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'Club Fantasy (Ch. 5] 11/28


Removing my glasses I sat back in my office chair and closed my eyes. Every time I had a spare minute I liked to think back and reflect on my life and the events that brought me here to this place. If you have asked me five years ago if I would have been the co-owner of one of Chicago’s hottest establishments I would have laughed in your face. We only cater to an elite group of clientele. But we’ll get back to that in a minute. Businesswoman by night and student by day; at the age of 24 I was still in the process of earning my Doctorate in psychology which is my real passion. A knock on my office door interrupted my thoughts,

“Come In,” I said to whoever was on the other end of the door. It opened revealing my assistant.

“We’re ready for you.”

“Thank you. I’ll be there.”

I waited about another minute before I put my glasses back on and walked onstage into the spotlight. After the crowed quieted down I began to speak.

“I want to thank you all for coming out tonight. We have a real good show for you guys. So sit back and enjoy. Welcome to Club Fantasy.”

I waited for the lights to dim before I left the stage and proceeded to head back to my office. Normally I would stay out and mingle and make sure all my customers were happy. Not tonight though, I had homework to finish for my 10 am class the next morning. Making into my office I went to the closet and pulled out my backpack. Pulling out my books I looked around. This is going to be a long night.

I know its short. I just wanted to get some feedback from you guys before I went any further.


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I actually posted the intro on here..Lol.. The new title is Broken Hearted Girl

heck yes! link por favor lol

I want the link also! I liked this story!


Hey Girl, about this story I am going to revamp it and it's going to be under another name... I'm not sure if Im going to post it on here but I will on another board. Just let me know if you want the link.

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Its finals week. Its coming.

GEezzzzzzz...!!! I added to mines.. I no u shuda been added

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Candi where you at with the add!

aww dam she been hurt one too many times:/
i sure hope she give someone a chance
i hope the other guy catches her attention at school and become friends but he wont fall for her because he still wants the girl in the club but eventuallly he will far for his friend and the guy is chris rite?? lol my lil plot in my head
anyways run this please

No more runs? :(

Glad to know some of her background. I hate that she has been thru that pure fuxkery in her young life. Niggas be of Tribe Triflin for real t lmao!

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Ohhhh that is sooo messed up :(
It is too much hurt back to back smh

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Finally getting to know why she is always in her shell...nigas stay hurting females man...n vice versa...smh hope she can still find love

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Please forgive the html tags in the last add. I meant to preview it not save it. But since I cant edit it. There's your add :)

[center][em][strong]'Chapter 5[/strong][/em][/center]


I went home that night thinking of of everything that I've been through in the past 5 years. The last three years being the worst. My mind flashed back to what happened that night...

[center][em]Flashback: 3 1/2 Years Ago

It was late in the evening and I just gotten off of work. Working at a theme park all day was not the business. I had just left the grocery store and I was heading over to my boyfriends apartment so that I could cook dinner for us. <a href="">He</a> couldnt cook and ate out all the time. So I cooked for him whenever I could. I didn't mind because he was my baby and was there for me when I needed it. I wasn't fully in love with him but I could feel myself getting there soon.

Walking into the apartment, I sat my backpack down and headed toward the kitchen to sit down the groceries. I was gonna make my baby's favorite meal. Shrimp scampi with noodles with corn on the cob and a baked potato. After unpacking everything I realized that I grabbed the wrong kind of noodles. I grabbed the noodles and took the 5 minute drive back to Wal Mart glad that he lived so close. 10 minutes later I was on my way back to Devin's place. Pulling up I seen that his car was home. I smiled, he must have gotten here right after I left.

Going back inside the apartment, I couldn't believe my eyes. There was my boyfriend of a year on the couch getting top from another <a href+"">man</a>. His head was thrown back in ecstasy and his hand was guiding the other dude's head. I stood there the whole time. Unable to move or speak. A gasp slipped past my mouth and then the tears came. That's finally when his head popped up. When our eyes made contact I could see the fear in his.

He immediately pushed the guy off of him trying to pull his pants up and come my way. I grabbed my bag and ran out of the house. He followed after me but I couldn't stop. I hopped in my car and sped home. I felt so humiliated. The man who I thought was mine was cheating on me, with another man at that. As the days passed Devin, kept calling and calling. And it seemed as if everyone knew about Devin being gay but me.Not to mention the constant taunting from Devin's lover who I later found out went to the same school as us. I couldn't handle the humiliation anymore. So I picked up and ran. Ran all the way to Chicago. Ran all the way to Amir.[/em][/center]

I never would have thought that Devin would have done that to me. I guess it was payback for using him to try and get over Amir. <a href="ttp://">Amir</a> was somebody I met online when I was 20. We were friends at first and it escalated to something more. He would tell me his secrets and I would tell him mine. Whenever something was wrong, I was the first person he came to and vice versa. When he told me he was in love with me I was ecstatic because that let me know I wasnt in it alone.

When we finally met it's like I feel in love all over again. But after that is when things started going down hill.We ended up breaking up because he had gotten into some trouble and wanted to focus on keeping Xavier safe but told me that once everything was okay we could be together again. <a href="">Xavier</a> was his 4 month old baby boy. A couple of months went by and communication between Amir and I became strained and almost nonexistent. I finally asked him what was going on and he told me that he and Xavier's Mom; <a href"=">Nikki</a> had decided to try to be together for Xavier's sake. I was so hurt that he led me on and hid that from me. That was the last day I talked to Amir. What pissed me off the most is all the f***ed up s*** he told me Nikki had said to him while she was pregnant and he still decided to be with her. I couldnt continue talking to him knowing that he had feelings for another woman. Of course he continued to call but I didnt wanna be hurt anymore than I already was.

I was depressed for awhile and then that's when I met Devin. He helped put me out of my funk and I was grateful for that. His eyes are what drew me in.We started hanging out and 6 months later he asked me to be his girl. After everything went down, the only person I could think of was Amir. Unbeknownst to me, Amir, Nikki and Xavier had moved a year after Amir and I stopped talking. So there I was in Chicago; alone.

Poor Marcus had to endure her hard shell! lol but nevertheless Candy has some baggage to be taken care of so that she can be free and hopefully get the greatest dxxk down of her life! lmao!


Aww geez what happened. !?
Candace is one tough cookie. A tough cookie is a good cookie.

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Oh was that the same guy?

interesting add...i wonder what happened btween her and he who must not be named...

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Idk how I feel about this add..



I stood at the doorway of the club thanking everyone for coming as they left. Finally the last patron left and we were officially closed. Or so I thought.

“So are you gonna give me your name now?” I heard behind me as I damn near jumped out of my skin. I turned around and there stood Marcus.

“Dammit Marcus, you scared the s*** out of me” I told him trying to catch my breath.

“My bad Ma, that wasn’t my intention.” He said as he flashed a smile. I damn near melted. I LOVED when dudes said “Ma”. I’m not sure why but I do. <em>Okay Candy girl, keep it together.</em> I had to remind myself.

“What are you still doing here? The club is closed for the night?” I asked crossing my arms.

“I know the club is closed but I wanted to talk to you, maybe without the mask?”

“If you want to talk you can join me at the bar. However, the mask stays.”

“Does it have to?”

“Take it or leave it.”

“Okay Deal.”

I lead him over to the bar and hopped onto one of the stools. I asked Venus to tell Chef to make me my usual.

“Sooo Marcus, how can I help you?”

“Well the first thing you can do is tell me your name.”

“Yeah, ummm not going to happen; next question.”

“Well s***, what can you tell me? Since I can’t know what you look like and I can’t know your name.”

“I’m 24 and major in Psychology. If you absolutely must have a name you can call me Marie.”

“You’re only 24?”

“What the hell is that supposed to mean?” I asked highly the f*** offended.

“Whoa, calm down Ma. No disrespect, I just didn’t think someone so young would own an establishment like this.”

“I guess you thought wrong then.”

“Damn, Ma. You are some kinda mean.” He laughed.

“I’m not mean. I’m just blunt.” I told him. He was making me nervous and I didn’t want him to see that. Where the hell is my damn food though? What felt like an hour had only been five minutes.

“It doesn’t matter how you flip it. You are mean. But I like that though.”

After he said that, I wasn’t sure what to say. So I didn’t say anything. I was saved by the Chef because about 30 seconds later Venus was setting my third pounder Black Angus burger and side of fries in front of me. I was starving and immediately began to dig in. I almost forgot Marcus was next to me. Keyword being almost. I could feel his stare as I devoured my food and it began to make me a tab bit uncomfortable.

“Umm, Could you stop staring please? I’d greatly appreciate it.” I asked going back to eating.

“Wow.” Now that really caught me off guard.

“What?” I asked my curiosity peeked.

“Most women would not be pigging out like that in front of a guy they just met.”

“I’m not most women.”

“I can see that. Well, Ms. Marie not that I didn’t enjoy this conversation its time for me to get going. So how about this; you give me your number and I’ll hit you up later.”

I wrote my name and number down on one of our customized c**ktail napkins and gave it to him.

“Venus?” I called out to her.

“Yes Ma’am?”

“Can you please show Marcus out?”

She motioned for him to follow her and he did only after he tried to hug me goodbye and I was not having that. Venus came back shortly after and told me that he was gone. Now I could finally take this mask off. I untied it and tossed it on the bar at the same time Venus threw down hers.

“Damn, Candace. I see you done pulled in another one. He seems nice.” I heard Kimmie say. Now that everyone was gone we could use real names.

“Yeah, he’s nice NOW. We’ll see if he stays nice.”

“Speaking of nice, There was a real nice looking guy damn near stalking you tonight. He even asked me some s*** about you.”

“What did you tell him?”

“I told him that guys looked at you all the time but you done really date. I didn’t tell him your name or anything like that.”

“Good. How did he look?”

“He was tall, Light Skinned. Killer smile with Dark Hair. And he had some kind of accent. “

“Hmm, sounds scrumptious. But oh, well.”

“But seriously, C. When are you going to start dating again? Its been two years since the “Incident”.”

Sighing, I knew this was coming. Kimmie was more than just a bartender. She’s been with me from the beginning. So she knew about what happened between me and He Who Must Not Be Named.

“When, I find a guy who’s worthy of my time and loves me for me then I will.”

“I just don’t wanna see you by yourself. You’re way better than that.” She threw me a smile then headed into the kitched. I guess to grab her stuff and head out.

That’s what I loved about Kimmie. I know she always has my best interest at heart. I finished my plate and decided to wash the dish myself. I didn’t worry about time because I had no class tomorrow which meant I could sleep in. Dating scared me. I didn’t wanna open up my heart to have it shattered all over again

Yeah, I have another class, then I'm making a trip back to my hometown...Then I'ma add..

tomorrow NIGHT!! gee wizz

Add coming tomorrow night for sure...

Lovin that add...who is this mysterious man?? I need 2 know...

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Well I cant say anymore than run it.. Its been no add..! Nothin to comment on..

@LeLe, I know I promised an add yesterday.. But I got alot of s*** going on to work out first...

Where that add at !!??

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I'm not one for extra long comments but I'll say this
The traces of mystery are great and where the story is heading i can tell its gon be going DOWN in the future I mean some Classy Player's Club type shxt *if that's possible* will transpire! Although the pace is still a bit slow but as soon as it picks up the story will take off. Just waiting for that moment that has me Anxious for the next post which I feel may be coming soon i hope!!!!

I love you ladies buuut can I get just a little bit more than run it?

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