Angela wrong as f*** for that
like b**** can you not see that Chris has changed
dramatically for your ass
and I understand that his parents ain't s*** but
do you really expect him to kill his own parents?

it'll be a lot of dead parents because everyone gets
down wrong a little now and then by their parents
no their not always right with the decisions that they make
but as children what the f*** can we do about it but talk to them
and complain? NOTHING!
Angie was SELFISH AS f*** for talking to chris as if he should of
killed his parents a long time ago. Like what the f*** does it matter if their not dead b****
I know you was confused and s*** and you wanted to know, but don't wish death upon someone
when your ass was begging for your f***ing life when
chris was having fun with your ass
now angie you done got a little too mothaf***in comfortable with talking crazy

I don't give a damn how bad my parents done f***ed me up
you aint gone talk to stupid about them to my face
thats f***ing disrespectful the way she talked to chris in that restaurant.
She's 22 and she's really showing how immature she can be
I seriously thought she was 29 for some reason, but I know I understand
why the b**** was f***ing fighting and s***. She's 22 smh!
GROW THE f*** UP ANGELA PLEASE!
You made me mad as f*** in this chapter
because you decided to get in a line at Wal-mart and grow some balls
Its too f***ing late
if you wanted some control you should of had some damn control a long time ago.

How in the f*** did they hire her ass to deal with
psycho crazy ass patients and she acting like she damn 3 years old
when it comes to every f***ing thing.
And then you taking tyenol
YOUR PREGNANT NOW ANGIE WAKE THE f*** UP!
UGhhh I just want to slap her right now she made me mad as f***!
Like foreal. If I was chris I would of made her my dinner for the night
because she was bold and disrespectful as f***.
Smh Chris has changed and she need to be grateful.
Ughhhhh!!!!

No offense to this comment I'm just in readers mode
and pissed off! I still love this story...

oh yea f*** HER TEARS TOO!

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Hormones. It's just hormones. It's gonna be okay Angela!! smh.
Noooooooooo! Chris where are you going??!!

I have mixed emotions. I mean, I feel bad for him, but at the same time I kind of feel bad for Angie too.

I mean, first off. I hope the baby is ok, she needs to go check on that. Then, I can see where she is coming from, how could he kill innocent people who didn't do one thing to him, but he couldn't kill the two people who made him fend for himself? Beat him? Starved him? That's really crazy. But at the same time, I wouldn't have blown up like that. I would have just asked, but with attitude. I do think that she just did the most. Making a scene and s***. I know Chris probably would have beat her ass if they weren't in a public place and she wasn't pregnant.

I feel bad for Chris because he went through all that trouble to put that little cute dinner together and it was just ruined. He went through the trouble for looking after her. I mean he could have just really died and never came back and left her to fend for her damn self and that baby and go through that whole custody thing alone but he came back. FOR HER! For THEIR child. He really does love her. And I'm not sure how he changed but ummmm ok. I mean the only thing he stopped doing was beating her and that's only because she is pregnant. Nothing has changed. But he was willing to eat regular food for her though. He DID do that. That's change right?

I hope Angie finds him and apologizes because I was anticipating a hot and intense sex scene after the dinner but she just ruined that by going off on him. I hope that was just the mood swings popping off at the mouth. Ughhhh! I was ready for that! And he might be a monster Angie, but he a monster with a monster d***! Girl you better shut up! You know you love his monstrous ass!!

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i feel so sad for him i can get wat he meant like no matter what they did thats his parents thats just something he couldnt bring his self to do and angie was wrong to say he would never change thats sooo f***ed up in many ways cause he was actually starting to just for her smhh i understand she going through alot with his parents tryna take the baby and all but that was no reason to explode on him like that
smhh just smhh

and now on to this hot ass mess bree lmfaooo drinking and passing out b**** out issues lmfaoo i can't and thats so cool angie got a makeover maybe thats why she exploded lik that they didnt just change how she look but how she act as well

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Damn ang ang u hurtin a brotha
Awwwww Chris is stren about his baby ^-^
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Ummmmm I'm so speechless right now. Maaaan wtf is happening around this b****? My ass is drunk as f*** lol... I then passed out. I'mma stinking mess. I'm glad Angie and the girl from the store are now getting along because I thought they ass was gon' fight again 'round this b**** lol, but I'm GLAD they didn't and they worked their differences out. They are VERY mature. Ummm Shay is a MESS. These ghetto convos she be having mane... She need a zamn speech coach for zat s***! FOR REALZ! Smh lol. Heather is a mess as well. All these hoes are crazy in their own way. I am STILL tripping off this girl telling her she looked old and how bad she looked for her age. Like, damn b****.... Chill out. I would've got offended too and been like HOLD UP NOW... I would've cussed her out for real... You don't know her like that. But she all sexed up now. GO ANGIE! GET YO MAN! Dinner was going great and excellent and I was feeling the love. Sometimes they are the perfect couple. I love them together and Angie is getting violent aye? Lol @ Chris smiling about it too. Damn we knew he'd think about killing the b**** Angie fought lol. But what got me is when he said he DIDN'T kill his parents. He had so much REMORSE for them, but not for the innocent people he murdered? It didn't make any sense at all..... Wow, Angie went tf off mane.... She really hurt his feelings. She is changing... I hope this change don't hurt neither one of them. I LOVE THEM TOGETHER.

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Chapter Twenty-Four: You’ve Made A Big Mistake Part Two

I was on my way home. I was having a throbbing headache. I finally got home and walked slowly inside. As soon as I did the phone rang. I rolled my eyes and sighed heavily wondering who the hell could it be.

“Hello?” I said irritated.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa. Calm down, it’s just me.” Chris said on the other end of the phone.

My heart jumped.

“Chris I miss you so much. Please come back home. Today was absolutely horrible. I-I just can’t think straight anymore.” I whimpered laying on the couch.

“I know baby I know. I saw what happened at the lawyer’s office, but I’ll get to that later. What I’m more concerned about is that fact that you fought at the mall. What was that all about?” Chris said sternly.

“Chris….it’s simple. I bumped into this chic and she just went off on me. So we started scrappin’ she got in a few good licks, but in the end she was the one leaving with a 31 teeth.” I chuckled.

“Ha ha ha ha that’s my girl, but on a more serious matter, you could have seriously hurt the baby. What were you thinking?” he asked sounding a little angry.

“I-I know Chris….I wasn’t thinking I was just so blinded by rage I just exploded.” I sighed rubbing my temples.

“Yeah, well, I defiantly know what you mean. But hey, I know the meeting didn’t go like you wanted it to. I can’t believe what happened, I was so pissed just sitting there watching I wanted so bad to burst through those doors and kill them mother*ckers, but that would ruin my plans. I’m sorry you had to endure that. But you should know that none of what my mother said is true, okay? I love you more than anything. And I know before I fell for you that I had a weird way of showing it, but trust me, I would never do that again, okay?” he said smoothly.

“Yeah….I know.” I sniffed.

"And don't think I'm gonna let my mom off the hook for how she spoke to you. That b*tch...she's gonna get hers...trust me. Oh and that b*tch from the Victoria's Secret store, you probably won't see her around either." Chris chuckled lowly.

"No Chris, don't kill that girl. I don't know her and neither do you. And as for your mom....I'll handle her, my way." I said clenching my jaws.

“Hey, I gotta go. I’ll call you tomorrow. Matter fact, I miss you so I’m gonna treat you out to dinner tomorrow, okay. At 8 o’clock. Just meet me at the Atlantis Restaurant. I already made reservations under Mr.Brown and Mrs. Brown. I'll be sitting at the 4th table in the back of the private dining room. There's an amazing view of the beach from there, plus it's private. I can't wait to see you again. Oh and another thing you won't recognize me because I will have on a face mask I had made. But don't be alarmed okay. I love you Angela.” He said.

“I love you to Chris.” I said before hanging up and sighing.
My body felt sick. I got up and ran to the bathroom upstairs and threw up. I felt a little better after that. I took a tyenol and then stripped and hopped in the shower turning the hot water on. When I was done I got out and dried up then brushed my teeth and put on one of Chris’s big t-shirts and laid in bed and fell asleep instantly dreaming of the date tomorrow.

-The Next Day-

The next morning when I woke up I showered and got dressed in some shorts and a tank top. I was eating my breakfast when I decided to call Dany. Now it’s 5 o’clock and I was heading to her house to chill with her and her friends. I smiled as I finally pulled up into her huge house and parked. As soon as I got out she came running from out of her house smiling.

“Hey girl!” she cheered hugging me tightly.

I looked at strangely.

“What’s got you so excited?” I said playfully as we begin to walk towards the house.

“Girl you know that job interview I told you about over the phone?” she smiled widely as we walked in and she closed the
door behind us.

Coming from the living room was loud noises sounding like hoots and hollas. I looked at her laughing.

“What’s all that noise?”

“Girl ignore that, that’s just Antonio and his fool a** friends playing Call of Duty.” She chuckled as we walked in the kitchen to see Bree, Lexi, the girl from the maternity store named
Tramicia, the girl from the shoe store named Shay, Kimmie Brooks from the VC Store, some girl I didn’t recognize, and last and defiantly least the b*tch form the VC store that I fought. I glared at her as she looked me up and down like “b*tch please”.

“Yo Angie I want you to meet Tramicia, Shay, Kimmie Brooks, and Yanae. Ladies this is Angela. Now Angela let me warn you that half of these b*tches are indeed bipolar.” She laughed.

I looked directly at Heather.

“Well at least I know one of them can be a b*tch.” I gave her a fake smile.

She rolled her eyes.

“Girl don’t start with me. I ain’t got time to be fighting you again. You knocked my damn tooth out like something wrong with you, but you know what…ain’t no b*tch ever step up to me like that. EVER. But yo, let’s just squash the beef and shake on it cause I like your attitude.” She said getting up and walked over to me with her hand out.

I slowly took her hand and shook on it.

“Now that we cool Imma go ahead and tell you. You look a hot-t-t mess okay honey child! You need you let me hook you up!” she said walking around me as if to inspect me.

I felt a little offended.

“A hot mess? What do you mean?” I asked putting my hands on my hips.

“Well first off your hair is stringy and just looked all dull and black. You need a bright color in your hair like a blonde or something. And them clothes is just ugh! So eighties. You need to show yo puppies and your booty cheeks. You got a good amount of both, no homo. And you need to let them show. Kimmie was telling me how you was looking for lingerie for your man. Well you keep on looking like this and you won’t have a man to go home to! Now answer this, how old are you?” she asked.

“22.” I answered.

“Okay then girl you need to dress like you 22! You too young to be looking so elderly, you just look so elderly.” She said with a hint of sympathy in her voice.

The other girls laughed lowly. I glared at them.

“Hey I don’t dress old! I just dress comfortable!” I argued getting angry.

“Calm down mamacita, I’m just telling you like it is. Anyway let us hook you up! A makeover! YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Heather shouted.

I shook my head laughing.

“Well I guess that don’t sound too bad, seeing that I’m going to dinner with my man tonight.” I giggled.

“Oh hell yes it’s time to perform a damn miracle! Call Jesus! Call Tyrone! Anybody somebody please call 9111111111.” Bree shouted sipping out of a bottle of gin. I could tell she was drunk because she was laughing and dancing to the music in her head that only she could hear.

“Girl you have got to put that bottle down.” Tramicia laughed shaking her head.

“Now you know damn well that girl ain’t gone ever put down a bottle. She say it’s hah peace maker.” laughed Kimmie.

“HEY! ESCUCHA! ESCUCHA! We ain’t got time to be talking let’s get to business!” Heather yelled.

“First we have got to wash that dingy hair of yours and then add some color!” she beamed.

“Go ahead and take her down to the salon and I’ll get the hair dye.” Dany smiled walking off.

Wait? She has her own salon?! Well then again this is a huge a** house. We all walked upstairs and then into this beautiful salon room. I gasped.

“Wow this is beautiful.”

“I know rite guurl I helped dee-zign it!” Shay said popping her gum.

“Okay just sit down at the sink and I will wash your hair for you.” Heather said pulling her long hair into a ponytail and then taking off her jacket.

I sat down at the first sink and laid my head back. My hair was washed and then as promised color was added to my hair. I had a towel wrapped around my head as I walked over to the nail section of the salon.

“Girl Imma hook yo feet up. Trust me, don’t no man want a woman with feet that look like big foot.” Yanae giggled.

I smiled slightly.

“Okay, I’m ready.” I sat down in the little chair as Yanae got the water ready and got her supplies.

“Now Imma do yo eyebrows cuz dem thangs luk like you auditionin’ fo a role in Wolf Man of somethin. Imma trim em’ and slim em’.” Shay said smacking on her gum.

“And Imma go your fingernails.” Kimmie said.

“Jus relax and let us make you fabo guuuuuurl!” Shay cheered.

-Later-

“Okay ladies and gentlemen I'm presenting the new and improved, ANGELAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Dany screamed as all the girls clapped their hands as I walked down the stairs wearing this.

All the girls gasped. Bree jumped up shouting.

"YES LORD IT'S A MIRACLE!!!" she screamed gorging down her bottle of moscato.

"Girl put that bottle down!" yelled Kimmie laughing then they all turned back to me.

"Gurl you lukin' like a zime piece gurl! I tol' yall dem heels waz gone make hah legs luk sexay!" she bragged.

"Your long legs look great girl. You need to show them more often!" Tramicia complimented.

I smiled and looked down playing with my fingers.

"Stop being shyyy mamacita you look fantastico." Heather said.

"You look like a model!" Dany chimed in.

"Not better than me though. All yall know I'm the best model there is." Heather said snapping her fingers.

"Are yall sure? I don't look too available do I? This dress has me feeling naked." I said unsure.

"Girl stop with all that. You got enough curves for a n*ggah to drive on don't be so insecure boo!" Bree yelled laughing to herself.

"Okay well since yall say so." I giggled.

"So what time is the date?" asked Yanae.

"8 o'clock." I said sitting down on the couch and crossing my legs.

"Girl it's 7:50 you better hurry up before you're late!" Dany warned.

I jumped up.

"Omg I lost track of time." I whined.

Just then my phone rung and I picked it up.

"Hello?" I asked.

"Hey Angie, it's me Sam. I'm just checking on you to make sure you're okay. How you holding up?" she asked concerned.

"I'm holding up great, just great." I smiled.

"Well that's good. Hey, I gotta go. See you in the office soon. Bye." she hung up.

"Gurl you bets be on yah way fo you wont have a man no moe." Shay said shaking her head.

"Okay! Okay! I'm going!" I giggled grabbing my purse.

"Don't forget what I taught you! Bend.... AND SNAP!" Bree said as she bent over but fell flat on her face, passed out.

I laughed and walked out the door and got in my car. I drove to the restaurant and walked in and was greeted by a waiter.

"Good afternoon and welcome to the Atlantis. Where the service is great, but the food is even greater. Table for one?" he asked in a British accent.

"No, actually table for two. My boyfriend made reservations. Um..under Mr. Brown." I smiled.

"Oh yes I see it, right here. Please follow me." the waiter grabbed two menus and led me to a beautiful room way in the back secluded from everyone else. I smiled widely.

"Here is your menus. Just follow the golden path and it will lead to your table ma'am." the waiter smiled and handed me the menus then left.

It was awfully quiet besides the soft music played by a jazz band who was standing on a small stage. They smiled at me and then continued to play. I walked down the golden path that was leading to the table. It finally stopped and I was looking at the floor the whole time.

"You look so amazing." I heard a deep, soothing voice say.

I instantly felt chills and I knew instantly that only Chris voice could make my body react that way. I looked up and frowned. Who was this man? He looked way different from Chris but he had Chris voice. I guess he could see the alarm on my face so he spoke again.

"Calm down, it's just me, Chris." he took off the face mask and smiled at me showing off his surprisingly pearly white teeth.

I held my hand to my heart and let out a little laugh.

"You scared me I thought you were someone else."

"I told you I'd be wearing a mask." he got up and walked over to me looking sexy in his all black suit with a light blue tie.

"I missed you so much." I said when he approached me, the smell of Axe cologne invading my nose.

"I missed you to girl. But enough of that, kiss me." he smirked as I got on my tip-toes and our lips connected.

It was the best kiss in the world. Unlike any I've ever had, even when I was with Michael. He didn't kiss me this slow and passionate. I felt myself becoming puddy in Chris hands as he wrapped his arms around my waist. We started really getting into the kiss when he shoved his tongue in my mouth to play with mine. I moaned slightly and that got him excited because I could feel his "excitement" poking my stomach. I giggled and pulled back to peer up at a disappointed looking Chris.

"Why did you stop?" he asked trying to catch his breath.

"Because...you're getting too excited." I giggled pointing at his package which was slightly rising through his pants.

He chuckled lowly.

"Sorry, but that's what your body does to me...Now let's eat before I throw you over my shoulder and jet out of here." he smiled pulling back my chair and I sat down.

He walked to the other side of the table and sat down.

"Chris I've missed you so much. You don't know how stressing it's been not being able to be with you." I said as he reached over and held my hands and kissed them.

"And I'm so sorry for that, it's just...I don't want anything happening to you because of me. You are being watched by someone I just haven't had enough time to find out by who, but when all do...all hell is gonna break loose." He said clenching his jaws.

"Chris....I don't want you getting hurt." I said sternly.

"Trust me, I won't. Speaking of that....how is the baby? I mean after that little store incident I expected you to go to the hospital or something." Chris said eying me.

"The baby is fine...I think. I'm not sure. I didn't go to the doctor, but I did throw up. But I'm sure the baby is okay. I shouldn't have lost my temper the way I did. And usually I can control my anger. I'm not a violent person." I said shamefully.

"You've been hanging around me too much." he grinned.

"Yeah I have hahaha." I giggled.

"Okay so let's eat then." he smiled as we both picked up our menu sand looked through them.

"I think I'm gonna try the spaghetti pasta and garlic bread. That's look delicious."

"Yeah and I'm gonna have the...the...sh*t...you know this kills me trying eat this sh*t. I'm not use to this." Chris said sighing and putting down his menu.

"I know, but at least try...for me." I smiled encouragingly.

He thought for a moment then picked up his menu and read it for a bit then put it in front of his face just as the waiter came over.

"Okay my name is Mitchell. I'll be your waiter for tonight. Are you ready to order?" he smiled.

"Yes I'd like the spaghetti pasta and garlic bread please and Chris?..." I siad looking at him as he held the menu to his face.

"Uh yes give me the catfish pie with Italian pasta." he said disguising his voice.

"Okay, and what type of drink?" the waiter said writing on his notepad.

"Water, please." I smiled handing him my menu.

"And for you sir?" the waiter asked.

"Chardonnay." Chris said keeping the menu in his face.

The waiter looked at him weirdly put said nothing and walked off.

"Is he gone?" Chris asked.

"Yeah he's gone." I chuckled as he sat the menu down.

After eating our food we sat and talked.

"Chris....I want to ask you something, but I don't know how you're going to react to my question." I said nervously.

"Don't worry, I'm not gonna tear your throat out, go ahead and ask me." he said looking directly at me.

"Well....I want to ask you....about your...parents." I said looking at him to make sure I could continue.

He didn't have an expression on his face that I could read so I continued.

"How come um.....their n-not umm..." I didn't know how to say the exact words I wanted to say.

"Dead?" Chris said bluntly.

"Y-yeah....dead." I said quietly.

"Well it's a long story Angela.....*sighs* I never killed them...people never really knew who my parents were. I killed these people who everyone thought were my parents, but they were actually an innocent old couple....For some reason I just couldn't see myself killing my parents....so I killed these other people instead. Now I know my parents did me wrong, but....I just couldn't do it Angie...I know it makes no sense whatsoever, but I can't explain it and I won't. Please don't judge me and I won't judge you." he said looking down.

I couldn't believe it. After all the crap his parents put them through he couldn't kill them menacingly like he did he other victims? I jumped up mad for some reason.

"You couldn't see yourself killing them?! Are you serious?! Your parents treated you like sh*t and you'd rather kill innocent people rather then the bastards that raised you to be an animal?!" I yelled.

He got up instantly looking mad, but he didn't move an inch towards me.

"Listen Angela....I suggest you calm down." he said in a concerned voice.

"No! I will not calm down! I'm sick of everyone making suggestions to me! I haven't been able to take control of anything lately! And I'm sick of it! You and your f*cking parents need to just shut the hell up! Yall make me sick! Your piece of sh*t of a mother slapped me yesterday and disrespected me and talked down to me like I was a damn dog thinking she knew what was best for our baby Chris. NOT hers NOT your fathers but OURS. They want our baby just so they can raise it to be just like you. You're still a monster Chris! You will NEVER change!" I spat angrily ignoring the headache and stomach ache that was forming.

He looked at me and clenched his jaws. He looked so pissed, but mostly hurt. He opened his mouth to say something but then closed it again, but then opened it again.

"I changed...for you." he said finally before putting a tip on the table and walking out slamming the door.

I felt hot tears coming to my eyes.

"W-what have I done?" I said to myself as I started crying out of guilt.

To Be Continued.....

Girl his momma and daddy (especially his mom) need some sense knocked into them

His mama was way outta line! Angie should use Joyce slappin her and talkin to her like that to her advantage. In court she could say, 'Mrs.Hawkins put her hands on me and also has a history of violent behavior, I dont feel the baby will be out of harms way. She also used to starve her son so there's a possibility of malnutrition. At a meeting, she said so vicious and hurtful things to me. I do not want there to be a possibility of future emotional distress. Emotional distress can lead to my child inflicting pain upon itself, future violent behavior, or possibly suicide. Also it can cause the child to have mental problems as well as coping issues. I however am a psychiatrist at an insane asylum so I however know how to deal with vast disabelities and shifting behaviors.' Or some sh*t like that. lol Update Soon

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