You

1.31.2008

you made me wonder
when all a long you
were the perfect finder

without the beauty in your eyes
this world would be made of ice

being around you is all I need
a long with your love'in
is all I see

If your love was all I had
the world wouldn't be so bad

User Comments

.Miss.B. - Sunday, Feb 17, 2008 - 9:09pm GMT

This is really sweet and sincere. I love this poem! I seems really heartfelt. You should rally keep at the poem writing, your stuff is really good. :)

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It's Britney Biitch!!!

LucyLu - Saturday, Feb 16, 2008 - 8:08pm GMT

i have to agree with everyone and say 'awww' to this one! it's really good and soo cute! keep it up sweetheart

ms. boo - Tuesday, Feb 5, 2008 - 12:12pm GMT

i didnt kno u were soo mushhyy lol i like it

FRESHIE - Sunday, Feb 3, 2008 - 8:08pm GMT

THAT POEM IS REALLY REALLY GOOD...
ALL YOUR POEMS ARE GOOD
KEEP IT UP...

tha_princess - Sunday, Feb 3, 2008 - 8:08pm GMT

that is so sweet

fernandra. - Sunday, Feb 3, 2008 - 7:07pm GMT

Dat wuz fresh 2 def keep writn
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She’s a fallen angel, sent from heaven up above
She’s a fallen angel, waitin for me to love her, yeah
(Know that she’s) She’s a fallen angel, take your judgment off her
I know, that she’s a fallen angel