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Here I(Shante) am sitting in my Room doing my little Sister's(Shayna) hair for school the next morning...
Shayna: When is you and yo ugly boyfriend gon break up?
Shante: (Braiding her hair) um no time soon...i dont know why u dont like him...he has done nothing to yo lil ass
Shayna: I dont care...shoot if i was you i woulda left him a long time ago you know?
Shante: well im not you little girl i love him and thats all that matters
Shayna: you aint in love you in lust baby girl you need to get with the program sis
Shante: excuse me little miss fast ass what do you know about love and lust
Shayna: (quiet)....dont worry about that just know that i kno...
Shante: (shakes head) whatever...you got your school clothes together?
Shayna: (turns around and looks at her) sis...now you already kno that i been had that done about 3 hours ago...why u act like im a little baby or something?
Shante: look im just lookin out for you so we wont hear mommas mouth the next day and be all up on ma ass
Shayna: as long as she aint up on mines im str8
Shante: ugh im done leave ma room
Shayna: (gets up) u aint gots to catch no attitude (rolls eyes and walks out)
Shante's POV
I was just thinkin about what Shay was talking about...it never crossed my mind that i could just be in lust...nah what da hell do she know she only 9 years old....
With that being said my Mother(Rochelle) walks into the room with the telephone in her hand...
Chelle: hey...someone is on the phone for you...im kind of scared because he didnt tell me who it was...
Shante: im sure its nobody important let me see (takes the phone) hello?
m/v: Ey...what you doing?
Shante: (???) Who is this?
M/v: damn you dnt know my voice after how long we been dating?
Shante: (relieved) oh s*** its you
Chelle: (mouthing) Who is it?
Shante: (mouthing back) its Jayvon
Chelle: (a little disapointed) ok whatever im going downstairs...
So with that being done my mom left my room and i was on the phone talkin to my Boyfriend Jayvon
Jay: baby i got some news for u
Shan: whats that?
Jay: My best Friend chris and his sister is coming to live here wit me
Shan: really?? i didnt think he was gon move to Atlanta
Jay: yea but already you know how it is...but um...he comin to Mechanicsville High so imma need u to show him around and s*** u kno half them mothaf***as there dnt know s*** about showing anybody around
Shan: lol ight bet what he look like?
Jay: he liteskinned well hella lite to be honest he tall and skinny aint no nigga like that at that damn school so u should see him rite off the bat
Shan: iight then bet (looks at the clock) oh damn its 11:36 im bout to get in da bed bo0
Jay: iight then dream about me
Shan: lol iight nite baby love you
Jay: i love you too...(Quickly hangs up)
Shan: (looks at the phone)...um ok
WITH JAY
f/v: who was dat u was talking to/
jay: dont worry about it
f/v: i dont want u talkin to other b****es ok?? im the only b**** u need to talk to
Jay: do i be all on yo case when u be talkin to any and other niggas??
f/v: that aint the point
Jay: yes it is if u can talk to other niggas i can talk to other b****es...
F/v: she must not be important for u to hang up on here so fast after u said I LOVE U
Jay: girl u better gon with all dat s*** i got some s*** to do so night
f/v: wait a minute...u aint gon give me my midnight treat?
Jay: not if u dont give me mines...(lays in the bed)...Tisha...u gon do it?
Tish: no problem (she goes under the cover and goes down on him)
Run It ladies!! AND I NEED 3 CAST CALLS FEEL FREE TO HIT ME UP!
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RuN iiT!!!
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whereeeeeess da love ladiess????????????????
RUN IT RUN IT SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD
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BACK IN ATLANTA
Everyone was at the lil wayne concert it was packed from jump to the end we been here about 3 hours already and it was almost over
Trell: OMGG I LOVE HIMM!! (jumpin up and down like a lil kid)
Syd: NAHH NAH THATS MA BABY DADDY!!
Trell: WHATEVER!!....YES IM THE BIRDMAN AND IM THE JR!! AY AY AY SHUTT UP b**** SALLOW AND IF U DNT SALLOW SHUT UP b**** GOGGLE!! AYYYY
Syd: HEY HEY HEYYYYYYY (Dancing)
With in our moments of fun Renee bumps into her
Trell: EXCUSE U...OH ITS U
Renee:...oh hey...(tries to hide her neck)
Trell: (notices her necklace)...WDF b**** THATS MA NECKLACE! (pushes her)
Renee: DONT U f***IN PUSH ME b****!
Syd: LADIES LADIES PLEASE
Trell: NAH f*** HER (punches da s*** outta her)
Before u kno it they started scrapping like crazy that 5 security gaurds had to block them but Trell accidently punched the security guard in the face and she got arrested and so did the other people who was in the fight...
RUN IT
CONTINUED IN JAMAICA
Everyone is lookin at krissy with pure hate in there eyes and she suddenly realize what she just said and she just freezes up.....
Everyone on hush mode
Krissy:(scared s***less)...i-i-im sorry i really didnt mean to say that
Hush Mode
Krissy:...honestly im so so sorry i dnt kno what came over me (she looks at shad and sees him hella pissed)....
Nobody said a word the whole trip back to the hotel except we all just went into the hotel and went our seperate ways
Shad is walkin hella fast like he dont even wanna be bother with her
Krissy: (runnin after him)...listen listen im sorry
Shad: WHAT DA f*** U SORRY??? DO U KNO WHAT DA f*** U JUST SAID!!?? TO ALL MA f***IN HOMIES??? U SAID NIGGER!!NIGGGEERRR!! THAT s*** IS SO f***IN DISRESPECTFUL!! YEA THEY PLAY AROUND AND JOKE ON ME ALL THE f***IN TIME BUT WHAT DA f***!! FOR U TO SIT THERE AND SAY f*** ALL U BLACK NIGGGERS?!?!(GCO)
Krissy: I DID NOT SAY BLACK NIGGGERS!
shad: WHAT DA f*** YES U DID!! HOW DA f*** ARE U GONNA SIT THERE AND SAY DAT U DIDNT SAY DA s***???! DA WHOLE MOTHAf***IN CAR HEARD U!!
Krissy: LOOK I SAID IM SORRY OKAY??? I DONT KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME!!
Shad: I KNO...U A RACIST ASS b****!! THATS WHAT U ARE...U THINK THAT EVERYTIME THEY SHOW ATTITUDE TOWARDS U...U GOTTA GET DA LAST LIP! WELL GUESS WHAT I AINT GOIN DOWN LIKE THAT SO U KNO WHAT...SINCE U WANNA CALL US NIGGERS AND s***...WELL WHY DONT U GET YO CRACKER PECKERWOOD LOOKIN WHITE ASS OUT MA FACE! WE DONE ITS OVER f*** U...U CAN FIND YO WAY BACK TO ATLANTA b**** (pushes her out the door and slams it in her face) b****!
Krissy stands her hurt as ever dat she didnt even have her bags but shad opened back up the door and he threw her bags in her face and close it again and this time lockin it she started feelin madd tears comin down her eyes dat she just let it run down...with a couple ways down the hall she sees shante and chris
Shan: (staring at her in disbelief)...baby ill meet u in tha room ok?
Chris: yea iight (muggs krissy and walks on)
Kris:...im so so so so sorry...im serious i really am
Shan:.......thats not the point...u disrespected us....and this country...i thought u was hella cool from jump...yea ma friends ma best friends rather...yea they joke they do what they do but thats them....they aint gon change for nobody...NO BODY...and if u cant accept the fact that they will always clown on u...well thats just gon be more on u...not them but u...im so so mad at u right now...i cant believe u disrespected us...and we didnt do not a damn thing to u...and i dont think u are doin this just cause of the jokes they made of u...i think u doin this because u want chris...i seen u lookin at me with this look...im sorry but chris is mines...and by u calling us niggers?? do u really think chris is goinna b wit chu??...no...im sorry dat shad kicked u out...but...just the way things operate....have a nice trip home (walks on to her room and shuts the door)
Just then Krissy starts balling and falling to the ground in madd tears...after abuot 10 minutes she regained her strength and walked out...
RUN IT RUN IT soooo good
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BACK IN ATLANTA
Renee was getting ready for her concert and she had one of her new friends to go with her name Sheena and they were at chris house getting ready
Joy: u just about ready??
Renee: i just need a necklace it would go perfect with this outfit
Joy:....(hesitates)..here (puts on Lytrells necklace she gave to her when she was a baby)..this is ma daughters...she doesnt really act like a daughter to me no more...so i want u to wear this
Renee:...(shocked)...no ms hawkins i cant...this is your daughters
Joy: she doesnt have to know u are just goin to a concert...
SHeena: thanks ms hawkins
Joy: no problem babies...well its almost 7:30 u better get goin (time difference in atlanta than jamaica)
Sheena: ok Renee ill meet u in the car with the rest of the homies ok?
Renee: iight
Sheena: ok thanks again (runs out)
Joy: iight baby (looks at joy)...look even tho chris isnt here...he would love u in this outfit...u look beautiful hunny...its like u your goin to your first date
Renee:..thanks...its like u are really takin ma mothers place in being a mother..and i want to thank u for keepin me around
Joy: not a problem (kisses her on the forhead)u have a good time baby
Renee: thanks (walks out)
As Joyce went downstairs and watched her from the window she had a lil tear in her eye
OMGG!
CONTINUED WITH LYTRELL
Trell finally made it to her best friend Sydney's house...trell knocked on the door like crazy until she finally answred the door
Syd: girl!! what is wrong wit chu
Trell:..can me and my son stay here for a couple of days
Syd:..where is Davone??
Trell: he is in iraq girl please??
Syd: iight then come on it make yourself at home...whats goin on why u got all ya stuff
Trell: baby i want u to go in the room an play with Lamar ok??
Dameon: k mommy (runs to his room)..
Syd: girl sit
We both sit down
Syd: whats the problem??
Trell: u kno dat b**** renee chris used to f*** with?
Syd: uh huh u told me about her when i first met chu
Trell: her mother has been on major drugs and is in a rehabilitaion center until she gets well and nobody would look out for renee but ma mom...so she is currently stayin with us...
Syd: ok wats da problem
Trell: DA PROBLEM?? WHATS DA f*** ISSUE!!...my mother abandoned me for her...she said she was like her own daughter...and for some reasons she has been payin her more more and more attention to her everyday!!! its like she doesnt know me no more....it hurt me so bad when she said she was like her own daughter...after what she did to ma family (crying)
Syd: damnnn thats hella f***ed up dude...are u ok
Trell: im not im so stressed...its like she dont even f***in care about me no more...its like well since davone is gon u got your own problems to handle u 20 years old with a son its time u step up...u kno how b****y dat is to ma heart!...
Syd: oh wow (goes and hugs her)...girl u kno u ma best friend for life and i will not let dat s*** get into u like dat ma...i got cho back no matter wat
Trell: thanks mama...so what we doin tonight?
Syd: wel...u kno its saturday right and i do got 3 lil wayne tickets
Trell: FO REAL!! OMMGG U MA b**** FOR LIFEE lets get dressed girl
Syd: ALREADYYY!
UH OH DATS IT FOR NOW RUN IT LADIESS
i kno krissy did just say that she better take that back RUN IT RUN IT sooooooooo good
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CONTINUED AT THE CONCERT BEACH PARTY
Everyone was tired and wore out so we just riding in the limo just talking...
Chris: damn that was so f***in fun dawg
Dru: im saying did u see them butt naked hoes??
Shandela smacks da s*** outta him
Dru: WDF! U DO DAT FOR?
Dela: excuse me???? but naked hoes??? im da only ho u should be lookin at u got me??
Dru: (holdin his head) wateva s***
Berg: man elephant man was hot wasnt he
Reece: hell yea i didnt ever think i was gon dance like that
Shan: s*** niether did i?
Shauna: nigga u was workin it on chris
KB: hell yea how da f*** did u keep up like dat
CHris: see its like this u gotta have skills
Shan: and ma baby sho do got skills
Krissy rolls her eyes
Shad:...lol baby whats da matter wit chu u been actin wierd all night
Kris: oh nothing...it sucks not being able to do what i wanted to do (lookin at shante)
Shan:....what are u talkin about?
Kris:...oh nothing u wouldnt understand?
Shan: i probably would if u told me
Kris:...ugh nothing ok?? (folds arms)
Jayla: ummm?? is there a problem???
Trey: no baby baby (gco)
Jayla: hush trey (puttin hands in his face) ok whats the problem...krissy??? shandela??? is there any issue dats u have with one of ma girls??? speak now...
Everyone is on hush mode
Jayla: uh hello?? i kno im not talkin to ma self?
Shad: then who u talking to
Jayla: shut up shad ok u kno what u bout this close of ma foot bein in yo ass
Krissy: excuse me?...but i dont think u are in any place of tellin ma man what and what not to do okay (white accent)
Jayla: b****HH I WILL DROP KICK YO MOTHAf***IN ASS b**** DONT f*** WITH ME HO U DONT f***IN KNO ME (bout to charge at her but every catches her)
Kris: U KNO WHAT f*** ALL YALL BLACK NIGGERS ALL YALL CAN GO TO f***IN HELL
Everyone stopped and looked at her like they bout to f***in KILL HER
OHHHHHHH s***TT RUN IT!!!
uh-oh RUN IT RUN IT soooooooo good
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CONTINUED WITH JAY...
Jay finally made it to jamaica...because its now 3:30in the morning they all chilling and waiting by the Caribean hotel where the crew was staying...
Jay:...ight we here
Marc:...damn this is fly dawg
Jay: nigga f*** tha view we need to find out which room they staying in
Mel:...s*** it aint no telling but u gon find out
Jay: u damn right...iight this is what i want u to do...im gon chill out here and u and Marc ask the lady what room chris and shante are stayin in ok??...
marc: iight bet
Mel: isnt that ileagal?
Jay: nigga omg i swear GO!
So Jay stands outside behind the palm tree bushes and Marc and Mel go in and talk to the lady
Marc: excuse me (clears throat)...can i ask u what room is Shante and chris are staying in?
Lady: im sorry but that is confidential...may i ask are u family?
Marc: im apart of the group and i couldnt get the ticket on time so im here now
Lady: (looks on the computer)..well it says here that they wasnt expecting anyone else to join...are u family??
Mel: yes im her brother and marc is her stepbrother..we just here to come and give her something that she left at home...very...valuable (serious look)
Lady: (lost)...um ok then whats your name
Mel: Jamel Richards
Lady: ok their room number is 867 on the 8th floor on the left
Mel: thank u very much
Jay:...did u get the room number...
Mel: yea we got it...its 867 on the 8th floor on the left
Jay: ok this is what i want u to do...i want u to steal a couple clothes from the security room and act like security gaurds and gaurd the room while i make ma move on them
Mel: NIGGA WHAT DA f***??? THIS AINT NO GOT DAMN GRAND THEFT AUTO!
Jay: nigga shut up...im willin to do anything to get ma b**** back..now u with me or not??...iight then now im gon sneak in the room and then i want u to gaurd that whole hallway bet??
Marc: iight but wen we make our move
Jay: right now nigga go!
They both run to the back of the hotel and do exactly what he says and then Jay walks into the hotel and walks like nothin to CHris and Shante's room
omg..i feel so bad for trell..that is messsed up..but run it please : )
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LEARN FROM YESTERDAY
LIVE FOR TODAY
HOPE FOR TOMORROW
JAYLA AKA JAY
awwwww poor Lytrell RUN IT RUN IT sooo good
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CONTINUEDDD
Renee was chilling in the room watchin the cosby show when Joy came into the room...
Joy: hey how u feeling?
Nee: ok but not better..
Joy: well thats all goin to change
Nee:...how is that?
Joy: well (walks to her)
Lytrell was walkin past renees room but she overheard them so she decided to eavesdrop
Joy: u kno that u are like a daughter to be...and u kno that i would do anything to make you happy...yea back then u may have done some pretty inappropriate things to ma sons heart...but im a christian and i will always forgive and forget...but dont tell anyone this...but i got chu tickets to go see lil wayne in concert tonight
Renee: (estatic) ARE U SERIOUS!! OMG THANK U SO MUCH (hugs her so tight) U ARE LIKE THE MOTHER THAT I HAVE NEVER HAD!!
Trell is in madd disappointment that tears are formin so she just dropped the bouquet of flowers and runs down the stairs to get her son
Dameon:...mommy whats goin on (worried)
Trell:...dont worri about it baby just put your shoes on and lets go
Meon: where are we goin??
Trell: DAMEON! please...just do what i say ok?
Meon: (sadly but surely puts on his sneakers and wait patiently for his mother)...where we goin
trell: somewhere where we are appreciated (picks him up and hers and his suitcase and walk out)...
She takes the car and drives away to her best friends house and didnt say a word to her mother....
RUN IT RUN IT soooo good Krissy is jealous of shan
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CONTINUED AT THE CONCERT....
Every single jamaican person was at the concert beach party and not to mention it was hella pretty! lots of fine dudes but i got ma chris and im shante what do u mean...but we all crowded around this huge stage and that it was so many people here that we was almost in the beach water...just then chris came up behind me and started grinding with me to the music
Chris: (grinding and holdin ma hips)...baby..what would i do if i didnt have u
Shan: (poppin it)..baby i dont know s***...all i kno is that u a good ass dancer...
Chris: i got some other qualifications too (being nasty)..
Shan:...ooo ok just show me wat u go baby
So me and chris continued to dance and dance like it was no more then a lil bit later some man came up to the stage with a think ass accent...
DJ: ay wadddup jomaica!!! yea yea! this yo boy DJ Jam and we doin it big in Jamaica we have a special shoutout to da newest crew that came down to jamaica ms Jayla and her family waddup yall
Jayla: (SHOCKED)...da hell?? how dat nigga kno ma name??
Trey: i dont kno baby but we gon be famous in Jamaica
Dj: iight iight iight yall we got Elephant Man and Sean Paul and ya boy Tony Matheron (?) coming to show yall how to Dutty Wineee
Dutty Wine comes on
We all started winnin and me and chris is gettin down and for some odd reason that b**** Krissy is lookin at chris like she want him to herself...so i pull up ma dress and started working it hard on chris...which was gettin him harder than a brick
Chris:...damn baby u doin it like that (cant keep up)
Shan: u damn right (raises her leg and starts goin wild)
Just then everyone is crowding around me and chris and watchin us get down like no other
Dj: UH OH UH OH LOOK AT DA COUPLE BY THE WATER SAY JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE (stops because everyone is sayin it)
Crowd: JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE JUKE!!!!! (happy as hell)
Just then we all calmed down we all was just dancin slow to Slow Wine from R.Kelly
As me and chris is grinding together i look at everyone else doin the same thang with they mans...i was lookin at tyshauna and Kb lookin like they about to f*** on something real hard that i just shake ma head and get alil bit more into it...
Krissy: (mean muggin Shante).....
Shad: (grinding)...what is wrong wit u ma??
Kris: there is something about that girl dat i dont like
Shad:...what girl??
Kris: Shante...its like something about her that i dont like...
oooooooh RUN IT RUN IT sooo good
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CONTINUED...
We were all downstairs in the lobby waiting dor the limo to take us to the beach concert yet we still dont know who the mystery celebrity is...but nevermind that because all of a suddent we all have anomosity towards the new b****es...
Krissy:...whats the matter with you guys?? u all have been actin like lil baby b****es ever since we got here...
Reece: excuse me (stands up slow like she bout to beat the breaks off her)...first of all lil white b****...there is nothing wrong wit us...and for us to be lil baby b****es...well b**** guess what i got yo baby b**** in ma left fist ho (bout to swing but Berg got her hand)
Berg: CHILL!! DAMN THIS IS POSED TO BE THE NIGHT FOR ALL OF US TO HAVE FUN!!
Reece: i dont like her!
Krissy: i dont like YOU!
Reece: well b**** u kno what YO ASS WASNT EVEN INVITED!!
Jayla: will yall shut the f*** UP!!!! PLEASE??? DAMN!! THIS IS MY TRIP OK!! EVERYONE OF YALL MOTHAf***AS IS GON GET ALONG U HEAR ME!!!??? enough of this s***!
Just then Hotel security came
Sec:excuse me is there a problem
Trey: no everything is fine
Sec:...keep it down in here...
Just then the limo came and everyone rushed to the limo and we was on our way to the beach party
BACK IN ATLANTA WITH JAY
JAY IS CHILLIN WITH HIS BOYS PLAYIN CRABS...
Jay: SEVEN MOTHAf***A WHAT!! 40DOLLARS
Marc: nigga that aint s***..yo ass was cheatin...f*** that
Jay: nigga i aint cheat yo ass just dont know how to f***in play quit crying pussy
Marc:...nigga i got cho pussy
Mel: nigga calm dat s*** down man...ay where yo chick ay (lookin at jay quizzin him)...
Jay: i dont kno her f***in ass leavin this mornin in a truck
Mel:...well...word around the hood...is that she went to jamaica with chris...
Jay:....WDF????
Marc: yo is u serious??
Mel:...yea u kno dat b****..that i used to f*** with...Krissy?? well we dont f*** around no more because she couldnt handle...now she go out with a punk ass nigga shad...and for somd odd reason i overheard her conversation with him saying that she couldnt wait to meet chris and shante...because she have always wanted to meet her...but ma thing is...why da f*** is they goin to jamaica??
Jay: how da f*** did u hear about da jamaica part??
Mel:..Some chick named Jayla called her phone when she was in the shower and she left a message and i heard it talkin bout be at her house at 5 so we can be on the plane to jamaica on time...
Jay:...(stands up)...SO DAT PUNK MOTHAFUCA IS TAKIN MA b**** TO JAMAICA?? WELL IS THEY ALREADY THERE??
Marc: nigga u said u dropped by her house at 5 in the mornin and she was leavin in a truck
Jay: DAT WAS CHRIS'S TRUCK...f*** THAT GET DA GAT HOMIE WE FINNA FLY TO JAMAICA...BUST THIS NIGGA f***IN CAP BACK...AND SHANTE....DAT b**** GON WISH SHE NEVER f***ED WITH ME (flips the table over and runs and gets the gun)..COME ON MOTHAf***AS LETS GO!
They all run out the house after him.....
STILL IN JAMAICA
Its around 7:45pm and Me and Chris are getting ready..right now im in the shower while chris is getting freshened up
Chris: (yelling)..BABY U ALMOST DONE I NEED TO BRUSH MA TEETH
Shan: NO!..JUST COME IN AND BRUSHT THEM
Chris: (gettin happy)...ARE U SURE THATS OK WITH U??
Shan: I DONT CARE!!
Chris: iight then (goes in the shower and sees her sillouette from the curtains)...wow
Shan:...dont tell me u lookin at my shape
Chris: lol s*** u damn right...its looks just about righ
SHan: is that all yall men care about?? the size of us?
Chris: no not at all...i just got the best kind
Shan: ok uh uh see...u have lost it
Chris: what have i done to u (brushing his teeth)..
SHan: yall need to stop caring so much about how women look...u should compare about how they feel and they personality baby
CHris: baby thats not what i think about all the time...
SHan: ok...well get out cuz im bout to get out
Chris: come on i wann see u without the curtain
Shan: BOY IF U DONT GET OUT!
Chris: iight iight damn (spits)...ms rudness
Shan: hush boy (gets out when he closes the door)..
WITH TYSHAUNA AND KB
Shauna and Kb was getting ready together...
KB: baby when we go i dont wan u lookin at other niggas
Shauna: baby what are u talkin bout we been dating for what 2 years right now??
KB: yea and?
Shauna: and?? u should kno me better than that...i would never cheat on u
Kb: thats what im talkin bout (bout to kiss her neck)
Shauna: BUT!!...will u do the same for me??
KB:...now u kno...if i tell u that u cant do it...then u automatically know i wont do it
Shauna: uh huh
KB: lets just go down to Chris and Shante's room and see if they ready
Shauna: bett cuz i cant wait to see what ma sister got on
THIS IS SHAUNA'S OUTFITAND HER HAIR IS IN CURLS
We both walk to Shante's room and knock
CHris: who is it?
Shauna: its me!
CHris: who is me?
Shauna: ITS TYSHAUNA CHRIS OPEN THE DOOR!
CHris: ohhhh (opens)...waddup
Shauna: why u tryna act like u didnt kno who i was
Chris:...because i didnt waddup dude (handshakes Kb)
Kb: waddup man...lets let these ladies go about they business
We both sit down
SHauna:...SISSY!!
Shan: huh!
Shauna: are u almost done because i wanna see what u got on
SHan: yea just a minute...are u here with Kb?
Shauna: girl of course..da rest of the crew is gon be on they way
SHan: really?? why is everyone coming to our room
Shauna: idk COME ONNNN! we gotta be there at 8:15!
Shan: ok o (opens the door and everyone mouths drop)
THIS IS SHANTE'S OUTFIT AND HER HAIR IS IN TIGHT CURLS
Shauna: OMGG! GIRL U KILLIN IT IN THAT DRESS
CHris: yes she is (shocked)...damnnnn baby u look goood
Shan: thank u well come on we gotta get going...
So we didnt even wait for the crew we just went downstairs and waited...and without a doubt i seen them flying down the elevator
Jayla: SEE THATS WHY I NEVER WANNA GO PLACES WITH CHO ASS!! U ALWAYS f***IN UP s***! (mad but not that mad)
Trey: WELL U AND YO FUNKY ASS LANGUAGE AINT WORKING FOR ME! I ENJOY ENGISH NOT JAMAICAN
Jayla: WELL U KNO WHAT U CAN KEEP YO ASS HERE AND LEARN IT!
Dru: s*** f*** dat (shakes head) waddup yall...dont ma baby look good???
SHANDELA(AMERIE) IS WEARING THIS OUTFIT AND HER HAIR IS IN A UPDO
Dela: i spent more than 500 dollars on this outfit
Shauna:...wow...
Dela: what im just saying s***...this dress is alot of money
Shan: i wouldnt spend that much money on a dress
Dela: maybe because u not worth it
Shan: EXCUSE ME (raises up fast but chris blocks her)...b**** I DONT KNO WHO U THINK U ARE TALKIN TO...BUT I AINT ONE OF THEM TRICK ASS HOES U BE TALKIN TO LIKE THAT ON THE STREET OK?? I WILL LAY YO ASS OUT OK??
Dru: baby come on stop
Chris: yea come on baby this has been a good vacation so far come on now...
Shan: watever s*** (sits back down and folds her arms)
RUN IT RUN IT sooo good
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We gone forever
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CONTINUED
RENEE WAS IN HER ROOM BALLING LIKE NO OTHER THAT JOYCE CAN HEAR IT FROM HER BEDROOM SO SHE DECIDES TO WALK IN AND SEE WHAT SHE WAS CRYING ABOUT...
Joy: (opening the door)...hunny?? are u ok
Renee: (crying like crazy)....
Joy:....sweetie whats the matter with u
Renee:...everyone hates me
Joy:...who hates u mama??
Renee: everyone...Chris, Trell everyone hates me except u...i want to apologize...but they are not giving me the time of day....i think i should just leave
Joy:....no no u are not leaving...u are to stay here with us until your mother gets her life back on track ok??
Renee: i cant wait that long...please i just need to go home
Joy: listen...when chris gets back we will all talk about this ok
Renee:....ok fine...
Joy: ok well im bout to go to my sisters house trell is taking her son to her baby fathers so the house is yours
Renee: thanks...
Joy: ok call me if anything needs to be talked about ok?
Renee: yea....
CONTINUED IN JAMAICA
We was in the tour bus we was in it for about 3 hours now and we traveled everywhere...and now we are comin back to the hotel
Shauna: ommgg that was so gun that was soo fun now i gotta get g'd up for the concert and beach party and abua when is this over??
Abua: its over at 4 in the morning but i advise u not to stay out too late so u will have enough energy for tomorrow
Shan: ...what we doin tomorrow??
Abua: we are goin to take u to the waterfall Jamaican waterpark they just build 3 weeks ago
Dru: fo realll
Dela: damn i cant wait to go to that...i bet its gon be hella (looks at everyone)....um okay (walks away)
Shad: what u gon do wit her
Dru: i dont even know come on yall lets get dressed and ready for this festival
DaMn iiM sNaPPiN oN oL gIrL aLrEaDii WeLL dAt SuCkS 4 HeR aNd DiiS TriP gOnNa Be ThA sHiit Ya DiGg?? RuN iiT GiRl!!!!
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ReEcE LuBbErZ ChRiS BrEeZy!!!! O Mii GoSh DaT c0nCeRt WaS s0 cRaZii DuMb Go0d ii WiiSh ii CoUlD sEe iiT oVeR aNd 0vEr AgAiiN AlL tHa PeRf0rMaNcEs WeRe GrEaT sPeCiAlLy My Bo0's ChRiS Br0wN hE wAs So0o0o0o SeXii........iiT wAs MoSt DeF a NiiGhT 2 ReMeMbEr!!
ooooooooooh RUN IT RUN IT soooooo good
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Cuz once a good girl goes bad
We gone forever
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BACK IN JAMAICA
Me and Chris was just chilling in our HOTEL ROOM laying in the bed with each other
Chris: (running fingers thru ma hair)...baby it feels like we on our honeymoon
SHan: honeymoon?? u talkin bout gettin married alreaady
Chris: lol nah...even tho we been dating for only a day...it feels like forever..i think i can spend ma entire life with u
Shan:...baby i feel the same way...but your mother doesnt approve of me yet...and niether does that b**** renee
CHris:...i dont care about what they think of u...they are not in ma heart....you are..
SHan: (smiles)...chris...when i look at chu...i can just see the man..that i never thought i would see before
Chris: (sexy voice)...fo real??
Shan: (gets butterflies)...im fo real
Chris:...to be honest...i can see myself with you mama
Shan: and i can see myself with u too papa
We kiss with a lil bit of tongue and it got interupted by the phone ringing
Shan: hello?
Tyshauna: hey girl im telling this room is fresh...i wanna live here girl i dont even wanna go back
Shan: girl who u telling...but what u doin?
Shauna: girl nothing just layin in the bed with KB talkin
SHan: girl me too with chris...but what time is it
Shauna: we got 30 minutes before we gotta be downstairs fo the tour...so be ready in 20
Shan; iight already
Shauna: bye (hangs up)
Chris: who was that baby?
SHan: (turnin over) that was shauna talkin bout we got 30 minutes until its time to go on tour
Chris: damn it feels like we aint had no time up here by ourselfs
Shan: but dont worry we have all night and 2 weeks to do it all alonee
Chris:...hmmm i like dat.
Shan: i knew u wass
We finished kissingg
CONTINUED WITH JAYLA AND TREY
Trey was watching but couldnt find anything because he didnt kno they langauge
Trey: baby! BABY!! (having trouble with the TV Guide)
Jayla: (running in from the shower) what what what what???
Trey: baby i cannot understand this s***!! im havin a hard ass time understandin da s***
Jayla: just read it duh
Trey: ok imma let u look at it...what da f*** is Ahuu a Job a CNN??
Jayla: CNN!! DUMMY WHAT U WANN WATCH??
Trey: BET s*** IM MISSIN HELL DATE
Jayla: ahh u get on ma damn nerves (looks for it) ha here it is ASUU Ka Ha Ba BET LOOK AT THE LAST WORD AND IT WILL TELL UUUUU (WAVIN IT IN HIS FACE LIKE HE DUMB)
Trey: give it to me (snatches and hits her booty)
Jayla: boy u askin for a ass beatin keep playing and get ready cuz we got 20 minutes!!
Trey: yea yea yea!!!!!
20 MINUTES LATER
We all was headed downstairs waiting on the man to come show us around
Shauna: damn where is he at (fixin her jamaican hairstyle)
Shan: i dont kno he should be coming
A few seconds later he comes
Man: welcome back...did everyone enjoy the rooms?
Everyone: yea,hell yea, fa sho, uh huh
Man: that goods wells everyone folla me and u get on the tour bus and we take u around the island and we will drop u back off for the concert and beach party tonight okay? ok lets go
OK THATS ENOUGH IM TIRED RUN IT LADIES PWEASEEEE
RUN IT RUN IT soooooooooo good
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We gone forever
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BACK AT HOME
Jay was sittin in the room watchin tv lookin mad ass hell...then a few seconds later he heard tha door bell rang
Jay:...(iggin the door)...
Rings again
Jay: (gets frustrated but still iggs it)...
Rings three times
Jay: WHO DA f*** IS IT!(Walking to the door)
Tisha: its me let me in we need to take
Jay: b**** f*** U ABOUT WHAT!
Tisha: LISTEN WILL U JUST OPEN THE f***IN DOOR WE GOTTA TALK!
Jay: (sighs and lets her in)...DA f*** U WANT MAN?? WHAT DA f*** DO WE NEED TO TALK ABOUT!
Tisha:...listen i dont appreciate u goin around calling me all types of b****es and hoes and s*** ok!
Jay: WHAT DA f*** DO U MEAN??? YO ASS UP THERE FLASHIN MOTHAf***AS EYES WITH THAT VIDEO OF ME AND...THAT WAS POSED TO BE FOR ME AND YOUR EYES ONLY
Tisha: THATS NOT THE POINT JAY!....U STILL HUNG OFF ON DAT b**** ARENT CHU!
Jay: MAN...SHANTE...f*** HER...
Tisha: THEN WHY ARE U SO f***IN MAD AT ME ABOUT...U DONT CARE ABOUT HER NO MORE...SO WHY DA f*** DO U CONTINUE TO b**** ABOUT IT!?
Jay:....BECAUSE!
Tisha: U STILL NOT TELLING ME s***!...I LOVE U...AND IM THE ONLY b**** THAT IS GOIN TO LOVE U...f*** SHANTE...(walks to him and kisses his neck)...
Jay: (in the moment)....SSS...awww s*** dont do this to me
Tisha: (licks it)...come on baby dont hide your feelings...if u mad at me just proove it (lookin at him in his eyes)
Jay:...come on (smiles and goes upstairs)
WITH RENEE..
Renee woke up about 12pm that after noon...she decides she is going to do whatever it takes to win chris back..so she goes to his room and look for him
Renee: (creeply opens the door)...Chris???...Chriss??
Walks around the room
Renee: chris are u here??? baby can u hear me??...baby
Walks to his bathroom and sees every one of his condements (tooth brush,deordrant etc..) is gone...
Renee: (to her self)...what da hell CHRIS!
Just then Lytrell (Chris sister walks in)...
Trell:...hey..umm what u doin in his bathroom girl u kno your not allow in here (leads her out)
Renee: well i was just lookin for chris because i really needed to apologize to him
Trell: about what (folding arms)...
Renee: well about all the foul s*** i used to do to him
Trell: well dont u think its alittle too late for that....Renee u don understand how much stress u put ma brother thru...he cared about u so much...that all he would do is say yo name a million times so that it would never fade away...u hurt him...so bad...and for u to think that u can just come back and think his heart will heal???
Renee: (starting to cry)...yes...i understand that i hurt him so bad...but i didnt mean to...i swear...i was all under pressure and-(gco)
Trell: look cut the dumb s*** ok??? ma brothers not dumb...ok...i thought u was cool...but after what u did...i dont think i can never forgive u...please get out of ma brothers room
Renee: (extremely hurt)...sure (walks out slowly with head down)...
Trell:...(rolls eyes and walks out)
When Trell went downstairs Renee rushed into the room and started crying hysterically
SHOW LOVE LADIESSSS IM NOT ADDIN UNTIL TONIGHT SO LETS SEE HOW MUCH LOVE U CAN SHOW SO I CAN ADD MORE THAN BEFO!
RUN IT RUN IT RUN IT soooooooooooo good
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Cuz once a good girl goes bad
We gone forever
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