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I often hear it described as something so sweet.
Sugarcoated with pieces left under the surface,
that many rather not reminisce,
but forget and defeat.
Sounding so perfect...love.
Several hearts left broken,
with scars settled deep within its surface
that they feel so incredibly real.
As if it were slowly and physically deteriorating
a significant organ of life.
The tears, the sadness, anywhere from light to deep sleep,
and sorrow filled eyes,
the hurt and pain from silent to agonized cries.
Resurfaced just as quickly, as it begins to subside.
Repeatedly given another chance.
its been a while since the last poem i wrote and i was thinking about writing another so i wrote this one. right now to me it seemsz a little rough around the edges like somethings missing or somethings too much? idk i'm not sure but let me know what you guysz think. if you know how to make the font italic, and add color please let me know =]
She’s the victim,
one of many, in this case.
Carrying her make- up case
everywhere she goes, trying to hide her flaws.
Correct where she thought her parents had wronged…
in making her
Though it’d take a lot to break her
i think you're different
and i hope i'm not wrong.
its beyond physical attraction...
you seem to be genuine.
not the type to run playa lines.
or tha type that all he aims for,
is the one thing on his mind.
goofy but shy.
yet that makes me smile.
i don't get "bad feelings" about you.
seem like the good boy.
with a silent swaggeR
but its hard not to notiCe,
your attitude is quite polite.
i'll glance at you from across the room.
indeed that i will do.
you're eyes are beautiful,
but its hard to look into them.
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