SO I writing two stories and I need some feedback I'm not asking you guys to committed to my story I t just be nice to get some feedback as to if I should need writing it or what.
Here are the links
<a href=http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/us/node/819260>Im still loving you behind bars</a>
<a href=http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/us/node/816898>The pain of a killer</a>
Thank you guys much love