey 4 eva n' more @$&*#%!^+

RUN IT !!!!

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Chris Brown Is 2 Sexy!!!!

Divorce...? WHAT...???? HECK naw... I don't even wanna read no more.

*walks out the post pissed... 5 minutes later comes back*

APRIL FOOLS!!!! Lol

So yea that lil "prank" I just tried to pull was WACK... Lol

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REAL EYES REALiZE REAL LiES

IM GLAD THAT Y/N IS OK AND THAT CHRIS AND LLOYD R COOL....

DIVORCE?...NOOO.....

♫RUN IT ♪RUN IT ♫RUN IT♪
♪RUN IT ♫RUN IT ♪RUN IT♫

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Mz.Nu-Nu
Keepin' it Real Wit Ya!
www.myspace/virgolea

awwe mayne divorce i dun wanna dem to b divorced RUN IT!!!

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I'm Livin Two Different Lives
One Gril In The Day You At Night
And Even Though This Aint Right
I Just Cant Get Enough Of The Way You Put It Down
You Really Got Me Trippin
Hold Up Baby Girl Dont Talk Just Listen
Let's Just Make Love Girl For Da Last

wait hold up divorce with each other or other people

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Chris Brown's Boo

hahaha, kay.
run it.

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my story, Lie About Us.
http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/271342

Okay...........running tomorrow!!

And when it comes to her singing.........who knows............I DO!! I can tell you that in the next story they'll be venturing into other businesses. (Clothing industry)

Chris' Line will be called "Fresh Nerd"
And Y/N's will be called either "Concrete Rose" or "Goodies"

And the trilogy will be dope. It's gonna be based on them going through divorce. I know, right? But there will be laughing and less crying. A LOT less. I promise. It's gonna be funnier hopefully. I don't think my jokes in my stories are that funny, but hopefully for the next one I can tap into some greatness. Wish me luck!!

Only a few posts left!! Run it!!!

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"It aint how I live while I'm here.................it's how I live when I leave."

Pray To God When I Die Let Me Live In The Sky

I guess ya death was a lesson in life
Ya taught me that I wanna.......

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Live In The Sky♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥