I often hear it described as something so sweet.
Sugarcoated with pieces left under the surface,
that many rather not reminisce,
but forget and defeat.
Sounding so perfect...love.

Several hearts left broken,
with scars settled deep within its surface
that they feel so incredibly real.
As if it were slowly and physically deteriorating
a significant organ of life.
The tears, the sadness, anywhere from light to deep sleep,
and sorrow filled eyes,
the hurt and pain from silent to agonized cries.
Resurfaced just as quickly, as it begins to subside.
Repeatedly given another chance.

its been a while since the last poem i wrote and i was thinking about writing another so i wrote this one. right now to me it seemsz a little rough around the edges like somethings missing or somethings too much? idk i'm not sure but let me know what you guysz think. if you know how to make the font italic, and add color please let me know =]

She’s the victim,
one of many, in this case.
Carrying her make- up case
everywhere she goes, trying to hide her flaws.
Correct where she thought her parents had wronged…
in making her
Though it’d take a lot to break her

i think you're different
and i hope i'm not wrong.
its beyond physical attraction...
something's different.

you seem to be genuine.
not the type to run playa lines.
or tha type that all he aims for,
is the one thing on his mind.

goofy but shy.
yet that makes me smile.

i don't get "bad feelings" about you.
seem like the good boy.
with a silent swaggeR
but its hard not to notiCe,
your attitude is quite polite.

i'll glance at you from across the room.
indeed that i will do.
you're eyes are beautiful,
but its hard to look into them.

I carry it through each and everyday
Try and force back tears of hurt and close my eyes
Try to convince myself that i'll be okkaii. to suck it up

Pain
i go through each and everyday knowing there is no one i can talk to
ur truely blessed if u got a bestfriend that u can call ur sister or brother. u don't knoe how much pain it is to go through each day not being able to trust someone or let them knoe what ur going through.
It leaves u being hard core. surface is rough, edges are sharp.

Pain

SUMMER IS OVER AND I'M NOT GOING TAH BE ON HERE AS MUCH AS I WAS BECAUSE I'M BUSY AND HAVE OTHER STUFF TO HANDLE AND GET DONE FIRST SO THOSE WHO ADD ME IF I DON'T ADD U FOR A WHILE DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL. I WILL ADD U BAC WHEN I CAN OR GET ON. IF I DON'T IT COULD BE THAT I WENT TO ANOTHER PAGE AND FORGOT TO CLICK YA PROFILE S/N

NUTTHIN PERSONALL CUZ IDUNNO ANY OF YA'LL -NO RUDE REMARKS HAVE BEEN SAID TO THIS POINT SO I DON'T GOT NUTTHIN AGAINST ANY OF YA

BUT ANYWAYS TO THOSE WHO ADD ME TO THEIR FRIENDS LIST

You wanted her to trust you...she did
a very hard thing to do

you do not see the tears she cries
or the hurt she buries deep inside
when she steps out that door she's brave
hears the whispers and sees the glances
everyday the same

the cold stares that seem to be burning through her body
you can not enter and exit when u like
her heart is not a lobby

you befriended her wit all the promises u made
still does not make up for the minimum u gave

her heart no longer beats fast for u
instead at slower pace
once she comes in contact wit such familiar face

So i was lookin at this post i had and i came across a poem i wrote a while ago and it seems like such a long time ago when realli it wasn't. So here's another one of my poems from bak a couple months ago

"So Hard"
Its hard because I still love you
And though I know I have to move on
I can’t help but think about us
I don’t want to continue from break-up to make-up
It kills me inside though were still friends
You said the relationship just wouldn’t work
Never being able to see each other
I understand but I’m still not over you

PRECIATE THE READERS AND REVIEWERS OF MY STORIIES AND POEMS
JUST LETTING ME DO ME AIN'T DAT MANY PPL DO THAT ANY MORE SO THANK YA'LL & LEMME KNOE WHAT CHA REALLY THINK OF THEM. IIGHT

SO I STARTED A NEW STORII CALLED *THE YOUNG DO WEEP* TALKIN BOUT SITUATIONS YOUNG PEOPLE GO THROUGH SO YA SHOULD CHECK IT OUT [REAL TALK]

http://www.chrisbrownworld.com/node/58698

http://chrisbrownfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=3355

THERE GO THE LINK AND LEMME KNOE WHAT CHA'LL THINK

East Coast is tha side

N.Y. all day just to throw dat up there (lol)

i luv east coast but I GOT LOVE FOR WEST COAST MIDWEST SOUTHSIDE

U KNOE JUSS WHEREEVER U FROM. IT REALLI DUN MATTER JUST WHERE U GOING SO IT iS WUT IT IS!